VN Ren'Py Abandoned Who's the Father? [Ep. 2 v2.14] [mrvision]

[Deleted member 651107]

Harem sounds good.

I played the game for like 15 more minutes and I now have a headache. You really need to do something about the writing. It makes no sense and it drags on for far too long to say nothing.

"...Hmmm...ah...but...ok
-...no like...yeah
-...hmm really...?
-anyway...
-....HM HM HM..."

^ That could actually be in the game.

 

[mrvision]

Very true but they are alot who also do like it

Hello, gilgamesh9! (your name reminds me one boss from Final Fantasy )
thank you for you comment!

Yes, actually is true: Variety of fetishes is huge (same than variety of options, opinions and users).
I think you mean ntr, (or similar (cheating fetish)) but kindly correct me if I'm wrong.
I need to get more information about my community of users and preferences.
I think I am going to prepare another poll about it. Your feedback is very important for me!

Thank you again, gilgamesh9!

 

[mrvision]

Harem sounds good.

I played the game for like 15 more minutes and I now have a headache. You really need to do something about the writing. It makes no sense and it drags on for far too long to say nothing.

"...Hmmm...ah...but...ok
-...no like...yeah
-...hmm really...?
-anyway...
-....HM HM HM..."

^ That could actually be in the game.

Hello, Silveroth!
hmmm... ah... well.... uhm... yeah... hehehe...

I understand what you mean about dialogues...
Sorry for your headache!
I'm preparing a new update with less flash and shake effects
and improvements in Point System.
Will be published soon.
I appreciate your comment and interest for my game!
Really, thank you, Silveroth!

 

[Deleted member 651107]

Just try to put more effort into your writing, so far the characters don't feel real because of how weirdly they express themselves etc. . It is really important that you make them sound like real people for the players to really get into the game.

Good luck.

P.S. : Are you french ? You wrote parfum instead of perfume multiple times.

 

[mrvision]

Hello, Silveroth!
No, I'm not French... and you?
Maybe I just miss French perfumes

Thank you for your message, Silveroth!

 

[King Slayer100]

I like the models , renders are nice as long as there is no ntr, sharing stuff I am up with any other fetishes . waiting for the next update .

 

[shando14]

Greetings to all ... I am relatively new to these forums, but for a long time I have loved this type of games. I have always had the concern to be able to collaborate in the Spanish translation of this type of games, since there are many like I who love these games, who would like to play it in their native language .. Please I would like someone to help me .. Thank you ..

 

[maxic009]

Can somebody replay me does the game size explains the game. I mean if there is so much in the game, what do I expect is it good?

 

[mrvision]

I like the models , renders are nice as long as there is no ntr, sharing stuff I am up with any other fetishes . waiting for the next update .

Thank you, King Slayer100, (there's a new poll on the top if you want to participate too).
All your feedback is welcome, thank your for your comments!

 

[mrvision]

Greetings to all ... I am relatively new to these forums, but for a long time I have loved this type of games. I have always had the concern to be able to collaborate in the Spanish translation of this type of games, since there are many like I who love these games, who would like to play it in their native language .. Please I would like someone to help me .. Thank you ..

Hello shando14! and thanks for your message!
How can I help you?
Maybe we should check how many users would like a version in another language (Spanish as you mentioned).
If we can find enough Spanish users, definitely we could prepare a Spanish version!
I like your feedback! thank you!

 

[mrvision]

Can somebody replay me does the game size explains the game. I mean if there is so much in the game, what do I expect is it good?

Hello maxic009 and thank you for your post!

Well, I'm not the best for talking about my own game in this situation.
Having said that, I prefer quality in my game. I tried not to compress
some files after watched some new bugs. Can be compressed? Yes.
But, at least in this case, this time I will keep it like this.
As I mentioned before in the thread, users' feedback is very important
for game development. This Episode01 is the original idea and just a
very small group of patrons from my

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have decided some of the
characteristics included in the game, fetishes, etc. Now with all your
feedback I have more information for the future.

