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whats new my boythis new "update" isn't even worth the download.
whats new my boythis new "update" isn't even worth the download.
hmm, I'm not sure, but I certainly didn't edit paint her eyebrows though. It does not look that bothersome to me though, of course I know people have different views. Thanks for the comment.View attachment 1388875
Are her eyebrows painted on?
There is no walkthrough yet as of right nowis there a walkthrough or choices don't really matter?
I'll keep that in mind, thanks for the commentNice art, and good slow burn story.
But dev should imho add some wrinkles to the older characters and maybe bit more saggy look tits. Older characters shouldn't look like teens.
There will be guys as this is a porn game after all.nothing, shame on this.
haha, more erotic stuff will come guyschangelog
Yes. A mature female character doesn´t need the body of Marilyn Monroe (big breast and butt, ultra slim waist) or the body of a 25 y.o. top model to be attractive, in spite of what most of the devs think. Natural mature bodies are attractive too, and more realistic. A 3D model of a woman in his 30+ or 40+ can be attractive with a bit of tummy and hips, tits a bit saggy and natural ones, not huge melons of silicone like a porn star, and some wrinkles, IMO:I'll keep that in mind, thanks for the comment
Recording... What if you do not like the sound of your own voiceJust a minor critique, the dialogue feels stiff. It's hard to quantify, because it's really just a lot of minor things which when combined stick out as unusual. One specific example that comes to mind is early on when Mary says "we females like to get complimented." Even though nothing is wrong grammatically with the statement, people don't tend to talk that way in casual conversation, so it ends up reading kind of strange. A good habit to get into when you're writing is reading everything out loud, and then listening to it read back to you. And if you've got some basic audio recording software, you can kill two birds with one stone.
Thanks for the comment. I will try to improve, it's also probably because I am not a native English speaker so it's hard sometimes but will definitely try better.Just a minor critique, the dialogue feels stiff. It's hard to quantify, because it's really just a lot of minor things which when combined stick out as unusual. One specific example that comes to mind is early on when Mary says "we females like to get complimented." Even though nothing is wrong grammatically with the statement, people don't tend to talk that way in casual conversation, so it ends up reading kind of strange. A good habit to get into when you're writing is reading everything out loud, and then listening to it read back to you. And if you've got some basic audio recording software, you can kill two birds with one stone.