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VN Ren'Py Abandoned Uncontrollable [v0.13] [DeepCarbonLabs]

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ChippyP

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Thanks for the comment. I will try to improve, it's also probably because I am not a native English speaker so it's hard sometimes but will definitely try better.
Yeah, English isn't exactly the most friendly language to learn and understand even when you're a native speaker. For a second/third/whatever language, you've done pretty well, and this is gonna be a great project to improve on what you do know. Soon you'll be as confused and angry about the English language and its rules as I am.
 
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224488

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Question: who are the inspirations of the faces of the female characters? The older sister reminds me Liv Tyler, and the mom and the aunt, Jennefer of "The Witcher III".
 

MistahDeep

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My game does not signal fast and nonsensical sex from the start. The way it's going right now is just part of the storyline I created. If you think my process is too slow, it is because I do have a job and my laptop is outdated. Yes I use a laptop with a freakin gtx 970. This is literally just a pastime for me. I could just drop this any second if I want to, like for real. I just want to enjoy making these things, you know? Of course, I understand that different people have different tastes but saying I am milking it, Seriously? I just started doing this, and I am not even earning that much from this. Judging from what I am getting from this, people would say that this is just a waste of time for me, lol. But for now, I enjoy it so.... I will try to improve this (I am saying this like I am talking to my boss or something, lol), and hopefully, it does get better. Thanks for your comment
 

MistahDeep

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Question: who are the inspirations of the faces of the female characters? The older sister reminds me Liv Tyler, and the mom and the aunt, Jennefer of "The Witcher III".
You pretty much got it :) . Sophia is from Megan Fox and Nora is Ava addams. I do have like very original models but I just thought to start with these as I thought they are more popular. Plus the fact that they are beautiful. oh and Sarah is Billy Eilish lol
 
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224488

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You pretty much got it :) . Sophia is from Megan Fox and Nora is Ava addams. I do have like very original models but I just thought to start with these as I thought they are more popular. Plus the fact that they are beautiful. oh and Sarah is Billy Eilish lol
Ava Addams, yeah. I saw the resemblance when I was playing, but I could not remember the name :LOL: Brilliant. I like that idea of inspiring the characters in real people (or other brilliant characters, as Jennefer)
 

Zongor

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Great game so far...story and characters are nicely meshing together. Great renders too, and agree with comments that mature women are very sexy and you shouldnt be scared to add in wrinkles and sag here and there. Only other comment I have is any chance that one or more of those ladies could be sexy smokers as well? ;)
 

Hrk19

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You pretty much got it :) . Sophia is from Megan Fox and Nora is Ava addams. I do have like very original models but I just thought to start with these as I thought they are more popular. Plus the fact that they are beautiful. oh and Sarah is Billy Eilish lol
Oh so she is Billie Ellish
 
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Ariann

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I like it so far. I hope we have the next update real soon. Keep up the good work, dear (y)(y)(y)
 

Skargaroth

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Looks like it's going to be an interesting one. Wonder how the MC will resolve the issues with his lil sis.
 

Lion sB4

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Recently, there has been a rise in teenage violence and crime, and the public is not happy about it. Massive protests have ensued; urging the government to do something because it seems like these violent and uncontrollable youths can just do whatever they want with little to no consequences for their actions.
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Thread Updated: 2021-09-04
Release Date: 2021-09-04
Developer: DeepCarbonLabz
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Version: 0.4 Public
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac
Language: English
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CrisRody

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That scene teaching gym stuff to Sophia was on a porn movie dumb level

When Nora and Eva talk in the pool, Nora says "But Damian has met Sophia, though." instead of picking the MC name player choose.

Also, the only nudity in the game was a dick hanging from MC lol
 
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MistahDeep

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That scene teaching gym stuff to Sophia was on a porn movie dumb level

When Nora and Eva talk in the pool, Nora says "But Damian has met Sophia, though." instead of picking the MC name player choose.

Also, the only nudity in the game was a dick hanging from MC lol
Dammit one slipped through ahahah. I tried to make sure that I didn't typed the name Damian haha. I just checked and your right, I missed one silly me. Thanks for pointing that out :)
 

Zolkane

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I really don't like comments like these as my game does not signal fast and nonsensical sex from the start anyway. The way it's going right now is just part of the storyline I created. If you think my process is too slow, it is because I do have a job and my laptop is outdated. Yes I use a laptop with a freakin gtx 970. This is literally just a pastime for me. I could just drop this any second if I want to, like for real. I just want to enjoy making these things, you know? Of course, I understand that different people have different tastes but saying I am milking it, Seriously? I just started doing this, and I am not even earning that much from this. Judging from what I am getting from this, people would say that this is just a waste of time for me, lol. But for now, I enjoy it so.... I will try to improve this (I am saying this like I am talking to my boss or something, lol), and hopefully, it does get better. Thanks for your comment
lol you are quite fast for this day even. I like your paste
 

_R_

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Good start for me. Did hate that I didn't get to see mom's revealing bikini. Hope mom gets more scenes soon. Hope the son can get her to loosen up soon. Maybe get her back into modeling in sexy clothes and poses to earn some extra money by doing something online. Maybe the two sexy milfs working together. Hot!!
You can see it if no suspicious point
 

Ozygator

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Just a minor critique, the dialogue feels stiff. It's hard to quantify, because it's really just a lot of minor things which when combined stick out as unusual. One specific example that comes to mind is early on when Mary says "we females like to get complimented." Even though nothing is wrong grammatically with the statement, people don't tend to talk that way in casual conversation, so it ends up reading kind of strange. A good habit to get into when you're writing is reading everything out loud, and then listening to it read back to you. And if you've got some basic audio recording software, you can kill two birds with one stone.
Agreed. Also, FFS, STOP with the "full first & last name" references. No one in my family uses my full name unless I was in trouble as as kid, yet in the story so far it's been used at least a dozen times and that's just in the initial dialogue.

Is the 'family' trying very hard to prove it's a family, or what? Real families don't use surnames among themselves unless it's usually a parent scolding a child.
 
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