VN Ren'Py Abandoned Uncontrollable [v0.13] [DeepCarbonLabs]

[spellbreaker]

this new "update" isn't even worth the download.

 

[djbagman321]

this new "update" isn't even worth the download.

whats new my boy

 

[jan_pawian]

Nice art, and good slow burn story.
But dev should imho add some wrinkles to the older characters and maybe bit more saggy look tits. Older characters shouldn't look like teens.

 

[HerbertIronsides]

0.4 and still zero content wow.

 

[BarbarrossaNA]

I'm sure the content will come.. slow burns aren't necessarily a bad thing. An active DEV and a game with potential.. count me in. Keep it rolling DeepCarbonLabz

 

[BeingADikDik]

Not a fan of Sophie and her mom. As characters they seem unnecessary, redundant archetypes.

The dialogue was also somewhat of a step down in this update. This was never Shakespeare, but the art quality surpasses the plot and storytelling here by a fair bit.

 

[Maou25]

So Nora is Ava Addams?

 

[fank70]

Boring.

 

[anon280]

changelog

 

[Problem X]

milf, big tits, big ass, animated, sandbox, good renders, if all developers think like that
great game

 

[Kukipett]

Wow it looks promizing !! there was a bit much not so interresting chat with a dude and at a certain moment i feared that we would get the classic school setting with stupid bullies and fights.
I hope we will never get to that crap.
The girls look so good especially Nora, my god the pool scene got me all hard, i'm gonna love that woman for sure and her daughter too maybe.
I think i will love the slow burn of the development of my relations with mom and big sister.
This game is very good at showing the expressions and feelings, it looks natural and i guess the slow burn will not be exagerated lasting for years with protagonists full of culpability and hypocrisy.
I hope it will take the way of a natural development of feelings going each time a bit further without drama.

 

[MistahDeep]

Hey, guys how's it goin? how do I get those signature picture/banner things? I would like one for this project of mine

 

[punisher2099]

Are her eyebrows painted on?

 

[MistahDeep]

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Are her eyebrows painted on?

hmm, I'm not sure, but I certainly didn't edit paint her eyebrows though. It does not look that bothersome to me though, of course I know people have different views. Thanks for the comment.

is there a walkthrough or choices don't really matter?

There is no walkthrough yet as of right now

Nice art, and good slow burn story.
But dev should imho add some wrinkles to the older characters and maybe bit more saggy look tits. Older characters shouldn't look like teens.

I'll keep that in mind, thanks for the comment

nothing, shame on this.

There will be guys as this is a porn game after all.

changelog

haha, more erotic stuff will come guys

 

[224488]

I'll keep that in mind, thanks for the comment

Yes. A mature female character doesn´t need the body of Marilyn Monroe (big breast and butt, ultra slim waist) or the body of a 25 y.o. top model to be attractive, in spite of what most of the devs think. Natural mature bodies are attractive too, and more realistic. A 3D model of a woman in his 30+ or 40+ can be attractive with a bit of tummy and hips, tits a bit saggy and natural ones, not huge melons of silicone like a porn star, and some wrinkles, IMO:

 

[Hans456]

Whenever someone describes a game as a "slow burn", i get flashbacks to another game on this site.

Is it a story where we could expect to see some real developments in the remainder of the year (doesnt have to be sex specifically), or is it one of those i should return to when i retire in 50 years.

 

[Hrk19]

well, this was a nice, update, also like that the girls mom does look her age.
Also, seeing as how quick the updates are, dont gotta wait ages to get to the good stuff

 

[ChippyP]

Just a minor critique, the dialogue feels stiff. It's hard to quantify, because it's really just a lot of minor things which when combined stick out as unusual. One specific example that comes to mind is early on when Mary says "we females like to get complimented." Even though nothing is wrong grammatically with the statement, people don't tend to talk that way in casual conversation, so it ends up reading kind of strange. A good habit to get into when you're writing is reading everything out loud, and then listening to it read back to you. And if you've got some basic audio recording software, you can kill two birds with one stone.

 

[MrPerson28475]

Just a minor critique, the dialogue feels stiff. It's hard to quantify, because it's really just a lot of minor things which when combined stick out as unusual. One specific example that comes to mind is early on when Mary says "we females like to get complimented." Even though nothing is wrong grammatically with the statement, people don't tend to talk that way in casual conversation, so it ends up reading kind of strange. A good habit to get into when you're writing is reading everything out loud, and then listening to it read back to you. And if you've got some basic audio recording software, you can kill two birds with one stone.

Recording... What if you do not like the sound of your own voice
It is a good Idea though.

 

[MistahDeep]

Just a minor critique, the dialogue feels stiff. It's hard to quantify, because it's really just a lot of minor things which when combined stick out as unusual. One specific example that comes to mind is early on when Mary says "we females like to get complimented." Even though nothing is wrong grammatically with the statement, people don't tend to talk that way in casual conversation, so it ends up reading kind of strange. A good habit to get into when you're writing is reading everything out loud, and then listening to it read back to you. And if you've got some basic audio recording software, you can kill two birds with one stone.

Thanks for the comment. I will try to improve, it's also probably because I am not a native English speaker so it's hard sometimes but will definitely try better.