Hey guys,
Is there any Chinese native speaker who could tell me if this translation is any good or not?
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MC: (喘息) 你喜欢吗?我们让你更舒服点。
Sindri: 嗯?哇!
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Sindri: 啊!啊啊!对-对!对!哦哦哦!
MC: (舔) (吸吮)
MC: (每次我用舌头划过她阴道的时候都能尝到她的汁液。她真好吃。)
MC: (嗯,她很快就打开了!)
MC: (舔) (舔)
Sindri: 啊…啊嗯!哦哦哦!你的舌头是 - 啊 - 这-这么好!哦,上帝!我要 - 我要 - 我要高潮了!啊啊啊!
MC: (吮吸) (舔) (吸吮)
Sindri: 啊啊啊啊!
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Sindri: 别-别停,[MC]!继续(喘息)!你的舌头感觉很棒!啊!
MC: (舔) (舔)
Sindri: 我想要 - 啊 - 我想要你的舌头在我里面!
MC: (如果这是她真心想要的,我怎么能拒绝呢?)
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Sindri: (喘息) 哦哦哦!对!哦哦哦!!!啊啊啊!
Sindri: (我能感觉到他的舌头深入我里面!上帝啊!我现在湿透了!我觉得我又要 -)
Sindri: 嗯嗯嗯!!!啊啊啊啊!
MC: (她好像又高潮了!她紧紧用腿夹住我的脖子,把我拉得更深!)
可选的肛门舔弄场景?
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MC: (舔) (舔)
Sindri: (喘息) 哦哦哦!
MC: (嗯,她真喜欢我的舌头在她屁股上,也许这会引向更多……)
And this is the original, english text: Sindri_Sex_Gdoh_01_1.png
MC: Pant Did you enjoy that? Let’s get you more comfortable.
Sindri: Huh? Whoa!
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Sindri: Ah! Ahh! Y-Yes! Yes! Ooohh!
MC: Lick Shlurp
MC: (I can taste her juices each time I drag my tongue across her pussy. She’s delicious.)
MC: (Well, she certainly opened up quickly!)
MC: Lick Lick
Sindri: Ah… Ahmmmm! Ooohh! Your tongue is- ahh - s-so good! Oh Gods! I’m going to- I’m going to- I’m cummmiinnnnngg! Aaahhhh!
MC: Suck Lick Shlurp
Sindri: Ahhhhhh!!
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Sindri: D-Don’t stop, [MC]! Keep Pant going! Your tongue feels incredible! Ahh!
MC: Lick Lick
Sindri: I… I want you to- ahh - I want to feel your tongue inside me!
MC: (Who am I to deny the lady if that’s what she truly wants?)
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Sindri: Gasp Ooohh! YES! OOHHHHH!!! AHHHHH!
Sindri: (I can feel his tongue plunging deep inside me! Gods! I’m soaking wet right now! I think I’m going to-)
Sindri: Hnnnnnggg!!! Ayaaahhhhhh!!
MC: (It sounds like she just came again! She’s tightly wrapping her legs around my neck and pulling me deeper!)
OPTIONAL ANNILINGUS SCENE?
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MC: Lick Lick
Sindri: Gasp Ooohhh!
MC: (Hmmm, she really is enjoying my tongue on her ass, maybe this will lead to something more… )