I don't care about a plot this early in development. Ima download and play this game just because of DAT ass in the OP render. Dat ass is awesome and I'll play just for that. I hope the dev keeps going on this game and doesn't give up hope. This game has a lot of potential IMO. All you peeps out there bickering and complainin won't accomplish anything. Instead of bitchin help the dev out to make this VN better.
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I don't care what your personal fetishes are. I don't care what fetishes this developer puts in his game, there are plenty of games for me. I simply stated that he had only one patron before this update. The developer stated on the first page that the game contain the rape of MC's family and was going to add the rape of MC to the game. I suggested that was why he had only one patron. I do support developers, currently I support fourteen games. Were you the one supporter of this game when it had NTR? If not, then you are part of the problem. You want games to contain the content that you like but do not support the game yourself. The guy has a Patreon page, obviously he wants to make some money. If not, he can ignore all the comments and make the game exactly the way he wants. I didn't talk shit about anyone. If anything, I talked shit about content; content that has a small following and generates very little income. Again, if you know of an NTR only game that has more than 1000 patrons; please inform me. At this point and time I believe that we both have an equal right to make comments about this game as neither one of us financially supports it.
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It's my understanding that NtrMan has several games and collectively has more than a thousand patrons and that it is not one game that has a more than a thousand patrons. If I am wrong then I apologize to you. The fact remains that non-NTR games in general do far better than NTR games financially.
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Yeah he has a bunch of games...and comics i think.....and yeah non-ntr makes more on average...much more...
....just pointing that there are some ntr creators making good money....
Just finished it. There's not much to tell story wise about it. It was mostly hugging and all that. And maybe get someone to help you proof read dialogues cause there's some mistakes.
But as this your first project i wish you luck
But as this your first project i wish you luck
Well most popular games here don't have have ntr cause, ntr has relatively small number of fans.
Maybe because these games you mentioned has has avoidable ntr?
And raping everybody will most likely won't get any audience. Maybe an attempt to rape would've been better.
Maybe they attempted but failed? maybe they just brutally beat them and robbed them? Maybe a family member 'offended' a mafia member and they took it very personally.
There's thousands of reasons for vengeance.
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Start the work on new update . I will correct all the errors in my work on development and renders and also script. I know my script was pretty bad. I also have 8hrs job that's why I couldn't give this project proper time. I promise I will try my ass off to correct all the errors..
P.S Thank You.
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Just take the time you need, if it is a hobby project first then also treat it as such.
Well learning from your errors (if you are of the opinion you made them yourself) is something we all do. So good luck and whatever way you wish to go, make sure you communicate clearly where you want to go with your game and what you want to focus on. Some may like that and others less so, having that focus unclear though makes it hard for everyone to decide if they want to follow the progress.
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Well SaidJust take the time you need, if it is a hobby project first then also treat it as such.
I have clear motive for this game from the start. I just didn't knew what to tell the people now I know what to do. Thank You so much
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Ok .. first - please let us change the MC name ... second, get rid of the empty row in the textbox. All the text is way to low and gets pushed into the UI.
The writing is a hard sell too. Its very simple and plain - yes I get it, no native speaker, but that's the problem. ^^ This doesn't feel like a translated text, but more like something someone with lacking English skill wrote in English.
Dont write so much, just to write something. Don't write "The bus is here", when we see the bus in the next screen. We understand that without any text.
And just as a reminder, punctuation and low- and uppercase are not something you can use arbitrarily. In addition, there are also other careless mistakes, with missing or to many letters.
And there is no indication what someone says or thinks. So it is unclear what other ppl will hear.
Then the MC get send upstairs to rest ... but he doesn't know the house. How does he know what his room is?
After that we get some screens that look like there were some kind of free-roam planned - at least so far there are just the renders and no crappy free-roam.
Then I just skipped the text, because reading got to exhausting and wasn't worth the hassle up to that point. There is no story that is more than the usual tropes and cliches we see in every other game - just poorly written.
