VN Ren'Py Abandoned Unexpected [v0.5 Ep. 2 - Part 2] [XPECTED]

[seekin4porn]

Thank you, my point is that they left the future tags open. (It's not a big deal. It was more humor.)

I'm not pulling your leg, or anything. I didn't realize you were being sarcastic. But I also don't see any reason to show future tags if they are just the vanilla content you expect on any other lewd game. Maybe the devs were worried that people would see a demo with very little lewd content and wouldn't know what to expect.
Now... if they were planning NTR, pregnancy, incest, urination, zoophilia etc. then they were doing the right thing in letting people know upfront. Or, by showing those vanilla tags they signal people shouldn't expect anything besides the usual and shoo the freaks away. Joke is on them though. I'm still around

 

[sulimo04]

preview pics seem good
however the description is confusing

 

[El Tanque]

I'm not pulling your leg, or anything. I didn't realize you were being sarcastic. But I also don't see any reason to show future tags if they are just the vanilla content you expect on any other lewd game. Maybe the devs were worried that people would see a demo with very little lewd content and don't know what to expect.
Now... if they were planning NTR, pregnancy, incest, urination, zoophilia etc. then they were doing the right thing in letting people know upfront. Or, by showing those vanilla tags they signal people shouldn't expect anything besides the usual and shoo the freaks away. Joke is on them though. I'm still around

I think we don't understand each other, my comment was only because at the end of the future tags, in the OP, in Genre, instead of period, they used an ellipsis, which indicates that they will add more future tags and therefore, we don't know what to expect. (But it's really not a problem for me, as I said my comment was just a joke.)

 

[anon48]

I'm sorry but am I missing something? how is this a game? it's a graphic novel at best

 

[Cirdon]

@i-am-x, @i-am-p The art is awesome, but you need a translator & editor, the story is a mess.

Even in the short game description I wasn't clear if an older brother did the betraying and younger brother is the MC or if MC is the one who betrayed his father to prevent him from creating this new world order.

 

[Gamesstar]

Femdom and maledom........ I am in

 

[Cernunnos.]

Models look nice but femdom and a dev saying "We want to keep the story going around all of the characters. For example, you won't be the one to see only from the perspective of the protagonist. You will choose how the story should go if the protagonist is in the scene too" both make me nervous. Think I'll revisit at a later date when more information in available.

 

[Saint Blackmoor]

Amazing graphics, music blends well with visuals. high-quality game.
It is disappointing that the grammar/translation distracts from an otherwise great introduction.
Best of luck.

 

[VinieEstacado]

Hey Nice Soundtrack...... i need some links for the first song hahahah please.... and the game man.... im in love
so far so good!

 

[KenneX]

Nice premise and renders, will there be translation from Engrish into English? It's hard to read this.

 

[xmilteach]

thx

 

[Deathlore421]

Good news first: This looks really good, all the renders are great and I love the little montage near the end. This VN will probably be phenomenal in a few updates.

Bad news: There is basically no content right now, when I read demo I expected probably ten minutes but I believe it only took me about two to finish this. Also it sounds like this is going to be a multiple protagonist game, which isn't something I'm interested in.

Overall this is something you should put on your "To Check Later" list and come back in an update or two, and see if it's up your alley at that time.

 

[Mrfuqewe]

Nice premise and renders, will there be translation from Engrish into English? It's hard to read this.

 

[Zeruvex]

I will be waiting for the android port and will say something

 

[Deleted member 2116776]

the last preview image (9th) of the black-haired girl on bed with heart pasties looks familiar.. i think i've seen it before somewhere else.

anyways, renders look good. will try

 

[Robert Arctor]

Hey; just tried the demo, here's some feedback.

+
. The music is quite nice
. The UI is really stylish
. Overall the cyberpunk* atmosphere is well communicated in terms of props, models, and environments

-
. I sometimes had trouble getting the main menu to work, the text doesn't always seem to activate on mouse-over, clicking on text doesn't do anything until it starts fading.
. The language is very hard to follow. This is a problem in general and for the demo in particular because there's almost nothing else in the 5-minute demo except exposition - basically no dialogue, no choices, just summary text.
At the time Gia and Perla appear, I have no idea what the story is any more. The exposition is too long and poorly written. I think more of this needs to be in the first person, otherwise it's like reading an essay.

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* mods please don't ban me, I'm talking about the genre not making a comparison to another game

 

[Enot1964]

Very good first step. Liked it.

 

[CortoMaltese]

Thanks for the prologue. I like it so far and I think with every step in development this becomes a really great game. So I'm already looking forward to episode 1 with pleasure.

 

[Deleted member 3036029]

We want to keep the story going around all of the characters. For example, you won't be the one to see only from the perspective of the protagonist. You will choose how the story should go if the protagonist is in the scene too.

So NTR scenes that’s avoidable?

 

[serhatdozdiyik]

Really promising prologue. High quality content here, from the story to the menu... Everything seems to be considered very carefully.

Best wishes on your game dev, good luck!