A Remake of the Game.
Mega
Thanks, I wasn't expected this game to be resurrected
So, for "mommy fans", our best bet is Gabe's mom? As because teachers are "sexy teachers" without "mommy" feel.
Forget my previous answer, I tried the remake and it looks like the dev decided to add incest into the mix. At the very least, the PE teacher became MC's sister and you can grab her ass so I'm guessing his mom could also very well be a LI.
Plus the dad is nowhere to be seen (if memory serves in the original game first release, the ending was the dad sucker-punching the MC for being late
).
I have played the new version. Haven't seen the dad yet but the mom did talk about him as if he is in the picture. Now that could change in that he starts working too much and mom get's lonely. The MC cuckolds dad and takes mom. Dad get's caught cheating. Or could just end up that dad wants to be cucked and MC ends up being the one Dad and Mom turn to for that.
Yeah the dev changed the family dynamics so the mom could very well be a LI now.
After trying the remake, there aren't that many changes story-wise :
- The PE teacher has become the MC's sister which should led to incestuous relationships.
- The MC can cuck the bully day one now
- MC's dad isn't at home to sucker-punch the MC and the girls (the mom and the big sister) have a mysterious (kinky?
) plan about the MC that they won't reveal.
Also, some models have been updated (Jessica's model for example... At least I think so, it's been a while
) and the renders have been redone.
Otherwise, the "story" (not much of it at this point, we are just wondering about the MC's past and why he was home-schooled) is pretty much the same.
A few things that could be improved:
- The english was a bit rough in the original release but it's gotten worse (or I was in a less forgiving mood last night, I don't know ^^). There are lots of mistakes and even when sentences aren't grammatically wrong, the wording tends to be a bit weird/unnatural.
- Characters are introduced with their basic persona but it feels kinda flat. It needs more dialogues to give them more personality so the game feels more "alive". Every sentence doesn't have to have an agenda, it can be some banter between characters just so the player feels closer to them.
- The PE scene is a bit weird: they do not wear gym clothes, the activity doesn't make sense with an unfair rating system and the class lasts two minutes and a half!
I'm aware those things aren't what's important in the scene and our suspension of disbelief should take over but it was a bit much...^^
- It's a good thing that we can interrupt Jessica/Tyron in the bathroom since she's a LI. However, if you don't, it would have been better immersion-wise to make it a voyeur scene (maybe an opportunity to be a calculating MC who would gather evidence against the bully? I'm not a fan of this kind of plot but at least, that would explain why we see the handjob scene
) or just show what the MC was hearing (so we can learn about Tyrone's poor stamina
) without the "kinky" renders. If a VN tells a story from one perspective only, I always find it annoying when there's a sudden shift in the POV only to insert adult content...
- This is a personal preference of mine but I'd take still renders over "quirky" animations. They aren't terrible or anything but an animation really has to be extra smooth to add some spice to a naughty scene so in case of hardware limitations, I would suggest to keep it simple for the time being. Otherwise, practice makes perfect so it will probably get better
The help of an editor could go a long way with most of these points. Anyway, good luck to the dev. His game had a rocky start since he had to remake it due to data loss so I hope he'll be able to work on it more regularly from now on (I'm still curious about MC's background after all
).
