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Yeah, I agree the timelines don't make a whole lot of sense - Willi did Monica on the kitchen table at what age if Leia didn't have breasts yet, and they're twins, and women physically mature faster? But I can fully understand a teenager freaking out about his feelings for his 'special friend' being discovered. Despite the general porn/AVN logic, most people will get pretty repressed about taboo relationships rather than tell people.And here we have some inconsistency. It was heavyly implyed that William and Leia had something running - or better to say, they have fucked. Otherwise there would be no way that Kaite would be able to trigger William so fast whlie watching TV together as Miru was away to take the pill. Theres something around that William wants to keep at all costs away from Miru.
Even in Chapter three William has accused Katie she had him blackmailed in the past with spelling the beans to "her" - who ever that my be.
The second inconsistency I've noticed was that William has told Leia he was in prison. But in SG the book clib meeting was mentioned that William and Leia where quite active in basketball sports, but not as players.
Leia had some fish things running in manipulation/bribe/blackmail the other teams to lose and William has trained the girls in his own special was for endorphin release...
Somehoe is the timeline of this events off, well, we have to see how this works out with the future releases of both games ...Code:jen "As if! Leia was totally responsible for it!" scene sb1114 with dssr katie "I don't recall." scene sb1111 with vpunch jen "Bitch! Just admit it!" jen "We would've never lost against your team!" scene sb1114 with dssr katie "We had a good team, a good coach, and I was at peak performance." scene sb1112 with dssr jen "Bullshit! Your teammates spent more time getting backshots from William than actually training!" scene sb1095x with dssr "Sasha and Adrianna share an awkward look." scene sb1115 with dssr katie "Whatever helps you cope." scene sb1116 with dssa katie "Loser." scene sb1113 with dssr "Jenna's fuming so hard, her body starts shaking a little." scene black with Dissolve(2)
Willi's age even up to leaving highschool would still fit, it's just the thought that Leia was under developed that would be weird - to me the continuity error is the breasts somment; erase that and everything else still makes relative sense.
The timeline has to be a big gap for Leia to have built such an empire, and for Uncle Joe to be arrested and serve a sentence for beating the Krayt member.
Regarding the team - seeing they don't own a university yet, and Willi doesn't have a job, there's chances that he'll go undercover there like was suggested in the original as a coach. Or maybe it was public/community teams, not college teams that Jenna refers to? The Leia blackmail vs the other teams would fit in still with Willi being a uni coach, if they're trying to get to the bottom of whatever it is going on. Can't remember the significance of the school in the prerework though, and why Abigail wanted Willi undercover there.