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The problem is making that interesting. Yes, it would be an easy solution as a writer if I just had Logan look up the info online and honestly, it would probably be a lot more realistic as well, I think most anyone would look it up online or buy a book or something. However, I have to remember I am a story-writer first, and that includes entertaining the audience first and foremost. Hence, why Ryan Taylor exists.Well - I think it does not have to be that complicated. Think about it. You explained here what the situation is around Logan and Molly. That's on the internet, readable for everyone.
Molly got her ideas from the internet, after reading and watching certain content. Thus - Both Logan and Molly have access to certain places concerning the kind of things they are doing. It's not too far fetched that on one of those sites there are post or articles from couples that gone through the same difficult phases. When Logan reads about a couple that was on the brink of breaking up and the reasons why, he gets interested. When he reads the woman part of that story where the woman tells about the insecurities she has he finally links that to Molly, and realize what's going on in Molly's head all the time.
It's just a general idea and it has to be worked out to make it work. Maybe you can make a story how Molly and Logan get in contact (using said internet location) with a couple that went through a comparable situation? There are several ways to get out of this deadlock where Logan is in.
Just a few ideas...
We are heading into spoiler territory, so be warned, but the reason why Sandra sleeps with other men isn't because Ryan is a sissy who was bullied by his wife or because Sandra was corrupted, but a much more down-to-earth reason.
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That being said, that isn't the only thing going on in the plot, I also need to take care of other plot threads, and keep in mind this isn't just "Emily takes her clothes off in front of Logan and that leads to her losing her virginity on livestream" or something, I need to have each scene from start to finish, which means where it takes place, what characters are in the scene, how they are posed during the dialogue, and the dialogue itself. Each character needs numerous scenes and they all need to be in a pattern that both gives them equal screentime yet are in chronological order. So, it all gets rather complicated as each scene needs to be interesting in it's own right yet at the same time fit into the overall narrative.
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