VN Ren'Py Abandoned Who's the Father? [Ep. 2 v2.14] [mrvision]

[ProofreadingRUS]

Er this must be one of the worst game i tried here.

Maybe if you try with the walkthrough, you will see what's up ahead so you don't take that path.

 

[hasan234]

Er this must be one of the worst game i tried here.

It definitely needs a new writer, changing the font won't make it less of a scatterbrain script

 

[ProofreadingRUS]

It definitely needs a new writer, changing the font won't make it less of a scatterbrain script

The script is not the problem, it's the extra unnecessary content.
They talk more then they do anything else. Wish they talk less and do more.

 

[iamcharlie]

Please port for android

 

[Zahkrizos]

Wooh! Finally finished the game, can't say I like it though.
Man, I got some suggestions for the perverted me.

• Other than the obvious Walkthrough, I would like the many important (unnecessary) choices in the game to be removed. It would be better if, in the start of the game, you can choose which route you want to do without the need to worried about being confused. Storytelling wise, I like it, I just don't like the cluttered choices here at the moment.
• Remove the Game Over. Let's be honest, nobody really like Game Over in the first place, especially in porn games. It can be done well,, but failed because you chose the wrong choice, is not it. Making one intersect with each other would make too much unnecessary work for you either, so just do the easier option and remove it, and it will be a significantly less frustrating game.
• Alternatively, about the choices, you can just make a like toggle to see which one is which that will give points and such.
• You have such amazing character on the milf, only second to milfy city, don't waste it too much on other characters in the future update. I assumed you won't, judging she is the cover of the game, but I need to voice my concern.
• The Render Quality is top notch, I can just go to the file folder and went to see that again for several times. Again, do not waste such quality with something trivial and unnecessary, again... focus on the scene that can arouse me.
• Story is good, but we'd like more scenes instead, especially with the high gigabytes that needed to be downloaded.
• I'm sure you will fix the current naming of the characters, yes? I don't know if they're a bug or not, but it certainly felt weird sometimes, "My Linda" said the MC, it was hilarious.
• Lastly, the story choices, if it's nothing important and only gives "Points", I think it should be gone too, and just let the game walk on itself without us interfering too much. It's only stressed us out.
• I have some more in mind, but I think I have voiced out the most important one.

So, I think the game is not worth downloading at the moment, but I did enjoy it to a certain extent. It's good and has much more potential that 75% than the rest of the adult game I've seen, and I'm really looking forward to it. Thank you.

 

[Look-see]

Judging by the poll options, this is gonna be a cuckfest, so that's my cue to put this game in ignore. Good luck to the dev and I hope he can at least make the game enjoyable for the people who are into these type of things.

i kinda wanna defend some fetishes like, cheating could mean you hook up witha married woman or someone who has a BF. or maybe you even cheat on your evntual GF. interacial could also mean you hook up with a girl of another race, lesbian...well more girls so yeah, and exhibition sometimes public stuff is fun. but what killed this game for me was that this game does indeed seem to focus on sharing and such. i mentioned earlier that when you play as the best friend no matter what you choose he stil ends up with the ladies number so "fake choices" and again with the dad. tried to make him lose but if you do it's game over so more fake choices. which sucks cause for the most part this game could've been great but if you force the player to go down certain paths then what's the point of the choices? i kept playing up until dad's scene at the bar/club with my interest intact but after that i just started skipping. i was ok with the best friend getting the ladies phone number thinking we could make him lose later but now it seems like that'll be forced also. personally i would think this version needs some rework for me to give it another go but that seems unlikely so yeah i'll have to pass on it also.

