I will attempt to recreate it and I'll see if that works.
When in the section where I am redirecting the steam, minor typo.
"Phew... there it is, the sweet rhythn of parts working together in perfect harmony."
Rhythm accidentally spelt with 'n' rather than 'm'.
Another with the treadmill scene shortly after.
"Every thrust feels like its reshaping my body"
Just missing a ' with 'it's' (90% sure that's more grammatically correct)
Shortly after that;
"Comms on. Jens, you there?"
Not a spelling error here, but between 'on.' and 'Jens' it appears like there isn't a space. Could just be how the text is displayed on my game? Possibly just a visual thing but I'm not sure how to verify it.
Right before boss fight.
"No reason to rush, then.Just gotta listen..."
Missing space, pretty sure of it.
Also in the tutorial fight, right before you gain control in order to lose the fight.
"Now let's end this thing. Let's loose!"
'Lose' is spelt as 'loose' (A very common misspelling that I see on the internet, humorous but annoying.)
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I'm having trouble recreating it during the fight. Issue being is that it appears to be dependent on AI movement rather than any actions you can take regarding the story, dialogue, or anything else. It's specifically tied to combat AI.
If it helps, the machine which is directly in front of Caly (where she was forced to move during the tutorial) had moved up 3 spaces (I think that is as high as it could go) and from there the game was locked. The only way to truly fix that might be to look at the AI.
So far enjoying the first dungeon's scenes, but not so much the first dungeon's dark and confusing layout. I did manage to figure it out on my own with some bumping around, but yeah. Feels pretty claustrophobic. Hard to focus while getting excited at the prospect of random robots taking advantage of me.
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In the first town, holy lag.
Bar scene, typo?
Lauren
"I was back for fteen minutes! Get out of here, all of you!"
Not sure if fifteen was misspelled or if that was just a speech eccentricity on her part.
Another note, is 'Art Store Employee' a headless sprite on purpose?
Shopkeep in the 'sex' district, first store on left, sells a mystery nameless item for 200cr.