VN Ren'Py Abandoned Underdog [v1.0] [OAsmodeus70]

[BTLD]

Okay, guys. I write this just to be clear. This is my first time creating a visual novel and posting it on F95. I can confidently say that this isn't a good first-time experience. I am just a human, there are so many things that I haven't known yet. Honestly, at the end of this game, I was planning to have Hiro as a king that was surrounded by females. However, I do not want to make the way to be king so simple. So, I decided to add some blackmailing and, as you said, NTR stuff.

Please accept my apologies for mentioning that this game includes a 'Harem's route or creating Harem is possible,' which may have caused some of you to be confused. From now on, I will say that in this game if you choose the correct choices, Hiro, our protagonist, will be surrounded by females characters and will have complete control over them as a result of the game. This route can be called whatever you choose.

There will surely be NTR scenes in this game. Even though they are avoidable, I would say that they are not. So, if anyone isn't ready for this unavoidable NTR game and some heart-breaking content or doesn't like it, you can simply ignore it without informing me or other people about what you are going to do.

Thank you so much for your precious time.

so wait...let me get this straight...I seriously want to understand...
on THE HAREM PATH ....there will be unavoidable NTR?
EDIT : would be nice if dev actually answers.

 

[disimulated]

I'm out of likes unfortunatelly...cause both of these statements are on the mark/spot.

Totally off-topic, but can you really run out of likes?

 

[BTLD]

Totally off-topic, but can you really run out of likes?

yea, you have a limited amount each day

 

[OAsmodeus7O]

so wait...let me get this straight...I seriously want to understand...
on THE HAREM PATH ....there will be unavoidable NTR?

According to what I have written, there is no such thing called 'THE HAREM PATH' from me. To answer the question, I'll state that except for Hiro, I'm planning to make decisions to ensure that no female characters will be raped, screwed, or otherwise harmed. However, there will also be choices that will completely lead players to a different way.

 

[BTLD]

According to what I have written, there is no such thing called 'THE HAREM PATH' from me. To answer the question, I'll state that except for Hiro, I'm planning to make decisions to ensure that no female characters will be raped, screwed, or otherwise harmed. However, there will also be choices that will completely lead players to a different way.

okay...let me ask you this then
On the NO-NTR path ..the path where NTR should not happen because you made all the correct choices and girls should not sleep with anyone else than MC....
Is NTR still happening?
Or this path that I'm saying...doesn't exist ?

 

[Saomen]

Someone to make an android version please ?

 

[disimulated]

Well with one big bad exception....... the bad guy isnt fucking the princess...

You're right. For some totally realistic reason, in games people with no morals or sense of social decency who take people hostage never take advantage of all that delicious, helpless femininity to give themselves pleasure and relish the power they have over their victims.

Seriously though, my example does break down there.

 

[OAsmodeus7O]

okay...let me ask you this then
On the NO-NTR path ..the path where NTR should not happen because you made all the correct choices and girls should not sleep with anyone else than MC....
Is NTR still happening?
Or this path that I'm saying...doesn't exist ?

As I said, I am not sure what NTR means. So, I cannot answer it. What I can do is to tell you that there will surely be a path where other male characters will not be able to assault the female characters. Nonetheless, they can do something like trying to peep, flirt, rape the female characters which is Hiro's job to protect them. But if something like peeping, flirting, trying to rape is an NTR patch. Then, the patch that has no NTR hasn't existed yet. My suggestion is if you are not into NTR and/or not ready to accidentally confront some heart-breaking scene, you should not play this. Thank you so much for your time.

 

[SeveredRealms]

Hmm.. That's right. Some parts about the servant didn't make any sense and some of Hiro's was ignored that's why it's less of a "go from loser to harem king" and more of a "prevent NTR" game. Actually, I am planning to do the 'go from loser to harem' king" part in the next update. I admit that this first version relied too heavily on the "prevent NTR". Thank you so much for your comments. I really appreciate it. I will be working on it. Please do not hesitate to give more suggestions. I would be grateful.

According to what I have written, there is no such thing called 'THE HAREM PATH' from me. To answer the question, I'll state that except for Hiro, I'm planning to make decisions to ensure that no female characters will be raped, screwed, or otherwise harmed. However, there will also be choices that will completely lead players to a different way.

Errrr what? If it quacks like a duck walks like a duck it sure as hell aint a duck in this thread...
The Animal rights protection board makes movie producers say the same thing to cover their asses...

