VN Ren'Py Abandoned Welcome to Temptation [v0.3] [CarnalCardinalGames]

[Dilettante]

I think these fetishes even more than very specific. I'd say you need to be connoisseur to enjoy any of these. Not for vanilla majority. I'm far from being vanilla, but for me, only last batch with "phone cheating" (it's everywhere in japanese games though) and secretly groping seem enjoyable. If it's against Mark or Sophia's husband.

 

[Mike Summers]

I'm fairly new to the adult VN's, but it looks promising from what I've seen so far. Renders are nice, and the writing style makes the story believable.

Excited to see where you go with it from here, and I'm very surprised you haven't picked up any more patrons with the quality of your first version.

You've just earned one more. Good luck with your work!

 

[thecardinal]

I'm fairly new to the adult VN's, but it looks promising from what I've seen so far. Renders are nice, and the writing style makes the story believable.

Excited to see where you go with it from here, and I'm very surprised you haven't picked up any more patrons with the quality of your first version.

You've just earned one more. Good luck with your work!

Thanks! :happyblush

I just released an update yesterday with all new renders, so maybe that's why. Plus a lot of devs dump games after the first few updates, so no one wants to donate to a developer unless they see regular releases with quality content.

@Dilettante Yeah, I figured once I mentioned Sera had a boyfriend he would be instantly disliked.

 

[Kara Zor-El]

a woman dev making a male MC game...

most of time, it turn pretty good.. we'll see

Huh?
Oh my goodness
I feel embarrassed after my scene suggestions now. :coldsweat::FuckYea:

 

[macadam]

Huh?
Oh my goodness
I feel embarrassed after my scene suggestions now. :coldsweat::FuckYea:

why ?

some women are as perv as males... specially the women who make adult games

 

[Kara Zor-El]

why ?

some women are as perv as males... specially the women who make adult games

Very true. And I see some girls in very kinky games threads. And they are not picky choosing games like us. We’ve issues playing female MC games but they don’t mind playing male MC ones.

 

[thecardinal]

Very true. And I see some girls in very kinky games threads. And they are not picky choosing games like us. We’ve issues playing female MC games but they don’t mind playing male MC ones.

Not much of a choice if you watch movies or play games. Women are VERY used to having a male protagonist.

Besides, no one cares about the protagonist in these. Both you and me care more about the girls.

 

[Kara Zor-El]

Not much of a choice if you watch movies or play games. Women are VERY used to having a male protagonist.

Besides, no one cares about the protagonist in these. Both you and me care more about the girls.

Hmm actually I am one of rare guy in f95zone who care about the males in games too. If They have a role in story that makes game more interesting for me.

 

[macadam]

Hmm actually I am one of rare guy in f95zone who care about the males in games too. If They have a role in story that makes game more interesting for me.

that typical from player who immerse themself in the MC...

i dont do that XD thats why i prefer play as female in most of games ( and they loko badass tho ), with few exception. ( like being a chicken )

 

[Dilettante]

@Dilettante Yeah, I figured once I mentioned Sera had a boyfriend he would be instantly disliked.

I'm actually far from being rush when it comes to quick judgement of characters (even if they "sporty" type males). Though, i do expect to steal Sera and Sofia anyway, so why would i think positive about Mark. It's rare to me to find male in these games i can honestly like tbh.

 

[Dilettante]

Besides, no one cares about the protagonist in these. Both you and me care more about the girls.

Yeah, i do care about the girls more i guess. But i can very much care about my MC at the same time. Be it male or female. So i would agree with Kara Zor-El about

Hmm actually I am one of rare guy in f95zone who care about the males in games too. If They have a role in story that makes game more interesting for me.

Love good stories with good portion of porn in these games. If male is adding good bit of fun to the game, why not? Also, that point about female devs is very true. Know few of those, and their games is far from being devoid of fetishes. What i like sometimes, is different perspective when it comes to these games. And some female devs offer us pretty unique writing that fulfills it.

 

[thecardinal]

I guess according to my poll on Patreon Carina and Sofia are the most popular characters so far. *shrugs*

 

[thecardinal]

Miles and Carina's AP Literature teacher

 

[Kara Zor-El]

Miles and Carina's AP Literature teacher
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Hmmm I imagine her in lilac & white color lingerie. :evilsmile:

White blouse would be my first pick for her.

 

[thecardinal]

Hmmm I imagine her in lilac & white color lingerie.

11 minutes from seeing your post to posting this render. :eazyHype:

 

[Kara Zor-El]

11 minutes from seeing your post to posting this render. :eazyHype:
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Loved this ebony. is it possible give lighter tone to sole.
For clothes I think her colors white, lilac , olive , black and purple.

 

[thecardinal]

Loved this ebony. is it possible give lighter tone to sole.
For clothes I think her colors white, lilac , olive , black and purple.

I mean this in a nice way, but some of you guys are really picky. :closedeyesmile:

I can do requests sometimes. And I don't know of any Daz asset or shader that can lighten the soles of feet.

 

[Kara Zor-El]

I mean this in a nice way, but some of you guys are really picky. :closedeyesmile:

I can do requests sometimes. And I don't know of any Daz asset or shader that can lighten the soles of feet.

no offense taken :closedtongue:

I don’t request tho, i was just suggesting for her later looks.

Okey I’ll slow down.:FuckYea:

 

[Nottravis]

So I gave this a quick try and I just wanted to say I think you have a sound basis for a game going forward. The intro renders were really nicely done but, more importantly, I was curious to know what would happen next.

Good luck with this CC.

 

[Dilettante]

I guess according to my poll on Patreon Carina and Sofia are the most popular characters so far. *shrugs*

That means my vote has a good chance (though i very much doubt Carina can lose at this point). I think you already know who that was. Not too surprising, she's basically everything you can wish for. They all are great girls though, it was a hard choice.

Miles and Carina's AP Literature teacher

Yes, finally ebony! I was hoping that we would have hot chocolate milf as teacher or something, and we are getting her for complete satisfaction. Such a good one too. :winkytongue: