VN Ren'Py Whispers of Power [v0.1] [Millaky]

[UnoriginalUserName]

You have always felt you were destined for more than the normal life you have lived so far.​

Spoiler: Ok...behold the MC I guess...

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Maybe he'll grow out of it?

 

[Millaky]

"market" build?

Preliminary build, will be working on market over the next few weeks, working on promos, ui, character bios and other things.

 

[onefingersalute]

it seems to hint at incest so i dunno but it seems that way otherwise it seems like a weird one but i will check it out nonetheless as it is not a deal breaker for me either way

 

[Millaky]

it seems to hint at incest so i dunno but it seems that way otherwise it seems like a weird one but i will check it out nonetheless as it is not a deal breaker for me either way

Oddly, no incest planned, main storyline will keep it from being a viable addition.

 

[PhineasFlynn]

Screens look nice. And nice planned tags. Im in

 

[xmilteach]

thx

 

[OhGodNotAgain]

not 100% sure on this, really depends on the community. I have no problems with it, but I know some people definitely do.

Seriously? You're putting it up for auction? If enough people give you money for it, you'll do it?

 

[Millaky]

Seriously? You're putting it up for auction? If enough people give you money for it, you'll do it?

lol no, it could fit in the story, but i don't want to piss everyone off later after building a base by adding it.

 

[Cajun Fox]

Thanks

 

[someyoungguy]

lol no, it could fit in the story, but i don't want to piss everyone off later after building a base by adding it.

Imo, if you're seriously considering adding it, it's probably a good idea to go ahead and put it in the planned tags and indicate which tags you plan on being avoidable, so you won't have to deal as much with the egomaniacs that will inevitably show up and accuse you of making them play a game they don't like.

 

[phdusa1]

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[Clemency]

Anal Sex
Bdsm
Corruption
Creampie
Exhibitionism
Group sex
Groping
Handjob
Harem
Interracial
Masturbation
Milf
Stripping
Teasing
Transformation
Urination
Vaginal sex
Voyeurism

as of now.

No Animated?

I don't mind NTR either, so long you keep the story interesting and it fits in it, also be avoidable for those not liking it, basicly when certain things are avoidable is better then force it onto people who dislike it.

Still would conjure up some responses because "it wastes dev and render time" and games where there is a path to it and a path that avoids it, the latter path might trend towards having less content.

 

[motseer]

It's a good start. The models are nice and you are a good writer. I like MC and his twin sister, Kim. They definitely stand out. A couple of comments on your writing style if I may... Don't be afraid to get a little less grammatically perfect in dialogue. People talk fast these days and use quite a lot of slang. Nobody gets too descriptive in a conversation. Mundane conversations like the one at the supper table should be more about flavor and less about detail.

It's not a particularly unique storyline but, how it develops can be unique if it's told well. I'll be following this thread for sure. I'm definitely interested to see it progress.

 

[shamtiiomi]

It means this is a very early version of the game, and the renders arent quite where I want them to be. I will probably be re doing them for the full chapter one release, after getting some feedback on the storyline.

i will change the hair style of the mc,...now he ooks like hobosman

 

[NTRCreator]

Anal Sex
Bdsm
Corruption
Creampie
Exhibitionism
Group sex
Groping
Handjob
Harem
Interracial
Masturbation
Milf
Stripping
Teasing
Transformation
Urination
Vaginal sex
Voyeurism

as of now.

Nice planned tags, will definitely follow it for updates. Thanks for the share and upload!

 

[DrakoGhoul]

I can always go for more modern setting games with superpowers, so I'll try this.

 

[Tyrranus]

still playing this but my first two bits of feedback are
1)dial the horse cock back 3 or 4 notches and return it to human proportions
2)make the siblings look a bit more like siblings facially
3)make alex look 18 not 40
writing could use a bit more polish
all in all its worth a watch

edit:
several missing images such as

 

[Chimba]

Some will be, others will not, each "Controversial" tag will be choice driven, nothing will be thrown in your face if you choose the right options, the main story will have enough drama/conflict to not make the sexual stuff very significant to the overall story line, there will be an ability to go down a darker or lighter path based on choices.

Are lesbian scenes avoidable? or can lesbian/bisexual LIs be avoided?

Thx, good luck.

 

[NeegNog]

can you bring my childhood hero dream and let me play as a rapist superman please

 

[metallica57625]

So, did you not have enough time to make a picture for the title screen? I'm very judgmental person because I played alot of visual novels and if I don't see a title screen with a picture, that tells me you didn't want to put in the work for the first release. The first release is what is supposed to grab your audience into wanting to support you. If it doesn't or you didn't try to make one, then we have a problem. I understand this may be your first release on this site, but please bear in mind to put in the work.