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SpikeEye

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A bit too many pop culture references for my liking. Other than that, it was alright.

Going to need a proofreader or two when(or if) this reaches version 1.0
 
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TheDevian

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Mar 8, 2018
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there are still some which need it a lot more, so i think irphaeus is doing an ok job for now. Most mistakes i remember were weird typos.
Yeah, some of them are so bad it's practically unplayable, this one isn't bad at all, but as a writer, I can say we all need an editor. ;) It's critical to the process.
 
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Josh Spicer

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Sep 19, 2018
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Otaku-San made my fucking life when he referenced Shrek as "one of a kind" because like...that's my shit, so I can forgive their pop culture references.

Plus, the M. Bison "YES!" and this ( ͡ ͡° ͜つ ͡͡° ) face making an appearance, while gratuitous, were still ridiculously hilarious.

EDIT: Oh, and the "port-holes" reference too.

Seriously, there are times where Irph reaches MITY levels of writing.
 
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c4f14c018c

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and then middle or end of next next month? that's been going for a while now. sounds like it's gonna be closed soon.
 

Mormont

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Nov 30, 2018
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and then middle or end of next next month? that's been going for a while now. sounds like it's gonna be closed soon.
The dev gave an update a week or two ago and during this week he had to stop because of the heat during the week so it won't be closed anytime soon (y)
 

jowishg

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May 6, 2018
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Not like the dev said some time ago that he'll be getting on shorter delays between updates lol

But quality takes time (well it depends) so i don't mind waiting more for more content
 

Genji

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i predict it out between 20-30 August..5 month to make a huge update,after that we will wait for the next update..
 
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Josh Spicer

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Not like the dev said some time ago that he'll be getting on shorter delays between updates lol

But quality takes time (well it depends) so i don't mind waiting more for more content
That is what they originally said, but when they put up a poll, the patrons voted for longer updates.

Between personal problems there being too much content it's been pushed back a couple months.
 
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