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crazy221

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Hey I played the game so far and just wanted to say the premise is really good and think it could be an awesome game.
 

C^2 Aqua

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Tried it out, looks like you have potential here. Only thing I can add that hasn't already been said is a clarification on some of the typos. I frequently saw the use of "latter" instead of "later." As far as I know, the two - while similar - are not interchangeable. Good luck with your continuing development. :)
 

Pravitas

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Tried it out, looks like you have potential here. Only thing I can add that hasn't already been said is a clarification on some of the typos. I frequently saw the use of "latter" instead of "later." As far as I know, the two - while similar - are not interchangeable. Good luck with your continuing development. :)
Indeed. This is a common issue with people who's English isn't their first language, because I see -er on the end of a word that is Lat, my mind instantly adds the second T, as per the rules. This leads to Latter. But the original word is Late, thus it's later. There were 3 instances of it being used. Fixed them, thanks. If you find any other typo, always feel free to report them and I will fix it.

I still have to remind myself that it's coming instead of comming, it's kind annoying.
 
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Pravitas

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this game has promise, I look forward to seeing more.
Thanks. As a side note, I've just finished redoing the backbone for the sandbox, now it's only a question of filling the events.

This next release (v0.1) will have all the Tier 1 Love events and Tier 1 Corruption Events, as such there won't be any sexual content with the main characters, other than teasing.

There WILL be sexual events in random encounters (i.e. one night stands), but only a few of them for now.
 

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Thanks. As a side note, I've just finished redoing the backbone for the sandbox, now it's only a question of filling the events.

This next release (v0.1) will have all the Tier 1 Love events and Tier 1 Corruption Events, as such there won't be any sexual content with the main characters, other than teasing.

There WILL be sexual events in random encounters (i.e. one night stands), but only a few of them for now.
So are there going to be 2 completely different paths based on whether we go corruption or love? How exactly is that system going to work for the story and the possible paths and/or it's choices?
 

Pravitas

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So are there going to be 2 completely different paths based on whether we go corruption or love? How exactly is that system going to work for the story and the possible paths and/or it's choices?
Not really. The way the game works is that you need to Increase Love in order to have the opportunity to Increase Corruption.

It's going to be a simple loop of Increase Love > Increase Corruption > Increase Love > Increase Corruption > etc.

Do understand that this is my first game and I'm a beginner at coding, as such don't expect complicated mechanics like branching paths. The game itself will be simple with no replay value.

Of course, as all things in life, things can change and maybe in the future I will decide to throw in either Love (weaken Pravitas) or Corruption (take over Pravitas), as branching paths in the late game. But that's the future, gotta focus on the now.
 

Pravitas

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Hello everyone, I would like to give you guys an update on progress and ask for assistance.

First and foremost the assistance part. If anyone here would like to beta test my builds, send me a DM. Let me make this clear, do NOT ask for it here, this is not the place, just send me a DM.

What does beta testing entail?

1- Check for Bugs. If anything breaks or if something should have loaded and didn't, or if you believe it to be broken, tell me.

2- Check for grammar. English is my second language and I'm not a perfect human being, so if something is wrong, tell me.

3- Feedback. I would love to know your thoughts on the events, what did you like best? What didn't you care for? Was there something you really liked? Or really disliked? But please make it constructive, just saying you liked or disliked something, without underlining why, isn't very useful.

Now, how am I breaking down the builds? There will be 4 builds before release of v0.1, they are as follow:

Build 1: All Common Events (House).

Build 2: All Common Events (School).

Build 3: Random Events (Both).

Build 4: Stats, Items and First Time modifiers (Both).

As such, on Build 1, 2 and 3 it will be pure Vanilla. Events will always be the same and stats don't matter. But on build 4, events may change based on Fitness/Charm/Intellect, also if it's your first time watching that event or not. Last, but not least, changes based on Love and Corruption.

As of right now, I'm almost finished with Build 1, needing only to finish Saturday and Sunday events, as such I should have a build by the end of this week. For anyone wondering why it takes so long: I have a full time job (+commute) and I live alone with my dogs, as such I can only dedicate 2~3 hours a day, with more on weekends. I also have a minimum standard of quality that I follow, this makes finding source material on the actresses a pain, not even counting the editing of photos and gifs.

What to expect from v0.1?

There should be enough gameplay to last a couple of hours. Also, as main events, all Tier 1 Events will be unlockable. What are Tier 1 Events? They are events that happen from you breakthrough to 10. Same will be for Tier 2, Tier 3, etc... This means that these will be in the game:

Player: Corruption Tier 1
Kelly: Corruption Tier 1
Anna: Corruption Tier 1
Sarah: Love Tier 1
Linda: Love Tier 1
Rachel: Love and Corruption Tier 1
Vanessa: None

As a little extra, this is what I got up until now:

Extra.png

Keep in mind that a big portion of that is code.
 
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Pravitas

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I have finished Build 1 and have sent it to those who sent me a DM asking.

If you are interested in testing, please send me a DM and I will send you Build 1.

What does beta testing entail?

