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ChaosOpen

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That's cool
Mayb instead of thinking that is has to branch out or be a dead end (ending future scenes with Sandra), just have a different scene play
The part where you said Sandra would get mad (which doesnt play on either options for me) could just be a small h-scene interaction like caressing or kissing her
Considering that another scene exist where she gets mad, it wouldnt be more work if it was that instead, and it doesnt have to force branching anything out
However if your goal is to have the option to cut all ties with Sandra then ig ur on track (tho idk who would opt this lol)

I did pick the top option n didnt see anything more with Sandra all the way through to the end of the game -despite the result still caring for Molly- so mayb it did end things with her??
Essentially there is no "wrong" choice, the VN continues as if you had made the correct choice, but it exists to remind you of what Logan's priority is. The original plan wasn't actually to have a "mean" or "no mercy" path, just a path where he dotes on Molly and has lots of sex, and a path where he doesn't dote on Molly and barely gets any action.
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Claw2k11

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I want to ask just to be sure here since I've been digging around this thread for a while now and found nothing so far, the game only goes up to the scene with Emily so far, right? With her getting saved by Logan then heading to her room in the dorm?

If not, could someone direct me to a link with a more updated version or post a link of some sort to the current version?
 

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Onhold? please tell me that this is momentary and will not be canceled :unsure:
No, this is a passion project and I do plan to finish it. However, I've been stuck for awhile with writers block and I'm not really sure where to go from here. While I get things sorted out. Since I don't know how long this will take I decided to inform people that the project is on hold.
 

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No, this is a passion project and I do plan to finish it. However, I've been stuck for awhile with writers block and I'm not really sure where to go from here. While I get things sorted out. Since I don't know how long this will take I decided to inform people that the project is on hold.
Thanks man and yes, your game has a great theme, more games like this are missing, where the girl is the "cuckold" and the MC is a real "bull", usually it's the other way around and it's over exploited.

Good luck and for my part take the time you want.
 
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No, this is a passion project and I do plan to finish it. However, I've been stuck for awhile with writers block and I'm not really sure where to go from here. While I get things sorted out. Since I don't know how long this will take I decided to inform people that the project is on hold.
Gotta recharge the batteries sometimes. I know that one.

But I will say this. You don't need every girl to be 100% unique. Just a twist to an existing girl can work perfectly fine. You've got a lot you can work with and a lot of wiggle room with the way you set it up so don't think you have to restart or reboot. This game is fantastic, it's like a unicorn.

Now before I leave you with well wishes I'm going to drop a scenario I once participated in for a girlfriend. She had a friend who was into me and had a seriously warped fantasy, rape. Mind you not wanting to be raped but wanting to rape and not pegging, no she wanted to force herself on a man and say humiliating and cruel things.

She was a mess afterwards and she was scared of herself as much as anything else. We still maintain this relationship today but no matter how many times we explore this part of her I'm always shocked by it. I would never think such a cute and small woman would have such a dark side to her.

I hope you delve into this kind of stuff more as not all the girls need to be vanilla, maybe some of them also have some messed up stuff they want to face and explore? I personally love the bits where the wife is facing her own demons.

Anyways enjoy your time off.
 
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ara1111

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Wish reviews for 'remakes' like this were seperate to old versions. New version is too new to want to review, but I don't want to delete my review when its relevant to the old one. Its misleading.
 
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Because the author ended up not liking how the story progressed and the fans were of the same mind as well
Well, it was more the lack of progression, if that makes any sense. In the originals Logan's mindset in season 3 hadn't changed from season 1. I wanted to have a series where he slowly becomes more dominant and more comfortable cuckolding Molly, but that never materialized due to my own lack of talent and/or experience.
 
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Well, it was more the lack of progression, if that makes any sense. In the originals Logan's mindset in season 3 hadn't changed from season 1. I wanted to have a series where he slowly becomes more dominant and more comfortable cuckolding Molly, but that never materialized due to my own lack of talent and/or experience.
Hmmm... Maybe that progession slowed down because you want to paint a fateful realistic picture based on your experience and interviews with actual cases. That's very recommendable but also takes away the freedom you had in the original game. Maybe it's a good idea to make some "hybrid" by putting in some lighthearted scenes mixed with some more serious themes. There are also people in real life that are more playful about these kind of things, or make very clear it's only a "script" like a theatrical play.

Anyway - Good luck with getting out of this "writers block". I can only say I hope there will be some progress in the future, but take your time and only start moving forward with this VN if you feel really comfortable about it...
 

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Well this awakened a kink in me I didn't even know I had. 10/10 stuff here.

Was genuinely distraught when I noticed the OnHold tag, but glad to see it isn't entirely abandoned! Looking forward to future content.
 

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hi VitalSignns I'm a fan what's mine is yours and the Desired Affair and I'm sad :cry:to hear the Desired Affair was Abandoned I thought it was pretty good and the special lessons what Chelsey aka mommy was pretty hot and I hope you can get over your writer's block and maybe hear some idea from another person get your creative juices flowing again and if you like maybe I can give you one of my idea and keep on doing what you love and don't listen to those trolls
 
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ChaosOpen

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Hmmm... Maybe that progession slowed down because you want to paint a fateful realistic picture based on your experience and interviews with actual cases. That's very recommendable but also takes away the freedom you had in the original game. Maybe it's a good idea to make some "hybrid" by putting in some lighthearted scenes mixed with some more serious themes. There are also people in real life that are more playful about these kind of things, or make very clear it's only a "script" like a theatrical play.

