- Jan 10, 2018
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Well the problem is even bigger though most want to contain it to Elena. MC has anxiety or even PTSD for having been bullied for years and even falsely accused of rape by Sofia, that is why he missed school so much and trust me that is actually very believable just as he would have been sick way more often as someone without if serious enough.I don't like getting mad at someone... especially for a story I am not paying for.
But you never blame the character for his narrative flaws. Only the writer is to blame.
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But the loving mother and fearsome Alice either never even noticed or knew or the important woman that keeps other school gangs away accepted that her son was bullied for years and did nothing. Great mother in both cases and worthy of your rescue ....... So unless you take that part away from Mc or make it very different reason he has that anxiety/PTSD you will keep shitting on both Elena who had responsibilities as both a friend of the family and his failed teacher that fails her students allowing them to be bullied into a serious mental illness while under her care and watch ....... even without her throwing him under the bus later and on Alice as his mother that either is an uncaring bitch when it comes to her sons mental health or so inept she noticed nothing .......
Not even talking about the later rape interest Sofia (since love would be impossible in reality even for masochist after suffering such trauma), no sane person would ever want to get into a loving relation with the woman that keeps reminding you time and time again of your trauma, even if MC somehow would manage to overcome the worst pain and memory of that trauma.
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