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First the fun stuff.
Renders are amazing. Models are super beautiful. Main plot is really intriguing.
Now less fun stuff.
I'm sure many has already pointed it out but writing part is the weakest part of this game. Dialogues in most cases are incoherent, often hard to understand what the characters are trying to convey. It kills the mood to emerge oneself with the story. Writing needs total overhaul.
The intro also needs work. It was saying the same thing with different structure. A simple 'Words of advise. Take care of yourself cause no one else will' would've been better than saying it hundreds different ways.
When I first read the overview I expected a badass (cobd level) MC. But after playing couple of minutes Mc seemed like utterly worthless. Is this the guy who's supposed to stop the powerful man on earth; his father? Seemingly with no knowledge of what to do with the desise or whatever he just steals it because his mom; who left him when he was kid, told him to? I have heard hobos planning better when robbing a convenience store.
Then the info dump. Too many characters and info was dumped simultaneously. It makes it hard to get attached to any characters or remember anything.
Tried to be as constructive as I can. Hope that helps.
Renders are amazing. Models are super beautiful. Main plot is really intriguing.
Now less fun stuff.
I'm sure many has already pointed it out but writing part is the weakest part of this game. Dialogues in most cases are incoherent, often hard to understand what the characters are trying to convey. It kills the mood to emerge oneself with the story. Writing needs total overhaul.
The intro also needs work. It was saying the same thing with different structure. A simple 'Words of advise. Take care of yourself cause no one else will' would've been better than saying it hundreds different ways.
When I first read the overview I expected a badass (cobd level) MC. But after playing couple of minutes Mc seemed like utterly worthless. Is this the guy who's supposed to stop the powerful man on earth; his father? Seemingly with no knowledge of what to do with the desise or whatever he just steals it because his mom; who left him when he was kid, told him to? I have heard hobos planning better when robbing a convenience store.
Then the info dump. Too many characters and info was dumped simultaneously. It makes it hard to get attached to any characters or remember anything.
Tried to be as constructive as I can. Hope that helps.
i quess that info dump is there practicaly cause devs are starting game in middle of story....so they need to tell player everything what happend befere u start play in one update....
another point is how u want to do decisions like "trust her" when player dont know nothing what was before :-D
interesting will be probably (if incest will be implemented , and if she is potentional LI ) how devs will excuse renders when (if i remember it corectly) your sister is fucking with husband of second sister.....
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It has potential to be a be really good game. Hope dev fixes those stuff.
it had, i practicaly lost all hope ...
these two devs are doing this game for how long? 11 months? and there was demo x reworked demo x first update and now at christmass will be revorked first update and xmass version....
honestly i came here mostly for incest, wich is not in game and even than one girl is already ruined for me.
only what is realy good are top quality renders...but still real porn beats them.
and it not even helping when devs are everytime lying about releasing game...
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Mega has been trashing Joker's accounts for the last few days. Someone is carrying out a vendetta against him. Until that changes or Mega actually looks at the contents of the account instead of blindly dropping them, there's not much he can do.
He's frustrated. We're frustrated. Which of course is the goal of those targeting him.
I was referring to the MEGA link for the walkthrough mod, which is still broken. Sorry for the confusion.
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Hi guys!
Yes guys, it is very normal to make such sentences, we all agree. During this time, we simply shared our progress with our patrons on our Discord server. And in line with a decision we made, we reworked the scenes of the first episode, especially due to the color tone change of the game. Normally, we just reworked the prologue version. I guess we just didn't get our pace... To summarize, we completely reworked the game! We have completely finished the story and the scenes. But we need to improve our story. Many people were offended by this. We're simplifying some chapters and paying attention to the spelling. So you can fully understand the story. Don't worry about it, it won't take long...
By the way, there are new scenes in this version as well. But don't forget that it is mostly rework-oriented.
We stated in the previous report, we will share the XMAS version with you in the first week of January at the latest, after this update. The next version of the game will also come with it. We're really looking forward to releasing the first episode.
I share some new images for you! Don't forget to compare with the old ones!
Happy weekends! ~ We, X & P
to me is like if you can maintain quality and steady updates.... if you gonna take months to update something with almost nothing new or tiny updates without a plan to end the game at some point then it's nooo. But you seem to have something new there so i will be waiting for your progress before i vote it^^
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is it just me or are the renders and the character dialogues messed up a lot??
i can´t follow the dialogues and the renders half of the time,and can tell they belong to another place in the game.
and there are a lot of missing images too.
man that is confusing as fuck i have never seen a so messed up game with wrong pictures at the wrong place and dialogues at the wrong place for a long time.
i see the dev "reworked" the game?? wow you have done a shitty job with it i must say.
don´t you test that shit before releasing it??
i can´t follow the dialogues and the renders half of the time,and can tell they belong to another place in the game.
and there are a lot of missing images too.
man that is confusing as fuck i have never seen a so messed up game with wrong pictures at the wrong place and dialogues at the wrong place for a long time.
i see the dev "reworked" the game?? wow you have done a shitty job with it i must say.
don´t you test that shit before releasing it??
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No goddamn it. This has become a nightmare for mods. If you choose the wrong coffee you will not be able to choose certain choices. This is definitely a completely silly solution to force you to make certain choices. Fortunately, that can be bypassed with the 0x52_URM mod, which allows you to select the blocked / hidden option. This forcing selection is a HUGE turn off game. So I hope the matter is restored as it was in the previous version. This seems to be the only thing I remember changing here and DEV went completely wrong in this matter.