- Thread starter Illegible Mink
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- Jan 7, 2021
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Generally looking really good, I also got the jump from making dinner to her complaining about me wanking. A couple of things though, the guy's dick is way too small. Either make him a grower or give him a normal cock. I know the small dick humiliation thing seems to be a thing but an actual small dick is less hot somehow. Maybe because I have a bit of a cuck/sharing fetish but a reasonably big dick and want to self insert 
Also the wife is a total bitch whenever the MC doesn't say exactly the right thing. Poor guy would be walking on egg shells if they've been together a while. Don't most couples take the ups and downs in stride rather than getting shitty whenever their partner doesn't follow their plan? She fires up way too quick. I wouldn't be letting her cuck me, I'd be cheating on her and leaving after dealing with that for a few months/years.
Also the wife is a total bitch whenever the MC doesn't say exactly the right thing. Poor guy would be walking on egg shells if they've been together a while. Don't most couples take the ups and downs in stride rather than getting shitty whenever their partner doesn't follow their plan? She fires up way too quick. I wouldn't be letting her cuck me, I'd be cheating on her and leaving after dealing with that for a few months/years.
- Apr 13, 2018
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Awesome start. I absolutely love the fact you allow the name change right out of the gate with no mod. I wish more games did this as it's so much better with immersion. Also I love it's a brunette mature model. It's crazy how many games that are supposed to be about a married couple seems like the MC is married to a young woman. I will definitely be following this!
Preview images look good, shame it's ntr, not my cup of tea. All in all, wish you good luck with your game, dev.
- Jul 30, 2017
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Dear Developer, the narration font color has a MAJOR contrast issue.
This website takes your narration font foreground color and compares it to the red background color:
Try this red color instead, it's darker:
Hope this gets fixed.
In the mean time, I have to edit ren'py files. Uggh. Np though, the game is worth it. EDIT: Oh no, more outliner colors.......
This website takes your narration font foreground color and compares it to the red background color:
You must be registered to see the links
- Notice the bad score of 3.99 ...Try this red color instead, it's darker:
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- #680000Hope this gets fixed.
In the mean time, I have to edit ren'py files. Uggh. Np though, the game is worth it. EDIT: Oh no, more outliner colors.......
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- May 3, 2017
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Damn the wife looks hot, great model
Also hope you have plenty of hardcore NTR, cuckolding, humiliating scenes etc live up to the title of the game!
Also hope you have plenty of hardcore NTR, cuckolding, humiliating scenes etc live up to the title of the game!
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- Apr 29, 2019
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renders look decent but there's all of 5 minutes of content in there. A subversion of 1.0? Who are you trying to fool?
This should be 0.1.0 if anything.
This should be 0.1.0 if anything.
Good game has a lot of potential hope to see more in the future update, good luck Illegible Mink
- Feb 22, 2021
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That happened to me too on the darkside route. Great game, looking forward to more content.
This, though to be fair I think it does makes sense if you're take the cuckold route. If you aren't, it indeed feels weird that one moment she's biting your head off and the next she's all "I love you so much", depending on whether you say or do the exact right thing.
- Oct 24, 2019
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The dev probably fucked up the indentation of a pretty big block of code
If this whole thing was indented another level it would fall under the else part of an if-then statement for cooking dinner versus going upstairs and wanking off to the computer
Code:
if x1a:
scene 61e
e "Oh, you know what - I'm going downstairs."
e "I hope it was worth it."
p "Come on, [namey]. That's unfair."
e "Leave me alone. I'm going to make dinner."
else:
scene 61e
e "Oh, you know what - I'm going downstairs."
e "I hope you enjoyed bashing your little cock."
p "Come on, [namey]. That's unfair."
e "Leave me alone. I'm going to make dinner."
label caught:
scene 46
with irisout
"{outlinecolor=#00aedb}Man, I've really fucked up there.{/outlinecolor}"
$ x8 = True
scene 1
with fade
"{outlinecolor=#ff0000}You give her 20 minutes cool down time and then go down to eat.{/outlinecolor}"
scene 37
with irisout
p "This looks lovely, [namey]."