But to end with something positive - the girls look nice and the renders are decent. The MC looks a bit "uargh" and his eyes are creepy, but the rest is ok.
The version number is confusing too - its version 1.0 but episode 3?
The writing is a hard sell too. Its very simple and plain - yes I get it, no native speaker, but that's the problem. ^^ This doesn't feel like a translated text, but more like something someone with lacking English skill wrote in English.
Dont write so much, just to write something. Don't write "The bus is here", when we see the bus in the next screen. We understand that without any text.
And just as a reminder, punctuation and low- and uppercase are not something you can use arbitrarily. In addition, there are also other careless mistakes, with missing or to many letters.
And there is no indication what someone says or thinks. So it is unclear what other ppl will hear.
Then the MC get send upstairs to rest ... but he doesn't know the house. How does he know what his room is?
After that we get some screens that look like there were some kind of free-roam planned - at least so far there are just the renders and no crappy free-roam.
Then I just skipped the text, because reading got to exhausting and wasn't worth the hassle up to that point. There is no story that is more than the usual tropes and cliches we see in every other game - just poorly written.
But to end with something positive - the girls look nice and the renders are decent. The MC looks a bit "uargh" and his eyes are creepy, but the rest is ok.
The version number is confusing too - its version 1.0 but episode 3?
oh, now he is going to mom friend ....well nothing to see here for me
GL with developement (whatever this game is)
....well nothing to see here for meGL with developement (whatever this game is)
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I changed the model for mom and aunt and cousin emma and ava are family friends coz mom and aunt will be much much sexy and hot will be added in story lateroh, now he is going to mom friend
GL with developement (whatever this game is)
firstly saw here developer troling...maybe not u r not first, but for me u r realy unicate
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Think I downloaded the 1.1 version back in January because those cheeks in the thumbnail made the Monkeee part of my brains go ooga, forgot about it because there wasn't that much to do and now that I tried out the 1.0 can't wait for 0.9 version of March, all I can say is Jesus fucking Christ man, fuck the story for a moment:
I'd say if you want to see people, especially Patrons, walk towards your game, you'd have to go into the direction of cleaning up your code at least somewhat like this. Sure, the MC only seems to have one set of clothing at the moment and he doesn't open his fly to get his dong out but it just cuts straight through the Jeans, but on some days it be like that, photo-realistic renders can wait until the story is more than like 700 lines long.
But as it stands right now, I'm afraid this isn't better than some beginner project of a 4th semester game design student who's using Ren'Py for the first time ever; reading the confusing change of the story to what feels like the 123rd iteration of "Boy returns after becoming the big boy and now every woman in his direct vicinity is going to walk bowlegged", just... doesn't make me see any motivation to pay money for this as it is right now.
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I'd say if you want to see people, especially Patrons, walk towards your game, you'd have to go into the direction of cleaning up your code at least somewhat like this. Sure, the MC only seems to have one set of clothing at the moment and he doesn't open his fly to get his dong out but it just cuts straight through the Jeans, but on some days it be like that, photo-realistic renders can wait until the story is more than like 700 lines long.
But as it stands right now, I'm afraid this isn't better than some beginner project of a 4th semester game design student who's using Ren'Py for the first time ever; reading the confusing change of the story to what feels like the 123rd iteration of "Boy returns after becoming the big boy and now every woman in his direct vicinity is going to walk bowlegged", just... doesn't make me see any motivation to pay money for this as it is right now.
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kinda want to say, I was in a weird place then and you are right. There aren't many games(especially westerns) that don't make that unavoidable at all. My rant then, was just dumb
.The only thing I can link are people who have two "paths".
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Needs custom naming of the MC. Breaks my immersion playing as "Mike"...
"I spent my most childhood with Emma and Eva, I can't wait to meet them"???
Dude, you've obviously met them, since you have spent most of YOUR/MY childhood with them, what you can't do is wait to see them again...
"I spent my most childhood with Emma and Eva, I can't wait to meet them"???
Dude, you've obviously met them, since you have spent most of YOUR/MY childhood with them, what you can't do is wait to see them again...
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