- Dec 23, 2017
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The version is wrong it is v 0.0001 and has no content everything is under development. But nice art if it only had content.
Really like the art work and the style hopefully it wont get abandoned when it gets interesting like some other games but i have also something to criticise its the movement and the loading screen at each door but the loading screen is not a big deal the movement on the other why cant we use mouse and why cant the character always run 
- Aug 22, 2023
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was thinking the same thing, does there really need to be a loading screen between every roomReally like the art work and the style hopefully it wont get abandoned when it gets interesting like some other games but i have also something to criticise its the movement and the loading screen at each door but the loading screen is not a big deal the movement on the other why cant we use mouse and why cant the character always run
Seems like a lot of grind and no content. All I do is weight lifting, shower peeping, and wood chopping. Nothing else. Is there anything more than that? Should I keep repeating this, for how long?
I really like the artistic direction and the animations are good. I feel like everything else about the game needs to be stripped out, like back to the drawing board stripped out. The town, the mini-games, the general direction the core gameply loop seems to be going in... none of it is particularly good.
A much more constrained scope with a focus on the characters and the interplay between them would serve this game better.
A much more constrained scope with a focus on the characters and the interplay between them would serve this game better.
Question... what's the name of this othe game. For scientific purposes of course
Dude this QTE boss... If there is a scene related to the work woman I am not going to get it for sure.
I like what's here, theres just very little of it. I can't wait to see the next release. love the art.
I like what's here, theres just very little of it. I can't wait to see the next release. love the art.
I found a bug. After chopping the wood, the woman didn't give me the money and my shirt, and when I tried to leave the building I got stuck in the door.
The bug persists even when you get teleported into your room at night, after that, I can't earn money from that job.
The bug persists even when you get teleported into your room at night, after that, I can't earn money from that job.
Man, really liked the game so far.
However, i encountered some bugs when leaving any building if night comes(i think thats the issue, might be wrong), character gets stuck in door. Plus, then you shop, if you go to pause menu, shopping menu still overlaps pause, which is not right in my opinion and can lead to potential problems in the future. Regarding QoL, i dont think transition between night and day should be a loading screen(or whatever it is, still, this shouldnt take my controls away, it adds to whole frustration) and not sure what you have planned for combat but i think there shouldnt be a sprint button at all(at least in non-combat part of the game), because walking serve zero purpose currently and running should be default speed. Played with controller the whole time so dont know about keyboard experience.
Still, keep it up, youre doing fine and your game has a lot of potential, ill look forward to next updates!
However, i encountered some bugs when leaving any building if night comes(i think thats the issue, might be wrong), character gets stuck in door. Plus, then you shop, if you go to pause menu, shopping menu still overlaps pause, which is not right in my opinion and can lead to potential problems in the future. Regarding QoL, i dont think transition between night and day should be a loading screen(or whatever it is, still, this shouldnt take my controls away, it adds to whole frustration) and not sure what you have planned for combat but i think there shouldnt be a sprint button at all(at least in non-combat part of the game), because walking serve zero purpose currently and running should be default speed. Played with controller the whole time so dont know about keyboard experience.
Still, keep it up, youre doing fine and your game has a lot of potential, ill look forward to next updates!
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- Sep 12, 2018
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I really liked the art style, it looks very refreshing and unique in its own way. It's just a breath of fresh air for me when I want hand-drawn art, but I'm already tired of anime art. As people mentioned, it's a bit similar to Witch Hunter Trainer, which turned into a disaster milkfest by the end, I hope the dev isn't from their team...
I really liked the main heroine and the way the artist drew her. And the main thing that attracted me is that the emphasis is clearly on fit, thin girls, which is a big plus for me. Because to be honest, I'm sick of girls looking like cows every other game with breasts bigger than their own heads and thighs as wide as a log.
It's very strange to see so many bad reviews while the game, despite some rough edges, has a very good potential. However, I would wait for few more version before leave my own review. I can say for sure the developer was too quick to release their game. While they may have wanted to test people's interest, it would have been better for them to make sure the player actually had something to do. That way, they could have attracted a lot more people to their game than they did.
After making sure there was nothing on the map after the prologue and trying the chopping wood mini-game, I decided I'd rather wait for the next version. Others may have given up on this project altogether, as you can see from the reviews, which is a shame.
Among the cons I can probably attribute the main character, it has already been noted that his forehead is unusually large. In general, I don't mind playing as a slightly somewhat scruffy, overgrown man, but damn, he looks really unattractive with his eyes set so low. I would also notice that the girls are a bit similar to each other. If I were the artist, I would try to make their faces a bit more different from each other, as well as their hairstyles. It gives the impression that they are all related to each other.
A few things I would recommend
I really liked the main heroine and the way the artist drew her. And the main thing that attracted me is that the emphasis is clearly on fit, thin girls, which is a big plus for me. Because to be honest, I'm sick of girls looking like cows every other game with breasts bigger than their own heads and thighs as wide as a log.
It's very strange to see so many bad reviews while the game, despite some rough edges, has a very good potential. However, I would wait for few more version before leave my own review. I can say for sure the developer was too quick to release their game. While they may have wanted to test people's interest, it would have been better for them to make sure the player actually had something to do. That way, they could have attracted a lot more people to their game than they did.
After making sure there was nothing on the map after the prologue and trying the chopping wood mini-game, I decided I'd rather wait for the next version. Others may have given up on this project altogether, as you can see from the reviews, which is a shame.
Among the cons I can probably attribute the main character, it has already been noted that his forehead is unusually large. In general, I don't mind playing as a slightly somewhat scruffy, overgrown man, but damn, he looks really unattractive with his eyes set so low. I would also notice that the girls are a bit similar to each other. If I were the artist, I would try to make their faces a bit more different from each other, as well as their hairstyles. It gives the impression that they are all related to each other.
A few things I would recommend
- The ability to view current quests. It is probably the most important thing to add to the game, especially if people are going to be coming back after long breaks between updates.
- As mentioned above, remove the loading between going from room to room.
- Add auto save between locations.
- Increase the character's movement speed or add the ability to buy boots that increase it to justify it. I don't mind the RPG Maker engine and love how it allows you to get a better feel for the environment, but honestly, when the map is big and you have to do chores, it can break even the most resilient player.
- And my personal wish, because it's a trainer, I'm really hoping for a some kind of routes with the ability to choose a path. I really don't want to see another linear game.
- Make the chopping game easier in the future. I understand that MC's physique seen better days, and the player can struggle at first, but we should have the opportunity to get money before that and progress the plot. Add all sorts of goodies on the map to encourage players to explore and reward them at the same time. Add possible rewards for choosing the right answers...