"{outlinecolor=#ff0000}You eat your meal in an uncomfortable atmosphere.{/outlinecolor}"
scene 42a
with irisout
p "I'm really sorry about before, [namey]. I love you, you know."
e "You should be sorry. It really hurts that you'd do that."
if x1a:
scene 43b
with dissolve
e "All I want is some attention. I work hard at creating a home for us."
e "I do it because I love you."
p "I know babe. I'll make it up to you."
e "You'd better - otherwise I'll give up."
scene 42a
with dissolve
e "Anyway - I don't want to discuss it any more."
e "Can we move on, please."
p "Okay."
else:
p "Can I ask...you criticized my size. Do you really think that about me?"
scene 43b
e "What? No. It's fine."
p "Really?"
scene 42a
with dissolve
e "Yes, really. It's fine. I was just annoyed."
e "Anyway - I don't want to discuss it any more."
e "Can we move on, please."
- Jun 1, 2018
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Thank you for the positive message though.
I understand - it's just an intro, there's more on the way.
My wife would love that - she's a huge fan of Pulp Fiction - so thanks from herThis game deserves the seal of approval
Oh - I reckon they'll be brutal (probably psychological rather than physical) once the scene is set - there are many ways this can go.Hey
I am a fan on femdom and maledom....I saw only female domination in the future tags. What kind of femdom scenes are you planning?
Yes, let's - thanksi am in lets rock
- Jun 1, 2018
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Thanks for your views - knob opinions have been logged. New links on post #127 and #109. I will be updating the main page overnight. I don't think she was totally unreasonable all the time - but I see what you're saying. From my point of view though - I have to set up perhaps an exaggerated sequence of events, otherwise they'll all get on lovely - and bugger all will happenGenerally looking really good, I also got the jump from making dinner to her complaining about me wanking. A couple of things though, the guy's dick is way too small. Either make him a grower or give him a normal cock. I know the small dick humiliation thing seems to be a thing but an actual small dick is less hot somehow. Maybe because I have a bit of a cuck/sharing fetish but a reasonably big dick and want to self insert
Also the wife is a total bitch whenever the MC doesn't say exactly the right thing. Poor guy would be walking on egg shells if they've been together a while. Don't most couples take the ups and downs in stride rather than getting shitty whenever their partner doesn't follow their plan? She fires up way too quick. I wouldn't be letting her cuck me, I'd be cheating on her and leaving after dealing with that for a few months/years.
Yep - certainly have a soft spot for the milf thing myself.
Oh fuck - sorry about that. Saying that - you're lucky in my view. You should see mine.
Thank you - much appreciated.
Thanks for your advice on this - I'll have a mess about and see how it works. Thanks for the compliment tho' too.
Although it certainly might look so, actually, I have no real preference re the story. Just liked doing the picture. As the game moves on you'll see that this isn't necessarily the case.
I'm sorry you think so - took quite a while to do.empty game
even not a game
just few pics
Yes - it's going to be hard (hopefully in more ways than one). No point otherwise when travelling the ntr lifestyle.
There is going to be pain - no point otherwise. Sounds odd o say that
. When I think of what hurts to the core - that's what is probably going in.Tbh - neither can I - bloody real life!
Just releasing what I've done - don't really think the name is too important - but I understand if there's a convention.
They're yet to be filled - it's just how I designed the gallery. Sorry for any confusion.
Thanks muchly.
I will be looking into this - but just slowly building my design foundations bit by bit.
See posts #109 or #127 for new links. Really annoyed this slipped in. I will be editing main page to reflect fixes.
I will be doing some editing re the sharing route. I can see where you're coming from, just wanted to build in choices which were illustrated by a clear mood change. Everyday is a school day.
Yep - that was a mistake. I noticed that too late. It'll go in future releases.
Thanks for this - I learned Ren'Py for this game - so basically it's pretty messy. I'm sure that I'll code more efficiently the older I get. The error is fixed (see posts #109 and #127 for links).
Illegible Mink can you give a time frame until the hotwifing starts or a rough guess. Am thinking of joining your Patreon then.
- Jun 1, 2018
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Can't really do that - as much as I'd want to
. I certainly don't want to rush the story, but equally it will be no longer than it needs to be. I feel that this sort of topic really has to flow realistically and hope that by doing so, you'll empathise and invest in the characters. Just keep in the loop and you'll see how it all pans out.