When talking to the guards in Northside: "The two guards dressed - remove the quotation mark.
Same scene: "Hold on, wastelander. Stat your business." should be State not stat
Talking to Kay-T: " This lead to serials of brain damage" Maybe better as "serious brain damage" or "a series of brain damages".
In the Red Lights area: " They all dressed in reviling clothes, bearly covers or not even try to cover their sexual characteristics." Should be " They were all dressed in revealing clothes, bearly covering or not even trying to cover their sexual characteristics." or something similar.
"greets every new customer who comes in." This is for Roxanne. Should be greeting not greets based on the sentence.
Asking about work in Red lights:
"Sucssed at Charisma check!" Should be Succeeded
" Sure, we always looking for new workers." Should be " Sure, we're always looking for new workers."
"Recive items" when receiving the uniform. Should be Received.