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how many more updates till there's new content, I feel bad for this dev's patrons who are getting the exact same content again
- Aug 29, 2018
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[VN] [Ren'Py] UNEXPECTED [Episode 1-2, Part 1, v0.4] [XPECTED] [UQ, MyRepack-YAC]
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Last update had new content..... but it might have escaped your view since the dev remade some parts of the earlier story, so yeah, if started from a save from the end of previous version there was no content. Try a fresh start.
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All right, you asked for it.
Visually appealing, nice interface, reasonably good audio, good CG with above average skin tones. Too soon to know how the story will unfold. Initial premise seems reasonably plausible.
Translation to English needs a lot of work. In certain areas the wrong terms are used (eg, it is "thoughtlessness" not "thoughtfulness"). In other areas there are terms used that don't fit or make sense (eg, hemorrhoids???). You could really use someone to edit the script.
The following is highly subjective: too many tropes. Too many games wherein the MC stumbles into a shower or someone else's room. It's cheap and lazy writing and not reality. If you want to have serious subject matter such as corporate espionage, subterfuge and familial deception/betrayal, the surrounding story needs to elevate beyond sophomoric behavior. Also, for the love of chocolate, who would masturbate in someone else's shower the first day they're visiting? Maybe later, but not that soon.
The bottom line: your team is talented with CG, not so much with the writing and it's the writing that is the most important aspect of a story.
Regardless, keep trying.
- Jun 24, 2018
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This is like the most pointless critique ever.All right, you asked for it.
Visually appealing, nice interface, reasonably good audio, good CG with above average skin tones. Too soon to know how the story will unfold. Initial premise seems reasonably plausible.
Translation to English needs a lot of work. In certain areas the wrong terms are used (eg, it is "thoughtlessness" not "thoughtfulness"). In other areas there are terms used that don't fit or make sense (eg, hemorrhoids???). You could really use someone to edit the script.
The following is highly subjective: too many tropes. Too many games wherein the MC stumbles into a shower or someone else's room. It's cheap and lazy writing and not reality. If you want to have serious subject matter such as corporate espionage, subterfuge and familial deception/betrayal, the surrounding story needs to elevate beyond sophomoric behavior. Also, for the love of chocolate, who would masturbate in someone else's shower the first day they're visiting? Maybe later, but not that soon.
The bottom line: your team is talented with CG, not so much with the writing and it's the writing that is the most important aspect of a story.
Regardless, keep trying.
- Jul 8, 2021
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The game is not saving the "saves" to "%appdata%/renpy". Since there is no "update only" download there is no point in keeping the games folder until the next update but, deleting it deletes the saves and you have to start from the beginning when the new version comes out. You could fix that.
Thanks a lot for your thoughts. We are constantly striving to improve ourselves.
We improved it a lot and worked with two proofreaders as the English translation was so bad. They fixed all the bugs, and then we come across your comment for the first time. I think you're stuck with English a lot. But if it's really bad please let us know any bugs you see so we can fix it. I don't understand what you mean in the hemorrhoids text. The character is making fun of the MC. It's just a phrase he uttered to make fun of him, as he took on the facial expression of a person with hemerrhoids.
It's ridiculous that we don't do it because there are other games available. We tell a story and fill in the blanks with scenes like this. cheap and lazy text are pretty rare in the game and are purely story-heavy. The reason for this is to entertain the players. But it is not correct to say cheap and lazy text. There are already things like corporate espionage, cheating, and family cheating/betrayal in the story. It is not possible to give them all at once. It will be decisive when the time comes. And it's great that you caught it! Of course you will get the answer to that. I don't want to give spoilers. Why would she masturbate in someone else's shower the first day she came to visit!?
And the bottom line, we're as good at story as we are at CG, but criticizing a comprehensive story in the first place isn't an understatement of writing. It would be better to point out that incomprehensible places exist. I'm not saying I totally disagree with your critique. But we want you to help us solve them.
We will not stop trying.
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Thank you very much for pointing this out. So far everyone has said that there is a problem with the save but when I checked this I was seeing that there was no problem. Thank you for explaining why. I'm fixing this immediately.
We did not want to throw this story away for a development process. In order to improve ourselves, we have created a game with a simple scenario that we will share with you. In this process, we have improved ourselves and learned to accelerate.
I'm working on this. I will do my best to implement this in the next update.
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The spoiler under Genre in the OP mentions an iPatch. What is it and when is it coming? If you have any knowledge of such thing of course...
Err... Asking for a friend! Yes, that's it.