VN Ren'Py Abandoned Underdog [v1.0] [OAsmodeus70]

[punisher2099]

Christ Alive there is not one single likable character in this at all. The dialogue is fucking atrocious, the mcs family are clueless idiots and treat mc as an insignificant afterthought and all the male characters talk like they should be registered as sex offenders. Why the hell was the old man just barging into every room uninvited?

Maybe this dev could reach out to other devs for some advice or something because this needs a lot of work. Unless it's exactly how they want it cause i'm sure this will have fans here.

 

[v1900]

Christ Alive there is not one single likable character in this at all. The dialogue is fucking atrocious, the mcs family are clueless idiots and treat mc as an insignificant afterthought and all the male characters talk like they should be registered as sex offenders. Why the hell was the old man just barging into every room uninvited?

Maybe this dev could reach out to other devs for some advice or something because this needs a lot of work. Unless it's exactly how they want it cause i'm sure this will have fans here.

So... normal Indian love life?



Shit reached my reaction limit for the day.

 

[nn2017]

Good

 

[Ursus4321]

game clearly focused on ntr. If you don't like it, you spend all your time looking for the option that avoids it and you get zero content and it's super short. I thought I saw he had a harem somewhere, which would make no sense in this game. Women get fucked by anyone right away and the game becomes really unbearable if you don't play ntr.
lucky for the dev but it's a big no for me

 

[dumbass55]

So we know the NTR is optional. But is the heroines wearing glasses optional?

 

[bobdillan]

harem route.. with unavoidable NTR...

Just saying dude... you defeating the point of a harem route making that unavoidable... since people who will want it won't play :| might as well save yourself some dev time and not do a harem route at all.

 

[TammyVeriyan]

I always answer this way when there is nothing to say))))) Opinion? About what? Why is it really a green cucumber? Or the fact that the tomato is red??))) why, when they see the ntr tag, do they furiously write that the game is (shit)???and they are playing it in vain! You can just skip the game and continue looking for something further))) I just want to understand what motivates such writing

Maybe they have NTR tag in their real life.. so bitching about every NTR game here.. it's just easy to avoid such games and move to the games they like.. I hate lesbian and I'm not whining in every lesbian tag games..

 

[Chris2041]

Maybe they have NTR tag in their real life.. so bitching about every NTR game here.. it's just easy to avoid such games and move to the games they like.. I hate lesbian and I'm not whining in every lesbian tag games..

The problem is this game have harem and NTR tagg and it sais that you have the two paths to choose when in the state that this game is right now is a lie, you only have NTR path and the people that come to play this game for the harem path got angry simple as that
Here is a problem of communication for the dev he should have say from the beginning that right now the game have only NTR path
And in the future is going to add the other
Sorry for my bad english

 

[TammyVeriyan]

The problem is this game have harem and NTR tagg and it sais that you have the two paths to choose when in the state that this game is right now is a lie, you only have NTR path and the people that come to play this game for the harem path got angry simple as that
Here is a problem of communication for the dev he should have say from the beginning that right now the game have only NTR path
And in the future is going to add the other
Sorry for my bad english

Now I understand. Then it's deserve the criticism..

 

[Chris2041]

Now I understand. Then it's deserve the criticism..

Yeah is like
Im going to make a pizza half bacon half pineapple
Then the people say I want to taste the bacon part, but when I give to them the pizza to eat it only have pineapple.
The people who love pineapple is going to be happy but the people that doesn't like pineapple that normally is the mayority is going to be angry whit me whit all the reason

 

[clowns234]

The problem is this game have harem and NTR tagg and it sais that you have the two paths to choose when in the state that this game is right now is a lie, you only have NTR path and the people that come to play this game for the harem path got angry simple as that
Here is a problem of communication for the dev he should have say from the beginning that right now the game have only NTR path
And in the future is going to add the other
Sorry for my bad english

If you play the character as 'not giving a shit' about what happens to his family (an option in this game), do you think that is NTR? From what I have played, bad endings happen when the MC doesn't give a shit. When he tries to stop it, he does.

People who want only harem tend to see every female in the game as a love interest and get upset if those females aren't exclusive to the MC.
"The neighbor lady is getting fucked next door by her husband. OMG! NTR!"
If you are easily offended and you see NTR and harem together, maybe it's best if you pass on the game - which is a comment the Dev made early on in the comments.

 

[Soggy Bread]

Wherever the fuck I go these fucking NTR DISCUSSIONS will be there

 

[BlasKyau]

Okay, guys. I write this just to be clear. This is my first time creating a visual novel and posting it on F95. I can confidently say that this isn't a good first-time experience. I am just a human, there are so many things that I haven't known yet. Honestly, at the end of this game, I was planning to have Hiro as a king that was surrounded by females. However, I do not want to make the way to be king so simple. So, I decided to add some blackmailing and, as you said, NTR stuff.

Please accept my apologies for mentioning that this game includes a 'Harem's route or creating Harem is possible,' which may have caused some of you to be confused. From now on, I will say that in this game if you choose the correct choices, Hiro, our protagonist, will be surrounded by females characters and will have complete control over them as a result of the game. This route can be called whatever you choose.

There will surely be NTR scenes in this game. Even though they are avoidable, I would say that they are not. So, if anyone isn't ready for this unavoidable NTR game and some heart-breaking content or doesn't like it, you can simply ignore it without informing me or other people about what you are going to do.

Thank you so much for your precious time.

Making a harem game with inevitable NTR is a bad move. Sorry, but I don't think fans of the harem genre will play it. For my part, I have already included it in my ignore list.

 

[clowns234]

Making a harem game with inevitable NTR is a bad move. Sorry, but I don't think fans of the harem genre will play it. For my part, I have already included it in my ignore list.

I agree with your sentiment. I could never enjoy a game if I thought that at any moment, something I don't want to see is about to happen.

 

[DedL0l]

Nice art and that one girl looks very similar to that one champion from League of Legends. Oh well

and to the dev, its not brain-damaged. Its her mind that is broke, if the brain is damaged she wouldn't be functioning anymore

 

[the_fluff]

I'm going to be wathcing this games progress and probably play after a few updates since it doesn't seem to have the content I like right now.

To the Dev, I will say I've read your comments and the problme with them is that they're vague, confusing, passive aggressive, and feel like you're trying to avoid the questions which might have something to do with you being frustrated by the negative comments which I understand can ruin your mood. These comments aren'treallyy helping in coming across how you want which might also be because you're also not sure where the story is going which is also fine.

I would take a few days or maybe a week to get yourself together look back at the comments and your comments and probably rework the synopsis because with the synopsis and your comments I'm just more confused about the game you're making.

Like you alrady adressed, you may not be making a harem path and I think what annoys people more than whether there is or isn't NTR or if it's avoidable is when a game is mistagged I think that probably annoys people most.

But yeah just try your best and do you bro at the end of the day. Like I said I will be watching the games progress and if it's something I like I'll keep playing it if not then I'll stop and wish you luck with your game.

 

[Kazerou]

Port to Android pls

 

[inzeed]

Nice game keep going bro

 

[sokserey]

love it

 

[MiYooSa]

Question: Will happosai target hiro's girlfriend Mia as well? I feel like if hiro brings her to the house happosai will want to fuck her too...