 

[eddie987]

i kinda wanna defend some fetishes like, cheating could mean you hook up witha married woman or someone who has a BF. or maybe you even cheat on your evntual GF. interacial could also mean you hook up with a girl of another race, lesbian...well more girls so yeah, and exhibition sometimes public stuff is fun. but what killed this game for me was that this game does indeed seem to focus on sharing and such. i mentioned earlier that when you play as the best friend no matter what you choose he stil ends up with the ladies number so "fake choices" and again with the dad. tried to make him lose but if you do it's game over so more fake choices. which sucks cause for the most part this game could've been great but if you force the player to go down certain paths then what's the point of the choices? i kept playing up until dad's scene at the bar/club with my interest intact but after that i just started skipping. i was ok with the best friend getting the ladies phone number thinking we could make him lose later but now it seems like that'll be forced also. personally i would think this version needs some rework for me to give it another go but that seems unlikely so yeah i'll have to pass on it also.

After your last comment I downloaded the compressed version just to check the images, and yeah... Even if we ignore the fact that half the "cast" are dudes, from what I saw and read in the comments all the action was the dad banging a loli. Other than that the MC's pervy friend gets a date and the MC... well... he jerks off and that's it. About the poll, let's be honest, if it was someone cheating with the MC, I don't think it would need to be up there and 90% of the time, interracial means BBC in these type of games. Anyway, it doesn't really matter. It is what it is. Some people will like it, some won't. Like I said, I hope it will be enjoyable for those who are into these fetishes, but with gangbang, dp, swinger, sharing etc. up there, I can see the direction it's going and it's definitely not for me.

 

[Look-see]

After your last comment I downloaded the compressed version just to check the images, and yeah... Even if we ignore the fact that half the "cast" are dudes, from what I saw and read in the comments all the action was the dad banging a loli. Other than that the MC's pervy friend gets a date and the MC... well... he jerks off and that's it. About the poll, let's be honest, if it was someone cheating with the MC, I don't think it would need to be up there and 90% of the time, interracial means BBC in these type of games. Anyway, it doesn't really matter. It is what it is. Some people will like it, some won't. Like I said, I hope it will be enjoyable for those who are into these fetishes, but with gangbang, dp, swinger, sharing etc. up there, I can see the direction it's going and it's definitely not for me.

yeah i cant deny this game is heading in the way of orgies and stuff. which is incredibly weird cause you got mind control tag up there and looks like MC has the potential to get that power and i have no intention of sharing. then again if this game is going in the way of "corruption" then its basically a free for all so i guess that makes sense. as for the cast being a crap load of dudes unless they have a girl we can take from then or just filler characters then they're boring. but yeah you're right ultimately let ppl who enjoy this game continue to play it. maybe future comments will give me a reason to try this game again. who knows.

 

[ProofreadingRUS]

Wooh! Finally finished the game, can't say I like it though.
Man, I got some suggestions for the perverted me.

• Other than the obvious Walkthrough, I would like the many important (unnecessary) choices in the game to be removed. It would be better if, in the start of the game, you can choose which route you want to do without the need to worried about being confused. Storytelling wise, I like it, I just don't like the cluttered choices here at the moment.
• Remove the Game Over. Let's be honest, nobody really like Game Over in the first place, especially in porn games. It can be done well,, but failed because you chose the wrong choice, is not it. Making one intersect with each other would make too much unnecessary work for you either, so just do the easier option and remove it, and it will be a significantly less frustrating game.
• Alternatively, about the choices, you can just make a like toggle to see which one is which that will give points and such.
• You have such amazing character on the milf, only second to milfy city, don't waste it too much on other characters in the future update. I assumed you won't, judging she is the cover of the game, but I need to voice my concern.
• The Render Quality is top notch, I can just go to the file folder and went to see that again for several times. Again, do not waste such quality with something trivial and unnecessary, again... focus on the scene that can arouse me.
• Story is good, but we'd like more scenes instead, especially with the high gigabytes that needed to be downloaded.
• I'm sure you will fix the current naming of the characters, yes? I don't know if they're a bug or not, but it certainly felt weird sometimes, "My Linda" said the MC, it was hilarious.
• Lastly, the story choices, if it's nothing important and only gives "Points", I think it should be gone too, and just let the game walk on itself without us interfering too much. It's only stressed us out.
• I have some more in mind, but I think I have voiced out the most important one.

