playb0y44 So mr Dev, I have a question, actually a couple...
Firstly is this really the MC's wife? Doesn't seem like it. Minimal explanation as to why their sex life is nearly non-existent at the start. Ok I get there is mystery, but it seems very poorly done at the start.
Secondly 2 days later she gets on a plane and flies who knows where with nothing more than a "I have to go out the city to take care of some business. So I want you to drop me off at the airport." Like really no more explanation? No where you going, how long, when will you be back? She feels completely secondary and utterly trivial so far. I mean the sister feels like she's more important the wife. If she's meant to be trivial why not make her like properly with some issue between them justifying the distance.
I'm trying hard to like this game and failing at every turn.
Another bone, and sorry I didn't mean it to be a rant/ hack job but why, oh why give the choice to cum inside/outside on Debra at the start if it's going to lock shit out? Not everyone likes creampies or pregnancy stuff. Having to giving the choice for two different kinkss (I like seeing her covered, not inside) and then punishing for the wrong one is just low and sleazy. To make it even worse Debra is immediately worried her mother heard you fuck when it didn't happen.
Sorry Debra that are you retarded and worried about something we couldn't do because apparently covering you in cum doens't make you loving or lusty enough to want to fuck later, but hey good to know filling you up means you're ready to go anytime damn the consequences. But hey at lest as some random woman we saved you get more points, story and concern from the mc than his wife and mother of his children, so good on you.