VN Ren'Py Abandoned Watching My Wife [v0.6.1] [Illegible Mink]

[neronwtf]

Illegible Mink Do you have an estimative scheduled release date for updates or you are just "going to go with the flow"?

 

[Methos23]

Romance

 

[Illegible Mink]

Illegible Mink Do you have an estimative scheduled release date for updates or you are just "going to go with the flow"?

I don't think it'd be fair to just drop releases as and when - but it certainly has to balance with my real life job.

The second releases (x.1) which are wife PoV are shorter in terms of time as they can be a reflection of what has gone before, plus extra stuff from her day.

It's a relevant question, but please leave it with me for the immediate time being. I know my responsibilities here and will work hard - I wouldn't have done this if I felt that I couldn't release regularly. I also want to see this story too actually .

 

[Zavarov]

The "wife that dislikes porn"-trope is a pet peeve of mine, as I see it in too many games here. There are quite a number of researches that show women enjoy porn just as much as men do, and my personal experience in this regard is no different. As long as it's needed for the character arc, I guess it can work, otherwise you can still have a woman be conservative while able to enjoy watching porn. The step from watching bbc gangbangs to hotwifing is still a giant one and here I also speak from experience

 

[aifgamer]

I can see the potential of the game, but I'm not sure if the early choice for sharing/cuckoldry is wise. Such a major decision leads to heavy branching and with that, to an extra workload creating a single scene and writing dialogues. With that, you possible will end up in a spaghetti bowl full of variables for different paths.

To avoid that, I would suggest to introduce cuckoldry later in the story as a result of former choices; maybe based on relationship/love points.

The tiny cock of MC kinda feels bad and makes him look pathetic and a loser. An authentic normal size dick would make the sharing route more enjoyable imo.

Just played through the game and was going to post the same two comments.

Maybe the writer has a plan for this, but a major fork so early basically means writing two separate games. The most successful games are structured so that your story choices dictate how the game branches.

Also, I think the story is more interesting if the MC's package size isn't the issue, for either route. It's a richer story if it's their relationship and her desires that makes her cheat, rather than just his package size.

But a very noteworthy start nevertheless. Good writing so far.

 

[Hjyfh]

I don't know if this has been addressed already but there is a bug with making dinner leading to the ending of the other choice i am attaching the save file i have a minute video of it occurring but the file size is too big to attach here if you have a email i could send it too id be happy too. i have tried deleting the saves i have made in the backup of renply in C:\Users\[Username]\AppData\Roaming\RenPy\WMW-1575135126 then redownloading the file the problem still occurs. View attachment 1-1-LT1.save

 

[Lord Bradley]

Many people should get thread banned. Great start to a possibly big and successful game one day and should not be burried under pointless comments from "critics"! There is one mistake with dinner scene that is mentioned in first page already, hope that gets fixed and good luck in developing this game and thank you people for supporting it!

P.S. Wife seems lovely in my eyes precisely because she looks like wholesome average wife instead of some young golddigger or plastic supermodel. Really hope there is a route where husband can stay loyal and caring but wife looks for secret adventures anyways!

 

[neronwtf]

I don't think it'd be fair to just drop releases as and when - but it certainly has to balance with my real life job.

The second releases (x.1) which are wife PoV are shorter in terms of time as they can be a reflection of what has gone before, plus extra stuff from her day.

It's a relevant question, but please leave it with me for the immediate time being. I know my responsibilities here and will work hard - I wouldn't have done this if I felt that I couldn't release regularly. I also want to see this story too actually .

Thanks for your quick reply
No pressure from me. I just wanted to know, because, as other users said, your game is very promising I was curious if you had already planned short but regular updates or take more time in-between. I'll wait.

 

[proudmoore91]

A cuckold game?! DOWNLOAD!

 

[leyre]

The game has nothing at all going on so, giving it a rating just because it might be good or bad is useless, not gonna hype or throw to the gutter sometimes that's not even developed yet

 

[Harmonyrose]

too many choice and path for just intro !