So, I think the game is not worth downloading at the moment, but I did enjoy it to a certain extent. It's good and has much more potential that 75% than the rest of the adult game I've seen, and I'm really looking forward to it. Thank you.

I think it took you longer to write those suggestions then it took you to play the game.
I was done in less then a day and without the walkthrough cause I was clicking fast.

 

[Jerkins the Butler]

Wooh! Finally finished the game, can't say I like it though.
Man, I got some suggestions for the perverted me.

• Other than the obvious Walkthrough, I would like the many important (unnecessary) choices in the game to be removed. It would be better if, in the start of the game, you can choose which route you want to do without the need to worried about being confused. Storytelling wise, I like it, I just don't like the cluttered choices here at the moment.
• Remove the Game Over. Let's be honest, nobody really like Game Over in the first place, especially in porn games. It can be done well,, but failed because you chose the wrong choice, is not it. Making one intersect with each other would make too much unnecessary work for you either, so just do the easier option and remove it, and it will be a significantly less frustrating game.
• Alternatively, about the choices, you can just make a like toggle to see which one is which that will give points and such.
• You have such amazing character on the milf, only second to milfy city, don't waste it too much on other characters in the future update. I assumed you won't, judging she is the cover of the game, but I need to voice my concern.
• The Render Quality is top notch, I can just go to the file folder and went to see that again for several times. Again, do not waste such quality with something trivial and unnecessary, again... focus on the scene that can arouse me.
• Story is good, but we'd like more scenes instead, especially with the high gigabytes that needed to be downloaded.
• I'm sure you will fix the current naming of the characters, yes? I don't know if they're a bug or not, but it certainly felt weird sometimes, "My Linda" said the MC, it was hilarious.
• Lastly, the story choices, if it's nothing important and only gives "Points", I think it should be gone too, and just let the game walk on itself without us interfering too much. It's only stressed us out.
• I have some more in mind, but I think I have voiced out the most important one.

So, I think the game is not worth downloading at the moment, but I did enjoy it to a certain extent. It's good and has much more potential that 75% than the rest of the adult game I've seen, and I'm really looking forward to it. Thank you.

I have to conquer with you about the 75% of schlock being flooded into the multimedia stream.

Like the fact of a game that's been out for awhile and is suddenly revamped and polished.

The funny thing about a polished turd is that it's still a turd or if you wanted use the imagery of putting lipstick on a pig...
It's all relative. That being said there are very few games that go through a make over and end up shining like a gem.

"The Vision" seem like a real go getter and has the passion to follow through on this project. Just look at how attentive he/she is to the reviews. Commitment, Gumption, the qualities that some developers lack and could learn a thing or two.

Keep fighting the good fight.

(these comments are the expressed thoughts of an individual that have no affiliation with the entity known as mrvision and should be taken into account... that in all fairness there should at least be given a chance to fuck up.)

Seriously, there are fewer and fewer quality games out. Who the fuck would want to attempt to develop a game to satiate our sick fetishes if there constantly be ridiculed.

P.S. This shit reminds me of the time when the Philadelphia Eagles fans booed Santa Claus. Who Does That??? (rhetorical)

 

[mrvision]

Hello guys, hope you're OK (all of you):

About Walkthrough:
As I mentioned before to some users,

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is on my

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and

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(I've just updated it there few days ago, so I will keep my respect
and appreciation to my dear patrons and supporters for a little bit more).
So I will let them enjoy it for some days more. But of course, as I mentioned,
I will publish a walkthrough version here soon afterwards.

About Android version:
I still have to publish here a complete Windows version (the only real official one is on

You must be registered to see the links

and

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, the other links out there are... unofficial versions made by
generous users). I know there are some users waiting for it, cause they don't want
to download the game out there, but they will have to be a little bit more patient.
Then will be the time of Mac and Linux.
And finally Android.
I hope you understand, guys. This is a new project is only 5 days old here and my
supporters started to enjoy the updated Android version just few days ago.
So I will let them that exclusive for a while.
Then will be the time to publish it here and let other users try it too.

