HTML Abandoned Unfinished Business [v0.5.2] [Dedegaru]

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Dedegaru

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I found a few problems with image files not being named correctly and causing broken image links on Linux where filesystems are truly case sensitive. The author is obviously developing on Windows NTFS which preserves case on creation and ignores it on read. Also, they are probably allowing Explorer to default to hiding file extensions and need to force that to be shown. Then they will see what is going on. A number of the images look like "file.JPG" when the file URL in the html specifies "file.jpg".

I ended up getting stuck trying to get James to go out jogging and threw the html into Twine and opened up the Javascript console to see what was wrong. The variable $tvevent starts at 0 in order to have us attempt to mess with his TV viewing like we do with Sarah. There are a selection of about half a dozen channels to look at, but none of these have a "hall" passage link to allow us to mess with Sarah at the same time. Instead we have to switch him to news first, do a "nudge" (bumps $tvevent) and then switch him to sports (bumps it again), change sports type in that passage, and then do another "nudge" in there to set it to 3.

During this mess I wanted to do something with Sarah, assumed the missing "hall" link was a bug and saw the author had provided an emergency reset on the status frame to do such a thing (cementing my thought that it was indeed a bug). I used that to break away from James and the TV and had left $tvevent set to 2. There was now no way for me to know that this was the only way to corrupt James, and I was prevented from going back in his messing with the TV event to fix the problem. I had to set $tvevent back to 0 in the console and then went through the whole sequence again now knowing what I had to do.
Hi. Thanks for all the info, I had no clue about how case sensitive I needed to be on file types. I have hopefully fixed this issue. Thanks again.

I have also changed the James TV event
That the thing. That option does not pop up. :)
I'll look at it again later today, to see if I might have missed it, but thrice before it didn't.

Thanks for trying to help, though. It actually is rather appreciated. :)
Have updated this event to be less annoying, sorry for the problems.
 

Whyllow

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Have updated this event to be less annoying, sorry for the problems.
Funnily enough, whilst it was a tad finicky, I did manage to get it to work eventually. For which I want to thank TheGodUncle .

Seeing as you stated it was changed, it might be old news by the time this gets read. It wasn't at all intuitive or well-signed, as the rest of things actually are.
Great start of a game, Dedegaru. Looking forward to more of it. (y)
 

ShamanLab

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Why (why) sissy games always has such names like something serious or important suppose to happens?? Man start wearing skirt in put dildo in his ass -- big deal! 'Unfinished business', 'Become Someone', 'Destiny' i just LMAO when reading this. :)

And of course like in any HTML games you regaining your straight just by walking from kitchen to the work and toilet regular couple of hundred times. And don't forget to sleep well.
 
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Dedegaru

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Why (why) sissy games always has such names like something serious or important suppose to happens?? Man start wearing skirt in put dildo in his ass -- big deal! 'Unfinished business', 'Become Someone', 'Destiny' i just LMAO when reading this. :)

And of course like in any HTML games you regaining your straight just by walking from kitchen to the work and toilet regular couple of hundred times. And don't forget to sleep well.
It's called Unfinished Business, because you play a ghost, who has Unfinished Business. :)

Also you don't eat, or sleep, or go to work. Because you are a ghost.

I don’t mind if people dislike my game, but if could you play it first, then give your feedback so I know how to improve, that would be great. :)
 
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WulfgarD

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I really like the idea of the game. Of course I don't know, where the journey will end, but having the game just in the house makes the grind very fast rather boring. Of course it is a good idea, to corupt the girl quite slowly. But why has that to happen just at home. You allready have the ring in the game. My advise, let it be more jewelry. Maybe some gemstone that were taken too and later put into some necklace. Create some location outside the house. The girl starts with a job. Let her keep that job. When you have gained some influence over her, let her find the necklace. The necklace allows the ghost some minor influence over the girl even outside the area of the house. So her corruption can be worked on, when she is at the office or whatever her job is. There it could be some minor influences that corrupt her further. Make her open the button of her blouse. Smile at her coworker and stuff like that. And some point you can allow (or force) her to get seduced. Long story short, the more places and more opportunities to corrupt her, the less the process of corruption will become boring.
 

Hjort

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Love the Sarah path, can't wait for more content for it. Zero interest in sissy content, will James only be sissy focused or any alternative corruption paths in mind?

Not that you've shown any signs of doing it, but I really hate when games quickly add a huge cast instead of focusing on current characters, so fringes crossed you'll focus on the two current characters till they feel fairly complete and then proceed with expanding the cast.
(You could probably use James and Sarah as the gatekeepers, when they are corrupted enough you can make them visit neighbours and spread the corruption..)
 

Raerngaming

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Well after she gets fired and uses her phone it as you read the message it does not have any buttons to exit that part of it, so it got stuck.
 

konabwo

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hm...progression feels kinda slow
anyways, should the sex scenes with corrupted f and m npcs be expected? (i mean, besides gifs of girls' porn watching and masturbaing aftewards)
 

Signtist

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Any incoming updates to this game? The game looks great, but not even your Patreon has any posts since the last release.
 

WITCHYWOMEN75

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I hope I have done it correctly
great game...has the game become abandoned....if not...hope to see you over on itch io or subscribe star.....dont deal wth patreon too much anymore........good luck and best wishes in the new year with your project
 

ginger

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I enjoyed what you have done so far. I did think it would just be a clone of 'House' or 'Ghost' but it stands on its own 2 feet. I hope for more updates from you.
well done
 
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