Not sure what happened but the dialogue is very robotic the art is great but just not sure if the story is going to match. I pretty much agree with most of what has been said here. I liked the original way better than this rework... additional renders or animations don't really mean much if they aren't lewd. Personally I think there were at least 2 or 3 missed opportunities in this relaease for some lewd content, I get it though setting the stage for your story. I would say find someone who can write something more than just simple and factual statements, put some feeling into it. Right now it feels like we're gonna end up saying hey lady wanna bang and the female character(s) are gonna reply with Affirmitive like some kind of robot. I'm sure the art and animations will be fantastic though...