VN Ren'Py Where the Heart Is [S1 Rev1] [CheekyGimp]

[felicemastronzo]

I agree Monica is the second Gold Digger. Monica is hiding the the story how his (Mum & Dad break-up) and not telling the MC. The Fortune Teller could not tell MC the real name of Dizzy becouse she was there. You can see her very unease when she was reading MC fortune. Her condition would be not to contact the MC. Ellaine saw the WILL and send MC to Monica so both will loss. Elaine condition would be to live with MC at the house. If MC is not there than she would loss the house to MC.

its just my oppinion how the story will go.

But Monica should know her conditions of the will by now, and it doesn't seem to me that she is doing anything to alienate MC.
she would have already given up her inheritance for love? Not exactly gold-digging behavior.

Then being subsequent to Elaine I expect her to be significantly younger than her, while Monica is more or less her age.

 

[jish55]

But Monica should know her conditions of the will by now, and it doesn't seem to me that she is doing anything to alienate MC.
she would have already given up her inheritance for love? Not exactly gold-digging behavior.

Then being subsequent to Elaine I expect her to be significantly younger than her, while Monica is more or less her age.

What if Monica's condition for the will was to house MC so as to cause mc to lose, but there's another hidden portion that she'd need to do in order to fulfill it? It wouldn't be above MC's father to have multiple wills contradict each other so as to make multiple individuals lose while also causing chaos amongst the 3.

 

[Kingkela]

Also Monicas daughters maybe MC half sisters. She is the reason Mc's parents spilt .There is nothing on Monicas Ex or her daughters father. ( When MC was there with his mother .... No menstion of a DADY in the house by Keite and Jenna.)

There are more seerets behind Monica, which lead to the 2nd Gold digger.

 

[Machete]

Dizzy is Zarah. Her will's condition is to pointlessly change hairstyle at least 5 time before the game ends.

 

[Uriel ☁]

Also Monicas daughters maybe MC half sisters

From the mouth of the man himself:

Don't normally answer directly to stuff like this (like to keep people guessing), but Monica/Katie/Jenna are NOT blood related to MC.

 

[felicemastronzo]

What if Monica's condition for the will was to house MC so as to cause mc to lose, but there's another hidden portion that she'd need to do in order to fulfill it? It wouldn't be above MC's father to have multiple wills contradict each other so as to make multiple individuals lose while also causing chaos amongst the 3.

if Monica was the third heiress, at that point, it would not matter if that was her condition in the will, it would still benefit her as it would increase her share of the estate.

but I believe that all conditions are in some way "inconvenient" for the person who has to fulfil them, otherwise it would be too easy.

 

[LionHeart 95]

if Monica was the third heiress, at that point, it would not matter if that was her condition in the will, it would still benefit her as it would increase her share of the estate.

but I believe that all conditions are in some way "inconvenient" for the person who has to fulfil them, otherwise it would be too easy.
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You make a good point i think we do need next update to learn more, but as i look at all the comments using things here form those whom do put up good options my thoughts are still Lily because of one age MC dad will want someone younger than Elaine so list gets short to Angel, Bella, Lily, and most gold diggers are living a good life and don't want to loose it. Angel does not stand up for her self so not viper, Bella and Lily will speak up so possible vipers there Lily just hides it better.
i did just look at the banner lily is not there? so my heart don't lie with her lol..

but if Monica was the second gold digger, why is she mentioned by name to MC and then Dizzy also mentioned in audio recording from MC's dad talks as two separate people.

 

[LionHeart 95]

They mention that the viper is cunning in nature. It's possible that it's a lie to throw us off.

all is possible, but lily is cunning she hides her intelligence through the bimbo routine and the conversation at party shows this
in fact every conversation where MC is not around the other girls lily shows her ability to dis with the best of them.

 

[Blaisdale]

all is possible, but lily is cunning she hides her intelligence through the bimbo routine and the conversation at party shows this
in fact every conversation where MC is not around the other girls lily shows her ability to dis with the best of them.

There's a difference though between having a good mind set with being snarky but being deceitful makes you think in different ways.
I can come up with come backs great on the fly but too far from being a called a viper.
Granted I'm using myself as an example but my views have been challenged here in a good way on characters.
Which thank you to those who do by the way.
I'm snarky and can go toe to toe but far from being mind set to be a viper.

Kinda like the idea of Monica being a gold digger.
Also don't because I love how kind hearted she is lol
I always felt her personality seemed to be missing something.
However when you got the money Zara (God I'm old I think that's her name) came to you to help Monica out?
Would this maybe be a sign of Monica manipulating Zara to help you to give her money?
Don't actually believe that but just seeing what people may say back.
If she was a gold digger might add more to her picture.

I think her mild manor makes me think of Monica rarely.
Don't hate me for that
I did however believe when the wine scene was there she should have been given half the wine.
Just as an act of kindness for her letting you stay there.

 

[zetsupetsu]

I would love the Monica twist to be true. That seems like the more interesting take if she was the third person.