 

[Deleted member 1221028]

I like it so far (you are good at writing a browbeaten husband, I'm sure that the cuckoldry will be excellent. NB I went humiliation path) but it ended very abruptly and without any sexual content, bar the wanking. I was expecting a little more....

I feel like the main image on the game loadup (wifey with the black fella and his arm around her) promises something.... but we didn't even see another guy. But still... I don't want to be too critical. The models are fantastic and the writing is good. Just feels too short, even as an intro.

Edit: not even an intro, it says "episode 1"! From that you should expect some serious action to happen.

 

[Claudio83]

I'd argue that if you don't want humiliation - avoid cuckolding - it's pretty much about that. Similarly cheating (on you that is) - is pretty much the second 'ntr' path.

You can certainly share your wife without humiliation, and perhaps she'll do some stuff without you - but you'll be fully aware of it and have set the rules. I reckon that's not cuckolding, but hotwifing - and that's the first path.

Ok thanks, so it's the hotwifing (share your wife while watching and both get excited), then the first path!

 

[Claudio83]

There is a little bug in the game: if in the evening i decide to help the wife (put the dinner in the oven), at a certain point the scene return when the wife is angry if you have selected the other choice (relax watching porn)

 

[Lou111]

This looks good!

Maybe increase the size of MC his dick. Way too small, even for a game.

I agree with this. My opinion is that NTR is good enough without the small peepee stuff. Unless its something you're trying to build around story-wise, small dick stuff actually detracts from the content cause it feels too try-hard. Let your story shine through.

Thanks for sharing this with us

 

[Illegible Mink]

The "wife that dislikes porn"-trope is a pet peeve of mine, as I see it in too many games here. There are quite a number of researches that show women enjoy porn just as much as men do, and my personal experience in this regard is no different. As long as it's needed for the character arc, I guess it can work, otherwise you can still have a woman be conservative while able to enjoy watching porn. The step from watching bbc gangbangs to hotwifing is still a giant one and here I also speak from experience

I understand your view - and know too that women can and do enjoy it - even if social and sexual norms may elicit a denial of this. My main focus here was to set up an immediate reaction from the female lead to that situation, and even if porn was looked upon favourably, I think that the idea that her husband had been indulging without her might cause offence. It also does fit into my story-line as such - and if course, this will be become apparent, especially in the ntr route.

Just played through the game and was going to post the same two comments.

Maybe the writer has a plan for this, but a major fork so early basically means writing two separate games. The most successful games are structured so that your story choices dictate how the game branches.

Also, I think the story is more interesting if the MC's package size isn't the issue, for either route. It's a richer story if it's their relationship and her desires that makes her cheat, rather than just his package size.

But a very noteworthy start nevertheless. Good writing so far.

Thanks for this - I do appreciate you views. The fork should be manageable with some judicious writing, although there will be separate scenes too. I didn't want to exclude different interests in this sphere. This is of course my first game - so we'll see how it develops, but for now, I'm pretty positive.

Romance

It's all in the eye of the beholder .

Great game so far,the wife looks hot!I see a lot of potential,just do not make the ntr mode like humiliation or gay type of thing.Nothing wrong with the wife enjoying some bbc on the side,but please no degrading stuff.Swinging is great,hotwifing also
just do not turn the hubby into a gay cuck.Cheating is also fine,maybe corrupting the wife would spice things up...

I think it's safe to say that your wife will be corrupted - as long as you make it happen. It might get pretty hard core (ntr route) but anything deemed as extreme or off putting to the player will be optional. Perhaps the non-ntr sharing route would suite - this can include all you've mentioned.

