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Is the terrorist attack optional?
(As this thread exploded, i guess I will check this out).
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(As this thread exploded, i guess I will check this out).
I think you should start in the second update and no later than the third with the first mass-murder.Thank you so much for your comment. I really appreciate it. I will try my best to answer the questions.
- If 'this' referred to this version: Yes, that's correct. If 'this' means a plan of mine to develop the game: No.
- This question is pretty difficult for me to answer it effectively. This is my first time doing something like this. Well, what I'm thinking is that, in the end, if Hiro makes the right choices, he will be a big man of the house, surrounded by beautiful females, and there will be a lot of animations. On the other hand, making inappropriate choices will lead him to bad situations.
P.S. This plan can reasonably be changed.
- Hmm...what do you think? In order to do that, I will surely be cursed by some people.
Jokes aside, you need to make it possible for the player to actually prevent the old man from touching your LIs from the start if at some point there will be romance. The other option is to keep what you have in this first release and just use those characters as sex slaves when you eliminate the old man.
While you might be thinking of the harem as the historic "haram" in which the women were pretty much sex slaves. In the VN and erotic literature community it is generally understood as a romance with multiple women (the women being fully aware of it). While I would say that either approach is valid, it is important that you make it clear to the readers what is your intention.
If you tell your story as a "haram" while it will technically be a harem, it will be understood by most as just NTR. That is because you are just watching your loved ones getting fucked (like in the first release) and by the time you get them to your "haram" the player will just feel like they are tainted flesh to fuck and discard.
As an example. While I dislike NTR, I have played NTR games (they are good smut) because some developers warn you from the beginning and you kind of prepare yourself to not get attached to the characters.
As you already said, you are doing this as a hobby. It is best that you are upfront and honest as to what you want to do with your story. This will lessen the shitposting in your thread, it will make yours and the reader time more enjoyable and you will feel good about your hobby.
- Aug 10, 2021
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Hmm.. That's right. Some parts about the servant didn't make any sense and some of Hiro's was ignored that's why it's less of a "go from loser to harem king" and more of a "prevent NTR" game. Actually, I am planning to do the 'go from loser to harem' king" part in the next update. I admit that this first version relied too heavily on the "prevent NTR". Thank you so much for your comments. I really appreciate it. I will be working on it. Please do not hesitate to give more suggestions. I would be grateful.
I mean, have you heard the saying "idle hands are the devil's workshop"?I couldn't resistYou don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
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- Aug 10, 2021
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Wow! This is one of the good suggestions without cursing. Thank you so much for providing the information. I learned a lot from this. I am sure that this will surely be useful for the next stuff that I am trying to do.I think you should start in the second update and no later than the third with the first mass-murder.
Jokes aside, you need to make it possible for the player to actually prevent the old man from touching your LIs from the start if at some point there will be romance. The other option is to keep what you have in this first release and just use those characters as sex slaves when you eliminate the old man.
While you might be thinking of the harem as the historic "haram" in which the women were pretty much sex slaves. In the VN and erotic literature community it is generally understood as a romance with multiple women (the women being fully aware of it). While I would say that either approach is valid, it is important that you make it clear to the readers what is your intention.
If you tell your story as a "haram" while it will technically be a harem, it will be understood by most as just NTR. That is because you are just watching your loved ones getting fucked (like in the first release) and by the time you get them to your "haram" the player will just feel like they are tainted flesh to fuck and discard.
As an example. While I dislike NTR, I have played NTR games (they are good smut) because some developers warn you from the beginning and you kind of prepare yourself to not get attached to the characters.
As you already said, you are doing this as a hobby. It is best that you are upfront and honest as to what you want to do with your story. This will lessen the shitposting in your thread, it will make yours and the reader time more enjoyable and you will feel good about your hobby.
- Apr 10, 2020
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I think its best just to ignore this game. First we have a dev that either has no clue how to write a harem game kinda like another dev that recently created his ntr game claiming it had romance and both these devs are clueless or this guy is plain and simply leading us all on with no intention of being upfront. Claiming the mc will be a "harem king" yet starting off as full on ntr... its as back assward as you can get to start a game off. I guess I should take some cues from this guy and think and write like he does in my own game cause I must be doing it wrong....
- Sep 18, 2017
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I'm sure it happens. I may have done that once or twice in the past - by asking or suggesting, never demanding or threatening - but I intentionally don't do that now. Like I said in another post, I don't even look at games with a "harem" tag that don't also have an "ntr" tag anymore.