The Lily theory is too ridiculous imo given the age and timeline, and the Bella/Jolina is the predictable one.

So I'd definitely love the curveball if it were Monica. Its in the right spot of being not too predictable and not too outlandish either to make it plausible and believable.

 

[BeingADikDik]

I would love the Monica twist to be true. That seems like the more interesting take if she was the third person.

The Lily theory is too ridiculous imo given the age and timeline, and the Bella/Jolina is the predictable one.

So I'd definitely love the curveball if it were Monica. Its in the right spot of being not too predictable and not too outlandish either to make it plausible and believable.

It would be more believable if Zarah is the snake. After her looks declined, she manipulates drunk Monica to get her way. In this way, if Monica is guilty of indiscretions (e.g., causing MC's parents to get divorced), then the blame can lie not on her normally sweet disposition but in her naivety and Zarah's influence.

 

[felicemastronzo]

I would love the Monica twist to be true. That seems like the more interesting take if she was the third person.

The Lily theory is too ridiculous imo given the age and timeline, and the Bella/Jolina is the predictable one.

So I'd definitely love the curveball if it were Monica. Its in the right spot of being not too predictable and not too outlandish either to make it plausible and believable.

surely the Monica hypothesis is the most dramatically interesting one. it would be a real betrayal towards mc and her mother, it would force her daughters into a difficult position.

for me there are two characters whose behaviour clearly stands out from the others; Bella and Jolina, the only two who are ruthlessly courting MC and who will do anything to snatch an invitation to his beach house.
I see Jolina as a gold digger for Donald and Bella as a gold digger for all 3 heirs.

How loving must a sister be who quits her job and leaves her home to help out? Bella is a girl with a plan

 

[TurkishSucuk]

About gold diggers, I've would love the idea of Monica and Elaine; two old manipulative bitches tries to seduce MC to blind and steal from him.

For other girls Jolina is too obvious choice, so dosent fit the twist story, Lily dosent make sense, Bella or Zarah does make senses.

 

[MrFriendly]

For other girls Jolina is too obvious choice, so dosent fit the twist story, Lily dosent make sense, Bella or Zarah does make senses.

What if Lily was part of a grand conspiracy? What if Bella and Jolina have been working together to discredit Elaine and enlisted Lily to help out?

How?

Who cares how! Just imagine the foursome of exhausting angry sex that would follow!

 

[lyfsavor]

Is it just me or is nearly every dev of some of the most popular games on F95 falling ill lately??? The odds of that are rather astronomical don't you think?

 

[Black Mamba24]

Is it just me or is nearly every dev of some of the most popular games on F95 falling ill lately??? The odds of that are rather astronomical don't you think?

I don't know man. I also feel ill everyday I have to go to work, but luckily that dissapears automatically around friday evening.

 

[Ninja of Death]

Yeah, it seems being a dev is one of the most dangerous jobs in the world. Soldiers, cops and firemen have it easy. Taxi drivers and convenience store workers, too. [EXTREME SARCASM]

 

[zetsupetsu]

Yeah, it seems being a dev is one of the most dangerous jobs in the world. Soldiers, cops and firemen have it easy. Taxi drivers and convenience store workers, too. [EXTREME SARCASM]

Don't forget that they're also working on an old laptop that's veeery slow and the graphics card/ssd/os will fail occasionally.


Oh, also the dev will have a mental illness at some point.

 

[LionHeart 95]

surely the Monica hypothesis is the most dramatically interesting one. it would be a real betrayal towards mc and her mother, it would force her daughters into a difficult position.

for me there are two characters whose behaviour clearly stands out from the others; Bella and Jolina, the only two who are ruthlessly courting MC and who will do anything to snatch an invitation to his beach house.
I see Jolina as a gold digger for Donald and Bella as a gold digger for all 3 heirs.

How loving must a sister be who quits her job and leaves her home to help out? Bella is a girl with a plan

Bella is my number 2 for the gold digger i like your thoughts very interesting, she truly has obvious plans towards MC is it just love or more?
So we as a group have looked at…...

Elaine - Is Gold digger number one
Some still think Zarah - ( why would you as an old man when you have Elaine want Zarah you must not care of looks remember she was turned down by men for the photo shoot)
Some think Jolina – she is bi-sexual and has more in common with Jenna than MC so i don't think so
Angel - is still an options but few if any mention her?

Many think Bella – She fits per discussion I just wounder if her or Lily are a red herring because this has brought to my attention Lily is and so is Bella Obvious for the Gold digger? both have many indicators is the story.

The Monica Twist really has me thinking now It might be real wild if it’s her

Also the lawyer said someone knows about everyone’s will conditions
So if it is Elaine are we seeing her doing the same as us looking into the person who sent the email. Is that why she is at the coffee shop? Does Elaine know who the other Gold digger is!

Oh the thoughts of what is to come…..

 

[zetsupetsu]

Let's be real though this game ain't no Acting Lessons 2.0 production quality wise and writing wise.

I doubt there would be a crazy curveball like how it was in that game.

We honestly might just be overthinking things and its just there. No red herring and all.