I don't know if this has been addressed already but there is a bug with making dinner leading to the ending of the other choice i am attaching the save file i have a minute video of it occurring but the file size is too big to attach here if you have a email i could send it too id be happy too. i have tried deleting the saves i have made in the backup of renply in C:\Users\[Username]\AppData\Roaming\RenPy\WMW-1575135126 then redownloading the file the problem still occurs. View attachment 1177104

It was picked up and addressed with a further upload posted above - I hope they worked. See post #126. Thanks for your patience.

iS tHe NtR aVoIdAbLe?

yEs - choice is at the beginning of the game .

Many people should get thread banned. Great start to a possibly big and successful game one day and should not be burried under pointless comments from "critics"! There is one mistake with dinner scene that is mentioned in first page already, hope that gets fixed and good luck in developing this game and thank you people for supporting it!

P.S. Wife seems lovely in my eyes precisely because she looks like wholesome average wife instead of some young golddigger or plastic supermodel. Really hope there is a route where husband can stay loyal and caring but wife looks for secret adventures anyways!

Thanks for this comment - the coding error was picked up and sorted. See post #126 for new MEGA links.

I'm very fond of the wife - I wanted her to be pretty, but normal too - and you can be as nice as you want to be, it's your relationship. Whether she acts in certain ways will depend on how you treat her and talk to her and how much she loves and respects you. NTR isn't the domain of unhappy wives - but I'd suggest that many would rarely consider it without the blessing of their husbands initially - and a bit of persuasion. But once the seal is broken...

As cheating is non-consensual, I'd suggest that as I feel she is a decent, caring character then she might need some convincing, or pushing in that direction.

A cuckold game?! DOWNLOAD!

Hooray!

The game has nothing at all going on so, giving it a rating just because it might be good or bad is useless, not gonna hype or throw to the gutter sometimes that's not even developed yet

Sounds reasonable - it's just the intro.

too many choice and path for just intro !

I want it configurable to suit your personal preferences - you can always play different paths / attitudes.

I like it so far (you are good at writing a browbeaten husband, I'm sure that the cuckoldry will be excellent. NB I went humiliation path) but it ended very abruptly and without any sexual content, bar the wanking. I was expecting a little more....

I feel like the main image on the game loadup (wifey with the black fella and his arm around her) promises something.... but we didn't even see another guy. But still... I don't want to be too critical. The models are fantastic and the writing is good. Just feels too short, even as an intro.

Edit: not even an intro, it says "episode 1"! From that you should expect some serious action to happen.

Fair enough - wasn't really sure what to call it. Please bear in mind that the next installment is wife PoV over the same period - so still setting up. After that - we are go. Don't rush the girl - it's a big step !

There is a little bug in the game: if in the evening i decide to help the wife (put the dinner in the oven), at a certain point the scene return when the wife is angry if you have selected the other choice (relax watching porn)

Yep - it's sorted. Apologies for that. See post #94 or #126 for new links which deal with that issue. So annoying!

This looks good!


I agree with this. My opinion is that NTR is good enough without the small peepee stuff. Unless its something you're trying to build around story-wise, small dick stuff actually detracts from the content cause it feels too try-hard. Let your story shine through.

Thanks for sharing this with us

You're very welcome. I'll address this definitely for the sharing route - still thinking about the ntr path.

Bed time in Britannia - thanks to everyone who has made this a good experience for a beginner.

 

[Deleted member 396172]

the game looks good but i am not a fan of NTR so i am out ...good luck for ur game developer !

 

[Yellow Pheaver]

damn i will wait for more content just not enough for me

 

[Punkreas]

This game deserves the seal of approval

 

[Deleted member 1221028]

You're very welcome. I'll address this definitely for the sharing route - still thinking about the ntr path.

For the NTR path it is a useful part of the humiliation. Just speaking as a fan. I have no interest in swinging or sharing so can't speak for them. The humiliation and degradation, rejection of small PP is all a good part of the fantasy.

As I say, I'm not so into the sharing side, but I imagine for guys who do like it, "humiliation and degradation, rejection of small PP" would be a turn-off if anything lol. They just want to have fun with the wifey and share that fun