First and foremost, I want the dev to make the game they want to make. If they happen to make it with corruption or NTR, then I will happily play it. If they ask for feedback or suggestions, I will give it. I would never presume to TELL a dev what to do or DEMAND that they change the game.
Mostly what I do is encourage devs to keep doing what they're doing (corruption + NTR) and ignore the haters.
- Sep 18, 2017
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thats all good and all that but here we have a case of a dev saying one thing and delivering another thing...
that's one of the issues
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If there is another dick that is not harem, I think the most correct thing would be to call it "sharing" or "prostitution", do not take it wrong but at this point I do not know if what you said about playing games with harem is true hahaha
Here by Harem it is understood that the only dick involved is going to be that of Mc (and / or in some cases that of a trap or trans LI
)Good Luck Dev I think you will need it
Isn't that what happens in every RPG game ever made? In Zelda, what happens? The princess gets kidnapped by a big baddie, and then you spend 100 hours grinding experience and level-ups to get the payoff of beating the bad guy and rescuing the princess.
The bad guy starts with the good deal (princess in his palm), but gets dead at the end. The good guy starts off being bruised and finishes by being alive and powerful with a *very* grateful princess at his side.
This is a valid point. The NTR has to be somewhat believable to have impact - women that are too easy to lure into NTR are just as uninteresting to me as women who need no convincing to become faithful to a harem owner who by definition has no intention of being faithful to them in return.
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First and foremost, I did say in the game that some events(scenes) are avoidable, but not all of them. I am not really sure what the 'scenes of the girls being ridden like the town bicycle' are. But in this version, you can keep female characters from being raped. 'How many of those harem games had the girls fucking other guys?' Hmm... I haven't played something like that yet. So, I am trying to create one. To be honest, you can call the type of my game whatever you wish. This is just the first version. Things can be changed
Thank you for your candid, and truthful response.
I will take your adive.
(Pushes 'Ignore' button)
If I didn't want to be engaged in the content, I'd hang out on PornHub. Yes, I want my game to have some element of challenge and for choices to have consequences (good or bad).
- Apr 10, 2020
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Well with one big bad exception....... the bad guy isnt fucking the princess...
And in FPS games you're running around killing people, so the comment about mass murdering should be valid too, right? You're into NTR, good for you. Don't try to convince me I should be into it too, comparing apples and oranges. This is an adult VN, not an RPG. Do you see the big VN at the left of the game's title, right before Ren'py? Also if you really want to go through with that nonsensical comparison, I've never played an RPG where the main character does absolutely nothing or just run around with no purpose... That would be the most boring thing ever. Saving the princess is the end goal, but before that, there are quests with rewards. Also in the end you're saving the princess, not the town whore...
- Sep 18, 2017
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I'm out of likes unfortunatelly...cause both of these statements are on the mark/spot.
well said.
110% agree.
- Aug 10, 2021
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Okay, guys. I write this just to be clear. This is my first time creating a visual novel and posting it on F95. I can confidently say that this isn't a good first-time experience. I am just a human, there are so many things that I haven't known yet. Honestly, at the end of this game, I was planning to have Hiro as a king that was surrounded by females. However, I do not want to make the way to be king so simple. So, I decided to add some blackmailing and, as you said, NTR stuff.
Please accept my apologies for mentioning that this game includes a 'Harem's route or creating Harem is possible,' which may have caused some of you to be confused. From now on, I will say that in this game if you choose the correct choices, Hiro, our protagonist, will be surrounded by females characters and will have complete control over them as a result of the game. This route can be called whatever you choose.
There will surely be NTR scenes in this game. Even though they are avoidable, I would say that they are not. So, if anyone isn't ready for this unavoidable NTR game and some heart-breaking content or doesn't like it, you can simply ignore it without informing me or other people about what you are going to do.
Thank you so much for your precious time.
Please accept my apologies for mentioning that this game includes a 'Harem's route or creating Harem is possible,' which may have caused some of you to be confused. From now on, I will say that in this game if you choose the correct choices, Hiro, our protagonist, will be surrounded by females characters and will have complete control over them as a result of the game. This route can be called whatever you choose.
There will surely be NTR scenes in this game. Even though they are avoidable, I would say that they are not. So, if anyone isn't ready for this unavoidable NTR game and some heart-breaking content or doesn't like it, you can simply ignore it without informing me or other people about what you are going to do.
Thank you so much for your precious time.