This is not a simple story of "sex and next".
There is a storyline and each character has his own personality.

Finally I must let users (not trolls ) to give their opinions, of course.
All constructive opinions, posts, comments and suggestions are always
welcome!
I'm very happy to see that most of users really like my game. Of course
there is a smaller part of users who doesn't like it. Same than everything
in life.
Fortunately the majority of people really like it so I invite you to try it by
yourself and if you like it, since this is a very new project, I also invite you
to support my game

Thank you for your comment, I really appreciate it, maxic009!

mrvision

 

[shando14]

Hello shando14! and thanks for your message!
How can I help you?
Maybe we should check how many users would like a version in another language (Spanish as you mentioned).
If we can find enough Spanish users, definitely we could prepare a Spanish version!
I like your feedback! thank you!

Hello friend, thanks for taking the time to answer ... I think that if a game has more Language options, this game can reach many more people, and it is not limited to just a certain type of speech ... I am graphic designer and I really like all the work that you developers of these games do and I would really like to work on a project, to be able to get these games to many more people in the native language .. Thanks anyway brother .. A hug .

 

[kingcobra68]

wow very interesting cant wait for more

 

[maxic009]

Thanks for response. Will font size be monotone? It's really hard to read...

Hello maxic009 and thank you for your post!

Well, I'm not the best for talking about my own game in this situation.
Having said that, I prefer quality in my game. I tried not to compress
some files after watched some new bugs. Can be compressed? Yes.
But, at least in this case, this time I will keep it like this.
As I mentioned before in the thread, users' feedback is very important
for game development. This Episode01 is the original idea and just a
very small group of patrons from my

You must be registered to see the links

have decided some of the
characteristics included in the game, fetishes, etc. Now with all your
feedback I have more information for the future.

This is not a simple story of "sex and next".
There is a storyline and each character has his own personality.

Finally I must let users (not trolls ) to give their opinions, of course.
All constructive opinions, posts, comments and suggestions are always
welcome!
I'm very happy to see that most of users really like my game. Of course
there is a smaller part of users who doesn't like it. Same than everything
in life.
Fortunately the majority of people really like it so I invite you to try it by
yourself and if you like it, since this is a very new project, I also invite you
to support my game

Thank you for your comment, I really appreciate it, maxic009!

mrvision

 

[mrvision]

Hello friend, thanks for taking the time to answer ... I think that if a game has more Language options, this game can reach many more people, and it is not limited to just a certain type of speech ... I am graphic designer and I really like all the work that you developers of these games do and I would really like to work on a project, to be able to get these games to many more people in the native language .. Thanks anyway brother .. A hug .

Hello, Shando14!
Definitely we're gonna have a Spanish version if we find enough users requesting that or another language.
Thank you for your message, Shando14, I really appreciate it!

 

[mrvision]

wow very interesting cant wait for more

Hello kingcobra68, thank you for your message!
So happy that you like it! I'm currently working on the
next episode. It's gonna be nice...!
Thank you, Kingcobra68!

 

[mrvision]

Thanks for response. Will font size be monotone? It's really hard to read...

Hello maxic009!
Good news for you, because we made a poll 2 weeks ago and users voted for another
font style. There is an updated version with the most voted font available now!
Next episode will have a version with that font as well.
If you like the game, I invite you to support this young project on my

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!
Thank you again, maxic009!

 

[nIkeguy]

anyone has the incest patch? or walk-through ?

 

[mrvision]

Hello nkleguy!

There must be some unofficial versions out there.
Official walkthrough here:

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Or special one in my patreon:

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thank you!

 

[mrvision]

anyone has the incest patch? or walk-through ?

Hello nkleguy!

There must be some unofficial versions out there.
Official walkthrough here:

You must be registered to see the links

Or special one in my patreon:

You must be registered to see the links

thank you!