Anyway - Good luck with getting out of this "writers block". I can only say I hope there will be some progress in the future, but take your time and only start moving forward with this VN if you feel really comfortable about it...
I'm not above putting jokes in, but the problem I am having right now is a key aspect that MUST be tackled. Namely, Logan's change in heart. Right now he thinks that this whole thing is just going to destroy his relationship that he spent the last 20 years building. I need to write a series of events, a catalyst where he finally realizes that as it was, a monogamous relationship, it was falling apart due to Molly's insecurities about her age and her infertility and this is her way of coping. In her mind it is a release from the normal wife's physical duties of pleasing her husband sexually and focusing on a purely emotional relationship.

That being said, that is some rather complex issues to get across, how do I show that on screen in a way that is interesting but at the same time covers everything I want to cover? This has to be short, it is the scene where Logan makes the realization "if I don't embrace this, I may lose Molly" which runs contrary to common sense but is the situation that Logan finds himself in.
 

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hi VitalSignns I'm a fan what's mine is yours and the Desired Affair and I'm sad :cry:to hear the Desired Affair was Abandoned I thought it was pretty good and the special lessons what Chelsey aka mommy was pretty hot and I hope you can get over your writer's block and maybe hear some idea from another person get your creative juices flowing again and if you like maybe I can give you one of my idea and keep on doing what you love and don't listen to those trolls
Sure, I'd love to hear your ideas. You can message me on here or discord(though I am going out of town this weekend).
 

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Sure, I'd love to hear your ideas. You can message me on here or discord(though I am going out of town this weekend)
after seeing your reply I Started to thinking up some ideas then I realized today is friday and I just missed you on both sites so I hope you have a fun and relaxing time and come back nice and refreshed and I will be playing what's mine is yours remake to get some ideas also is really fun to play
 

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I'm not above putting jokes in, but the problem I am having right now is a key aspect that MUST be tackled. Namely, Logan's change in heart. Right now he thinks that this whole thing is just going to destroy his relationship that he spent the last 20 years building. I need to write a series of events, a catalyst where he finally realizes that as it was, a monogamous relationship, it was falling apart due to Molly's insecurities about her age and her infertility and this is her way of coping. In her mind it is a release from the normal wife's physical duties of pleasing her husband sexually and focusing on a purely emotional relationship.

That being said, that is some rather complex issues to get across, how do I show that on screen in a way that is interesting but at the same time covers everything I want to cover? This has to be short, it is the scene where Logan makes the realization "if I don't embrace this, I may lose Molly" which runs contrary to common sense but is the situation that Logan finds himself in.
Well - I think it does not have to be that complicated. Think about it. You explained here what the situation is around Logan and Molly. That's on the internet, readable for everyone.

Molly got her ideas from the internet, after reading and watching certain content. Thus - Both Logan and Molly have access to certain places concerning the kind of things they are doing. It's not too far fetched that on one of those sites there are post or articles from couples that gone through the same difficult phases. When Logan reads about a couple that was on the brink of breaking up and the reasons why, he gets interested. When he reads the woman part of that story where the woman tells about the insecurities she has he finally links that to Molly, and realize what's going on in Molly's head all the time.

It's just a general idea and it has to be worked out to make it work. Maybe you can make a story how Molly and Logan get in contact (using said internet location) with a couple that went through a comparable situation? There are several ways to get out of this deadlock where Logan is in.

Just a few ideas...
 

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i just finish the remake one, and it's a whole lot of fun! you know what, im usually the person to hate the bullshit dialog in porn game, because mostly the writing is just bullshit and feels like didn't do anything to the story, at certaint point im just skipping the dialog

But your game is different! i don't remember when the last time im serious to reading seriously to porn game, all of your writing about cuckqueaning or even the fantasy these girls had, and or all of the lewd dialog, all of them i can't have enough to just reading indifferently, they feel like a real world, real person, i can't have enough of these

very sad when im reaching the end of the remake, i thought that the remake was including all seasons, and based on what you said on description about the original was a failure i have a doubt to play it :(

Do you think i should play the original too to satisfy my desire of your game? and when's the next part of the remake gonna up? thanks for making this wonderful game!
 

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i just finish the remake one, and it's a whole lot of fun! you know what, im usually the person to hate the bullshit dialog in porn game, because mostly the writing is just bullshit and feels like didn't do anything to the story, at certaint point im just skipping the dialog

But your game is different! i don't remember when the last time im serious to reading seriously to porn game, all of your writing about cuckqueaning or even the fantasy these girls had, and or all of the lewd dialog, all of them i can't have enough to just reading indifferently, they feel like a real world, real person, i can't have enough of these

very sad when im reaching the end of the remake, i thought that the remake was including all seasons, and based on what you said on description about the original was a failure i have a doubt to play it :(

Do you think i should play the original too to satisfy my desire of your game? and when's the next part of the remake gonna up? thanks for making this wonderful game!
I don't believe that porn and a good story are mutually exclusive, in fact with the length of visual novels there really should be no excuse to not have both. Most romance stories start with two single characters and end with a couple, however, ask anyone who has actually been in a relationship and they will tell you that getting a girlfriend is the easy part and it tends to play out the same way every time. Once you're in a relationship and having sex, that is where things start to get tricky and in my opinion, where all of the more interesting stories are.
 
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