I gave the game a 4 star review for the quick fap play appeal it is, and the latest update I just got around to playing didn't disappoint, but note to dev:
The completely over-the-top "make my MC super alpha!!!" attempt to cater the small but very vocal crowd who actually get off of to that unbelievable level stuff just leads down a road to a presented game story that is always more drivel then actual substance. Every. Single. Time
And if you can't, for example, resist the perception that having all our adult without kids LIs mentally comment on how they are having a raw dick enter their vagina for the first time makes for a great story...at least make the few lines of text immediately afterwards match up instead of doubling doing down on the drivel by having them comment how much deeper your dick is going in then her boyfriend's.
Sometimes I think it's a shame there wasn't at least some type of google translate for some of these devs to get them past that 13 year writing mentality roadblock in regards to sex. We'd have so many more better games to play out there
The completely over-the-top "make my MC super alpha!!!" attempt to cater the small but very vocal crowd who actually get off of to that unbelievable level stuff just leads down a road to a presented game story that is always more drivel then actual substance. Every. Single. Time
And if you can't, for example, resist the perception that having all our adult without kids LIs mentally comment on how they are having a raw dick enter their vagina for the first time makes for a great story...at least make the few lines of text immediately afterwards match up instead of doubling doing down on the drivel by having them comment how much deeper your dick is going in then her boyfriend's.
Sometimes I think it's a shame there wasn't at least some type of google translate for some of these devs to get them past that 13 year writing mentality roadblock in regards to sex. We'd have so many more better games to play out there
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