This is a long post, not a rant, not getting upset in any way, just laughing at how some things develop and then asking a minor question.
SO on that note, feel free to enjoy this, and don't freak out/ get defensive/ lose your shiit/ or take your bad day out on this post, it's here for entertainment purposes only.
I played this months ago and vaguely remember some key points from the renders provided on the OP, still I find the opening dialog of the story a tad confusing.
The group has been roommates and childhood best friends with their Landlord/lady since they were children, WHO pays their rent, who looks after them while they are renting these rooms from the strict lands?
Lol I am just fcking with you, we all know it is to get it by Patreon and their rules/
I don't mind the rule of no incest, since I am not a big fan of it myself, BUT on this page is to be expected, so there could be a good idea to make a name change app so it is not the traditional Landlady one, Or just an incest patch.
Oh now I just met a woman's..."Tenant-in-law" who should really be her "Landlady-In-Law" I suppose, this is getting hilariously ridiculous, AND I don't see them using their names much>
I KNOW it can get pretty confusing so I prepared a scenario where naturally nobody uses anyone's name, JUST their title.
(Ahem) "Oh hello landlady, I am looking for roommate, no not that roommate, my roommate, oh hello roommate, where is my roommate, I asked landlady where my roommate is and she told me that my roommate is here, so I am talking to you roommate, looking for roommate, and my childhood-best-friend,
AND My nextdoor-neighbors-rommates-childhood-bestfriends-bestfriends-cousins-roommates-childhood-bestfriend!"
Lol that was a blast typing out.
NOW then, my dialog issue is this:
The MC has been in love with his next-door NEIGHBOR since she moved into that house...next door, they have been thick as thieves year after year, been a couple since day one, with both sets of their PARENTS knowing and seeing it all.
SO when they are making out in his room, the LANDLORD busts in and loses his SHIIT!
The best part is he calls the MC...lol....an ABOMINATION...for making out...with his LONG TERM girlfriend...not the neighbors dog, not another boy (who knows the LANDLORD might be a homophobe), not a stray cat, HELL not even an alien...so what makes him an abomination, why was that written as such??
Edit: it would also be great if someone could donate their time to edit the dialog into, let's say, proper-sounding English.