HTML Wasteland Lewdness [v0.56.1] [Icy Viridian]

[KoropeiniKi]

Sigh. I don't know about the sexy stuff, I never got to it, despite multiple tries. Sorry, but this is truly terrible fiction. I understand wanting the world to be dark and scary, but this is impossible. There is no way to move the story forwards. It's a game with a killer DM.

at least tell the dev how they could fix the problem, instead of just complaining about how "terrible" it is.

 

[KoropeiniKi]

also, i don't think the devs (Icy Viridian) even read the comment on here.

its okay to give honest feedback, but make sure to also give an advice to how to make the game better, don't just kick it until it fixes itself.

if you couldn't tell already, i do agree with what zedascove. he/she (don't want to assume anything here) is in fact not trolling.

 

[Man In Moon]

Here's a quick tip for when you do causal reading: Do NOT read EVERY word literally
All your examples are exaggerating, not standing for the situation of this game's text by any means.

Don't read every word literally. That's what you actually said. That's wow. Just wow. Apparently, you forgot how words work. And books. And anything else that involves the written word. Also, my fair moron, you'll notice if you bother to engage that lump of fat betwixt your ears, that I explicitly stated the game's writing wasn't *that* bad. I was using the first bit as an "over exaggerated" example.

But I'll say this again, and I'll dumb it down so even a yes-man idiot can understand what I'm saying.

Ready?

Lot's of mistakes can add up quick. Whole lots of mistakes make game hard to read. Bad engrish kill boner.

Bottom line, bad grammar and spelling equal a bad read in a text based porn game of any description. It's not rocket science.

 

[Icy Viridian]

I bought cornflour and fishes but neither was in my inventory

I tested this but it works just fine. Items sort in the inventory not by the order you got them but by type, so maybe you missed it? If you didn't, let me know.

Looks good so far. Very early in development though. Also weird stuff happens when you side with slavers or the town and finish the quest. You can somehow speak with them even though you killed them previously.

Thanks, I do find that if you helped Nogas but decided to hide when the fight come, the slavers could still be in Nogas bar afterwards. But not in other situations.
I'll fix this soon.

For the love of god, reduce the volume standard, please. I have to turn my pc volume to 50% AND the in-game volume almost all the way down to get it to a tolerable level.

Since there are others requested this before I reduced the volume by half in 0.8.0, but guess I forget to tweak it in 0.7.4, it will be fixed soon.

Why are you guys so fixed on the grammar and typos? Are you elementary school teacher or really don't have better things to do?
The dev already said English is not their 1st language, and the text in this game so far ain't that bad that sabotages your understanding of what it's trying to convey.
Sure it could use some proof-reading, but I don't see how it affects the quality of this game that worth complaining about.

Thanks for your understanding. I would just ignore them, not like they said anything that worth the time anyways.

After sex with a female whore at the RedLight, ..."stasifide" should be satisfied ?
Also, visit to the pawnshop, "..., seemingly doing ntohing."
This one being even more easy to spot.
Seen more but, will report as the bag get more content, since it should be quick enough to see there they are text errors.

Wonder why game developers don't use one of the options, be it even notepad++ can using a plugin find and give correction.
Even most browser supporting plugins can help these days.
This given that most of these text errors are basic, aka misplaced.

Thanks for your typo reports. I do use grammarly, don't know what I'm paying for if they can't even catch these typos.

In the City of Greyfold i cant access the western District because if i cick on "Westside" it leads me to the Northside - every other direction works as written.

It actually does take you to the westside, but I forget to change the description from north to west. Well thanks for pointing that out!
It will be fixed soon.

IcyViridian, I wouldn't worry about what trolls like zedascove say, they're just here to complain about games - you'll notice they never have anything nice to say about any game they post on, they're here to be disruptive and bother developers until they quit.

Thank you, don't worry I know. I appreciate all the feedback, bugs reports and typo reports, but none of what they said is practically helpful, so I won't even be bothered.

hi i am writing to say i liked the game.

and thinks that would be cool and consistent, for players wanting to remain a slave to Dereck, that when we chase Dereck into the cornfield, instead of the two simple options: fight / leave. we could have a third: follow him in order to continue the main quest as his slave.

or else, to be able to meet him in the city after Nogas, so that he continues to give pink pills to the player in order to completely transform him into a bimbo shemale.

Either way it's a good game, and I can't wait to see what happens next. (and see Dereck there again and complete the transformation of the player into sissy shemale bimbo ^^ )

Well it's Derek who didn't want to take you, he is on the run so even if the option was there, he would still be leaving alone.
Also, Derek would show up in Greyfold red lights in the next public update! You can have a little fun with him too.

 

[Platinum_Flame]

I tested this but it works just fine. Items sort in the inventory not by the order you got them but by type, so maybe you missed it? If you didn't, let me know.

I tried to bake a pie but it said I didn't have ingredients

 

[odino]

this can be great if it was RPGM or even unity
im usualy ignore HTML and renpy slideshows its very hard for me to count them as game but this game got my attention

and i dont care if its murdor language isent good i can understand it so its ok for me

 

[odino]

I tried to bake a pie but it said I didn't have ingredients

for pie you need fish wolf meat corn but they heal way more hp than 50-60 eating raw

 

[Platinum_Flame]

for pie you need fish wolf meat corn but they heal way more hp than 50-60 eating raw

Yes, I had 3 wolf meat pieces from saving the dog. Then I bought 3 corn flour and 3 fishes, but couldn't make one pie

 

[odino]

Yes, I had 3 wolf meat pieces from saving the dog. Then I bought 3 corn flour and 3 fishes, but couldn't make one pie

well im not tryed to cook it cuz its raws ingrediant heal way more than pie so if dont need it for quest you better do same too

 

[Deleted member 216663]

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[K_Nakamura]

I stuck in the first town. I've dealt with slavers in the bar, but no progress available, and you can't leave the town.

 

[K_Nakamura]

I tried another (slave) route and got stuck after tring to threaten "Johnny's Buy&Sell" store owner. No option to progress whatsoever and you can't leave the town too. Sucks.

I liked the both rape scenes though! We need more of this stuff.

 

[Ericbse]

there could be a route were you want revenge on the wasteland not just revenge but control and you become like a slave mater and dominate everybody who took advantage of you and you form a slave empire. ---Just an idea(i just prefer games like these were i am mostly the top ).

 

[nackedsnake]

there could be a route were you want revenge on the wasteland not just revenge but control and you become like a slave mater and dominate everybody who took advantage of you and you form a slave empire. ---Just an idea(i just prefer games like these were i am mostly the top ).

By "taking revenge" you mean "become one of them" ?

 

[fat_fingers_ma_gee]

10.2 enjoy

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[Deleted member 1571565]

10.2 enjoy

Mega

Thanks for this, also unfortunately there is already a new bug fix up so something is broken in your current version

 

[ToxicLemming]

Wasteland game + November = Nuclear Winter?

I guess someone was patrolling the Mojave.

 

[dark5ide]

I can't leave Nogas for some reason. I did everything I could, I think. Is it bugged?

 

[aqwai]

Hi, I liked the new version of the game. And I was wondering if one day we would be lucky enough to be able to recruit kai'T (the big muscular lady, who keeps the red lights) as a companion. and / or via the doctor, have the same mutation as her. in order to make the main character a HULK too .

 

[Spamwise]

I was blindly hopeful that doing her fighting quest would unlock a sex scene. Maybe someday.