Interesting with the rework. But, I really dislike the long scenes you cant click to advance and have to wait for them to finish or you miss stuff. I prefer to click to get to next screen and not set waiting through long scenes, especially a sex scene. I find long unclickable scenes very annoying, especially when you don't know when they end. It gets confusing because sometimes you don't know if you can click yet or not. I just don't like that kind of structure in a renpy game. Just like I hate the long "pan up" scenes when someone walks in the room and you have to wait for it to finish panning up.
I also dislike the music/artist, chosen. Can't stand the voice. Had to mute the music.
Render, mood, and art direction are great though.
Also, whoever wrote the walkthrough, wtf does "Mhy +1" mean? How about telling us what Mhy means heh?