About feedback and polls:
Just a kind reminder: Your constructive feedback is always wellcome.
-There is an active poll open for this game on the top of this thread, kindly participate.
There are already 300 votes !! Which is wonderful !!
-And the poll about font styles is still open on my

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. Not only to know your
favorite or the one you hate the most (it is not the original one, by the way) but
also to listen your ideas (you can write me there too) and participate in the little
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[mrvision]

I see... I was watching the poll right now... interesting...
the options with more votes (for now) in the poll could have more chances to be included in future scenes...

 

[Deleted member 250233]

MC's brother seems like a soon to be trap

 

[ProofreadingRUS]

MC's brother seems like a soon to be trap

Well if you can't get rid of the BFF no matter how many -points I give him,
I doubt you'll be able to get rid of the brother.

 

[mrvision]

Android DEMO:

Hi, guys!

Free Access to the Android demo01Version here:

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100% discount code: 2bh679mx

PS: Original font style !!

Cheers,

mrvision

 

[mrvision]

Very nice game! Beautiful graphic and interesting story! The only thing I don't like very much is that you can't change font....

Hi mentore! there is a version of the game with another font style!
(the font winner of the last poll)
thank you for your feedback!
I'm really happy to see that you like it!

 

[Zahkrizos]

Hello guys, hope you're OK (all of you):

About Walkthrough:
As I mentioned before to some users,

You must be registered to see the links

is on my

You must be registered to see the links

and

You must be registered to see the links

(I've just updated it there few days ago, so I will keep my respect
and appreciation to my dear patrons and supporters for a little bit more).
So I will let them enjoy it for some days more. But of course, as I mentioned,
I will publish a walkthrough version here soon afterwards.

About Android version:
I still have to publish here a complete Windows version (the only real official one is on

You must be registered to see the links

and

You must be registered to see the links

, the other links out there are... unofficial versions made by
generous users). I know there are some users waiting for it, cause they don't want
to download the game out there, but they will have to be a little bit more patient.
Then will be the time of Mac and Linux.
And finally Android.
I hope you understand, guys. This is a new project is only 5 days old here and my
supporters started to enjoy the updated Android version just few days ago.
So I will let them that exclusive for a while.
Then will be the time to publish it here and let other users try it too.

About feedback and polls:
Just a kind reminder: Your constructive feedback is always wellcome.
-There is an active poll open for this game on the top of this thread, kindly participate.
There are already 300 votes !! Which is wonderful !!
-And the poll about font styles is still open on my

You must be registered to see the links

. Not only to know your
favorite or the one you hate the most (it is not the original one, by the way) but
also to listen your ideas (you can write me there too) and participate in the little
lucky draw at the end of it. You still have a couple of days to vote in there !

And that's all for now, guys. Don't forget to participate, send me your feedback
and join me on

You must be registered to see the links

,

You must be registered to see the links

,

You must be registered to see the links

,

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and

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!
I eventually use to publish exclusive content in there and more !
You can also contact me there if you feel more comfortable!
Choose your favorite and follow me there !!

Thank you guys for your support, I really appreciate it!
Cheers,

mrvision.
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Great to hear about the Walkthrough, people really need that.
And what's up with the different edition? Wouldn't it better with just one simple walkthrough, maybe like combine them in the pdf or something.
But anyway, cheers bro. hyped for the next update, and don't let these reviews get to you. They are not wrong, but still, you get my meaning.

 

[ProofreadingRUS]

Great to hear about the Walkthrough, people really need that.
And what's up with the different edition? Wouldn't it better with just one simple walkthrough, maybe like combine them in the pdf or something.
But anyway, cheers bro. hyped for the next update, and don't let these reviews get to you. They are not wrong, but still, you get my meaning.

Why do we need this now?
Is there anything useful. like getting rid of Alex for good?

 

[hasan234]

Get rid of Alex and have the girl Alex picked up in the store be your date

 

[mrvision]

...poor Alex...