1- Check for Bugs. If anything breaks or if something should have loaded and didn't, or if you believe it to be broken, tell me.

2- Check for grammar. English is my second language and I'm not a perfect human being, so if something is wrong, tell me.

3- Feedback. I would love to know your thoughts on the events, what did you like best? What didn't you care for? Was there something you really liked? Or really disliked? But please make it constructive, just saying you liked or disliked something, without underlining why, isn't very useful.

What does Build 1 have?

There are over 60 common events! Quite a few of them require either stats of some sort (Corruption/Love/Fitness/Charm/Intelligence) to get in deeper or some item/learning (Massage Training/Camera/Sun Lotion).

These will only be present in Build 4.

What now?

I will start working on Build 2: Common Events (School). Should take me a week, two at most (depends on how hard it is to find the content I need).

As a little extra, this is what I got up until now:

Story.jpg

Keep in mind that a big portion of that is code.
 
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Pravitas

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A small update: I decided to change how college will work.

Originally I decided that Linda, Rachel and Vanessa would only be accessible during weekdays at school. That turned out to not be the right move, for quite a few reasons.

As such, I'm changing how it will work. There will be a few common events at school that will give you Love. Once you finish Tier 1 Love Event, they will give you their address. This will allow you to travel to their home for an event.

As of now I'm not sure how it will work, but it will most likely allow you to visit them during Late Afternoon and Evening on weekdays. Not sure about the hours for weekends.

Because of this overhaul, version 0.1 will no longer have Linda/Rachel/Vanessa Tier 1 events. This will be the focus of version 0.2. You will be able to see their common events at school and raise their love, but it will be capped at 9 (Linda and Rachel) and 19 (Vanessa). This means that in version 0.2, you will be able to jump straight into the event.

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I'm changing the actress for Rachel. Turns out that "Angel Smalls" doesn't really have much content.
 
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Pravitas

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Hello everyone! Here's another update: Build 2.

With it, I'm also going to change how I'm going to test the build from now on. The reason I chose to do so privately was the misguided idea that if people were interested enough to reach out to me, they would also give me their feedback. Unfortunately that proved to not be the case. Of the 7 people who I sent the Build 1, only a single person gave their feedback.

As such, from now on I may as well just post the build here for anyone to see. If you download and play it, please report any bugs you may find (broken links or images that don't work). Also, if you can, please tell me what events you liked (and why) and what events you didn't like (and why).

What does Build 2 have?

A total of 15 Common Events (School) were added (5 for each character), although some are locked behind stats (only Build 4).

Fix a few bugs that were reported from Build 1.

A reminder that first time events, as well as stat driven events, have yet to be coded in. That will be Build 4.

What is next?

In Build 3, I plan on adding the Random Events. They will also be the backbone of how you raise your Corruption at the start of the game.

While I do plan on having Random Events both in the House and in the School, this build will not have these. Instead it will be focused on your outings, i.e. Raising Corruption.

The MC starts the game with 6 Corruption, needing 3 more to trigger the Tier 1 Corruption Event. This can be done after the first couple of Pravitas Events, which will allow yourself to go out and play on Friday, Saturday and Sunday.

As a little extra, this is what I got up until now:
Untitled.jpg

Keep in mind that a big portion of that is code.

Anyway, you can download the build here:

Edit -
Forgot to add: Stats, Money, Relationship are all WIP.
 
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gfdsf565

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Error on Day 1, Tuesday Afternoon:
Error: cannot execute macro <<goto>>: unable to parse macro argument ""Rachel With Friend>> ": unterminated double quoted string

It's also tough to tell when I've reached the end of the content right now, or what my Int/Cha needs to be to trigger things.

I can't buy a camera, and can't peek on the girls, so there's not a heckuva lot to do.
 
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Pravitas

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Error on Day 1, Tuesday Afternoon:
Error: cannot execute macro <<goto>>: unable to parse macro argument ""Rachel With Friend>> ": unterminated double quoted string

It's also tough to tell when I've reached the end of the content right now, or what my Int/Cha needs to be to trigger things.

I can't buy a camera, and can't peek on the girls, so there's not a heckuva lot to do.
Fixed, forgot a ".

This is a test build only for Common Events, the story won't move forward, so all you have to do is check each Common Event once.

As for everything else:

Build 1: All Common Events (House).

Build 2: All Common Events (School).

Build 3: Random Events (Both).

Build 4: Stats, Items and First Time modifiers (Both).

We are on Build 2, as such only Common Event (House) and Common Event (School) are implemented.

As for there not being a lot to do, this build isn't meant to be played, but tested.

This may sound rude, but is there any payoffs in this build?
Nope. This is purely to for testing purposes. If you don't want to, please wait for the Release version.
 
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you should remove situations where for example someone is shownt to be in living room but you go there and get rooms descriptions. put chars to bedroom and lock doors for no interaction or make some interactions because this is simply anoying
 

Buffalo Fred

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I start with 5 corruption, not 6 and I can't find any way of raising it (talking to the ghost during the night does nothing).

Is that just the current state of the game or is something wrong?
 
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