 

[delacroix2]

Okay, guys. I write this just to be clear. This is my first time creating a visual novel and posting it on F95. I can confidently say that this isn't a good first-time experience. I am just a human, there are so many things that I haven't known yet. Honestly, at the end of this game, I was planning to have Hiro as a king that was surrounded by females. However, I do not want to make the way to be king so simple. So, I decided to add some blackmailing and, as you said, NTR stuff.

Please accept my apologies for mentioning that this game includes a 'Harem's route or creating Harem is possible,' which may have caused some of you to be confused. From now on, I will say that in this game if you choose the correct choices, Hiro, our protagonist, will be surrounded by females characters and will have complete control over them as a result of the game. This route can be called whatever you choose.

There will surely be NTR scenes in this game. Even though they are avoidable, I would say that they are not. So, if anyone isn't ready for this unavoidable NTR game and some heart-breaking content or doesn't like it, you can simply ignore it without informing me or other people about what you are going to do.

Thank you so much for your precious time.

"This route can be called whatever you choose"

Harem no Harem, semiHarem, HareNtr, unavoidableNoHarem, Shuumatsu no harem

 

[OAsmodeus7O]

Errrr what? If it quacks like a duck walks like a duck it sure as hell aint a duck in this thread...
The Animal rights protection board makes movie producers say the same thing to cover their asses...
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I kindly ask you to double-check the time of that comment. Do you know that people do not have to stick with the same ideas all the time? Things can be changed.

 

[SeveredRealms]

I kindly ask you to double-check the time of that comment. Do you know that people do not have to stick with the same ideas all the time? Things can be changed.

Ohhh shit your right..... even my air headed daughter takes less then 2 hours to not make up her mind. my god what would I do if it took her 2.5 hours..... If only i could facepalm my own posts..... could someone please do that for me cause i am such a idiot for making it.

 

[LazyKeks]

As I said, I am not sure what NTR means.

I'll try to make it a little clear (I'm not sure what will work out).
Ntr in this context is when it is not the MC that fucks LI or potential LI (LI is a love interest).
Interpretation variations can be different (Lesbians can be considered not NTR or NTR by subjective assessment and other similar options)
And accordingly, no-ntr route, this is when only the dick MC attacks LI. Petting can also be considered ntr (but here again subjective).
Hopefully this helps provide a clearer answer.

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[Chimba]

As I said, I am not sure what NTR means. So, I cannot answer it. What I can do is to tell you that there will surely be a path where other male characters will not be able to assault the female characters. Nonetheless, they can do something like trying to peep, flirt, rape the female characters which is Hiro's job to protect them. But if something like peeping, flirting, trying to rape is an NTR patch. Then, the patch that has no NTR hasn't existed yet. My suggestion is if you are not into NTR and/or not ready to accidentally confront some heart-breaking scene, you should not play this. Thank you so much for your time.

at this point I don't know if what you're saying is sarcasm or it's true hahaha, if you don't know what Ntr is, how can you make a path with Ntr?

If you are simply using sarcasm as a way to defend yourself from criticism, don't do it, it is easier to give an answer and avoid having pages with comments without any constructive criticism.

What many want to know (maybe I too) is just this, you say that there are 2 paths, one of the MC defending the family and the other just Ntr (so you already know what the Ntr is)

In the path that the Mc help his family and friends is the Ntr content going to be avoided? for example the Li being fuck, touched, blackmail, rape by other characters? that is to say, the mc can prevent all that from happening?

 

[BTLD]

at this point I don't know if what you're saying is sarcasm or it's true hahaha, if you don't know what Ntr is, how can you make a path with Ntr?

If you are simply using sarcasm as a way to defend yourself from criticism, don't do it, it is easier to give an answer and avoid having pages with comments without any constructive criticism.

What many want to know (maybe I too) is just this, you say that there are 2 paths, one of the MC defending the family and the other just Ntr (so you already know what the Ntr is)

In the path that the Mc help his family and friends is the Ntr content going to be avoided? for example the Li being fuck, touched, blackmail, rape by other characters? that is to say, the mc can prevent all that from happening?

already asked that and got a ...vague answer...soemthing that leaves a lot of backdoors for shit to happen and then say "well I didn't say it won't happen or it will " and stuff like that...
That's a thing I dislike at new devs ... they don't know how to properly communicate...
If a dev wants to focus on NTR good for him and I hope he succedes with hiis plan
If a dev wants to focus on Harem again good for him and I hope he succedes...
All I want from a new dev that adds content such as NTR is clear answers...since I don't want to waste my time and his time playing and bitching and moaning about things that could have been avoided if the communication was much more clearer from the devs side.

