VN Ren'Py Abandoned Underdog [v1.0] [OAsmodeus70]

[EZ8lt]

Shuumatsu no harem

Can't like it today but this comment is way underrated.

 

[MorganFreemansToe]

This is a line from the intro of the game.
"Many heartbreaking events will go place, such as corruption, NTR, cheating, blackmailing, raping, bisexuality and so on"

Man that bisexuality stuff makes me cry every time. Real heart-wrenching stuff

 

[sdawg1234]

this is probably the most confusing game I've seen and I haven't even played it. Overview and dev's explanation is all over the place.

 

[Chris2041]

after playing this i only ask is the old guy the MC or the boy because it doesnt seen to be the boy if you want to make a NTR game do it but dont say it have harem to because i play it for the harem path and theres nothing the only thing the mc gets is a a rape whit a girl nothing more and the game is only the MC trying to prevent the NTR all the time and doesnt get a reward
the next time if is only NTR and 0 harem put it in the description dont lie to the players it only going to generate hate and distruth whit your players
i hope the next update is going to be a lot of sex scenes whit the MC if not well theres nothing to me
Good luck whit your game

 

[clowns234]

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Aliases
NTR

This visual novel has scenes focused on Netorare (寝取られ). Netorare is more than a simple act of infidelity, but the fetishization of jealousy and other negative feelings commonly associated with it.

For a game to be classified as Netorare the following conditions must be met:

1. The protagonist's significant other, a very close friend, or in some cases, a close relative is stolen from him by someone seducing, coercing, blackmailing, outright raping them, or by using other techniques. It doesn't necessarily mean that they are literally stolen, but the negative feelings experienced by their significant other might make it seem so.

2. The one who loses their loved one almost always finds out about the situation and suffers from jealousy and the feeling of helplessness arisen from an inability to change anything. The one stealing the lover and/or the stolen loved one might rub it in by humiliating the loser in private or in public.

3. The trait does not apply if the character having sex with someone else does not have a close loving relationship with the protagonist, and if the protagonist does not experience jealousy and other negative feelings upon finding out about the act. In other words, the ties between the partners and their forcible separation is important to the netorare fetish. For example, an unrequited crush or a potential hero(ine) on a different route would not count for the purposes of this fetish.

4. The act of stealing must happen while the protagonist is in a relationship with the stolen significant other. Scenes of heroine's past relationships do not count as Netorare.

P.S. Just do your thing. Change thing only if you want improve something not bc bad feedback.

Someone with an explanation I can agree with - unlike so many other people I've come across in this forum.
Your mom or sister having sex with someone isn't NTR and doesn't make you a cuck - if you don't care.

 

[clowns234]

after playing this i only ask is the old guy the MC or the boy because it doesnt seen to be the boy if you want to make a NTR game do it but dont say it have harem to because i play it for the harem path and theres nothing the only thing the mc gets is a a rape whit a girl nothing more and the game is only the MC trying to prevent the NTR all the time and doesnt get a reward
the next time if is only NTR and 0 harem put it in the description dont lie to the players it only going to generate hate and distruth whit your players
i hope the next update is going to be a lot of sex scenes whit the MC if not well theres nothing to me
Good luck whit your game

I was also confused by who the MC was supposed to be. You are told it is Hiro but the action seems to play out as if you are the old guy.
I followed a few of the scenarios - saw no harem content yet.

 

[Batard_abyss46]

What do you even use to make these kinds of games?

 

[nut001001]

wow NTR and nice pic!!

 

[Warlan]

Should there not be a gay tag? MC can have sex with the old homeless man.

 

[jla15901]

Are we supposed to fap to this or is this like a cry for help?

Fap first, then think about helping.

 

[1tomadeira]

Seems fun, looking forward to try it out. But will it have an option to change the MC's name in the future?

 

[longjohngold]

This is pretty basic both in it's visuals and storytelling atm. I think NTR stuff works a lot better when there is a strong narrative with a build up and tension about what's going on.

I tried to play both a good and a bad route as it said that's kinda how it goes down. The bad route seems to be more flushed out atm, there's more content but also a bunch of gameovers. The good route had little sex just one blowjob, and sometimes it felt like there wasn't any great choices to get things to work out how you might like (at the end there seems like you've gotta leave the sister or gf with the friend with no way to leave with both of them, and if they leave without you then they just get gangraped).

There's some pretty wild stuff mentioned in the comments from what I skimmed through and it does seem fairly ambitious, so I hope the dev sticks with it and we'll see how dark and depraved things can get, as I feel I could look past a lot of its shortcomings if it ends up being a lot more extreme than most games.

 

[Liam the Handyman]

Having played the game I have concluded... MC is a cockblocker...

Also the secret to the game lies in the donut that somehow magically sticks to the narrtor's mouth...

The premise reminds me of Power Vacuum, which is another excellent cock blocking game

 

[Voron71rus]

How tired I am of reading that NTR is bad... Even if it can be disabled or avoided, people still complain about it. Don't you have anything to do? Where not to go (with the NTR tag) there are eternal disputes everywhere.... Stop writing nonsense. Do not play such games, so as not to clog the site. It looks like this:" You were invited to a holiday, and there's a bottle of wine, you take a sip, you don't like it, because you don't drink alcohol and you're trying to impose on everyone that wine is a bad drink " -friend, this is your personal opinion, and you don't need to flaunt it, everything is already clear! NTR is a good genre

 

[Vindaria]

How tired I am of reading that NTR is bad... Even if it can be disabled or avoided, people still complain about it. Don't you have anything to do? Where not to go (with the NTR tag) there are eternal disputes everywhere.... Stop writing nonsense. Do not play such games, so as not to clog the site. It looks like this:" You were invited to a holiday, and there's a bottle of wine, you take a sip, you don't like it, because you don't drink alcohol and you're trying to impose on everyone that wine is a bad drink " -friend, this is your personal opinion, and you don't need to flaunt it, everything is already clear! NTR is a good genre

What's the problem?
People express their opinion - it is their right.
If you don't like it, don't read it.

 

[zeerin]

The splash screen for the main menu is the best I've ever seen. For reasons relating to the bottom right corner.

 

[chipsiup]

What's the problem?
People express their opinion - it is their right.
If you don't like it, don't read it.

And it's his right to express his opinion in saying they're too whiney.

 

[Vindaria]

And it's his right to express his opinion in saying they're too whiney.

Yes, it works both ways

 

[Voron71rus]

What's the problem?
People express their opinion - it is their right.
If you don't like it, don't read it.

I always answer this way when there is nothing to say))))) Opinion? About what? Why is it really a green cucumber? Or the fact that the tomato is red??))) why, when they see the ntr tag, do they furiously write that the game is (shit)???and they are playing it in vain! You can just skip the game and continue looking for something further))) I just want to understand what motivates such writing

 

[BTLD]

I always answer this way when there is nothing to say))))) Opinion? About what? Why is it really a green cucumber? Or the fact that the tomato is red??))) why, when they see the ntr tag, do they furiously write that the game is (shit)???and they are playing it in vain! You can just skip the game and continue looking for something further))) I just want to understand what motivates such writing

you need to pipe down and read all the comments and realize what the problem is...
but I guess that would require reading skills....
ah..try to use self-voicing...
biggest problem is not that this is a ntr game biggest problem is that dev said one thing and delivered a total different product..