As I said, I am not sure what NTR means. So, I cannot answer it. What I can do is to tell you that there will surely be a path where other male characters will not be able to assault the female characters. Nonetheless, they can do something like trying to peep, flirt, rape the female characters which is Hiro's job to protect them. But if something like peeping, flirting, trying to rape is an NTR patch. Then, the patch that has no NTR hasn't existed yet. My suggestion is if you are not into NTR and/or not ready to accidentally confront some heart-breaking scene, you should not play this. Thank you so much for your time.

 

[Soggy Bread]

Interested in the description
If the ntr is avoidable(not the oh you can't see it but its actually happening shit) then I would love the game
Neeeeed a game where you can have incest rape.

 

[EZ8lt]

First and foremost, I did say in the game that some events(scenes) are avoidable, but not all of them. I am not really sure what the 'scenes of the girls being ridden like the town bicycle' are. But in this version, you can keep female characters from being raped. 'How many of those harem games had the girls fucking other guys?' Hmm... I haven't played something like that yet. So, I am trying to create one.

I'll spare you from trying to look one, because you won't find them. The two closest that comes to this concept I can think of is Wicked Rogue and Last Sovereign. In Wicked Rogue, you'll play a brothel owner, where you can be nice to your girls, and care about them, but they aren't really love interests, well, because at the end of the day they are whores who are to make you the motherfucking money. TLS is a different breed. One of your harem members can have girl-on-futa and another can partake in an orgy where she gives a boobjob to an Orc. Those characters are succubi, who feeds off sexual energy, but ultimately they do this scenes to further your goals and bring you some advantage. There's a scene with a member having sex with another dude before she becomes a part of your harem, another one being used before you rescue her, and a choice of letting another being raped, but that's all before you become romantically entangled with them. But these games don't have this kind of content for the sake of having cuck stuff in it.

So the one you're trying to create doesn't really exist, because ultimately, they don't work. Either there are two completely separate routes, or there's only one.

 

[Uthuriel]

I can smell it already...
Can you smell it too?

The tag....

....good luck dev you gonna need it...

 

[Chimba]

Interested in the description
If the ntr is avoidable(not the oh you can't see it but its actually happening shit) then I would love the game
Neeeeed a game where you can have incest rape.

then you should play "Restore Her career" if you haven't, there you have incest and rape, don't expect to see romance because Mc has the mentality of a child and he is an asshole

 

[NaughtyScales]

As I said, I am not sure what NTR means. So, I cannot answer it. What I can do is to tell you that there will surely be a path where other male characters will not be able to assault the female characters. Nonetheless, they can do something like trying to peep, flirt, rape the female characters which is Hiro's job to protect them. But if something like peeping, flirting, trying to rape is an NTR patch. Then, the patch that has no NTR hasn't existed yet. My suggestion is if you are not into NTR and/or not ready to accidentally confront some heart-breaking scene, you should not play this. Thank you so much for your time.

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Aliases
NTR

This visual novel has scenes focused on Netorare (寝取られ). Netorare is more than a simple act of infidelity, but the fetishization of jealousy and other negative feelings commonly associated with it.

For a game to be classified as Netorare the following conditions must be met:

1. The protagonist's significant other, a very close friend, or in some cases, a close relative is stolen from him by someone seducing, coercing, blackmailing, outright raping them, or by using other techniques. It doesn't necessarily mean that they are literally stolen, but the negative feelings experienced by their significant other might make it seem so.

2. The one who loses their loved one almost always finds out about the situation and suffers from jealousy and the feeling of helplessness arisen from an inability to change anything. The one stealing the lover and/or the stolen loved one might rub it in by humiliating the loser in private or in public.

3. The trait does not apply if the character having sex with someone else does not have a close loving relationship with the protagonist, and if the protagonist does not experience jealousy and other negative feelings upon finding out about the act. In other words, the ties between the partners and their forcible separation is important to the netorare fetish. For example, an unrequited crush or a potential hero(ine) on a different route would not count for the purposes of this fetish.

4. The act of stealing must happen while the protagonist is in a relationship with the stolen significant other. Scenes of heroine's past relationships do not count as Netorare.

P.S. Just do your thing. Change thing only if you want improve something not bc bad feedback.