VN Ren'Py Completed Wicked Choices: Book One [Remastered v1.0.1] [ASLPro3D]

[Wyrme]

pre-caffeine ramblings, after having slept with Wicked still on my mind. So yes, it is mine, but someone once said there are no original thoughts Occasionally, I think of something insightful, or artful. Though, more inane quips make it to the fingers.
Unfortunately, I have read precious little of Twain's works. Always got sidetracked with others in the library. I should rectify that.

 

[Catwashere]

I can't leave a review for some reason and it was gonna be either a 4 or 5 star review.

 

[ASLPro3D]

Cool that you replied. I think you got a good premise on your hands with good graphics, so I am looking forward to what the finished product will look like. Glad to see the beta to alpha element is a planned character development aspect, even tho I would prefer to just start off with alpha dialogue choices.. Also hoping for more interactions with the daughter. Understandable why the character says fuck this I am out, his depravity level is just not there yet.

No worries, @Bass_Legend, I like to try and keep active here, as this is the BEST place to actually get feedback on our product and, aside from Discord, the BEST means in which stay in contact with fans and supporters of our project as well.

I can understand the desire to have Alpha dialogue choices at the start, but doing so would've been overly problematic programing and rendering wise. Facial expressions, body language of the MC would be different than that of a Beta and other character's reactions and only body stances would also be reflective to the dialogue... a good example of this would be the conversation with the wife, where in one set of images (based on MC's reply) is completely different than those if the MC replied differently.

In sort, would've doubled my work and being only two people really working on this project (my wife only helps with some of the poses and grammar checks) would've been too much for us to accomplish at the current workflow; so, in some ways, the story is also reflective of my limitations in the production schedule as well.

That said, come the close of "Wicked Choices: Book One" and the side arc story that is rapidly approaching, as well as, "Wicked Choices: Book Two", we will be shifting to using sprites on our production which will speed things up CONSIDERABLY as those sprites can be reused over and over again for dialogue purposes (which means I don't have to keep doing full rendered scenes), while actions and sex will remain fully rendered as it has been...

Personally, I felt that it made better sense, story wise, to have the main character be a Beta... the psychological ramifications and resulting effects of being gifted with the "powers of God" make for better storytelling and subsequent character development than if the MC was already someone like Riddick (From Pitch Black and Chronicles of Riddick and a super badass) that was granted the same abilities... to Riddick, it would just be an enhancement, but to our current MC, it will be LIFE CHANGING...

 

[ASLPro3D]

Nothing in the world as beautiful as the wide-eyed wonder of innocents growing. Nor as frightful as the depth of shadows created by that first dawnings light.

pre-caffeine ramblings, after having slept with Wicked still on my mind. So yes, it is mine, but someone once said there are no original thoughts Occasionally, I think of something insightful, or artful. Though, more inane quips make it to the fingers.
Unfortunately, I have read precious little of Twain's works. Always got sidetracked with others in the library. I should rectify that.

Honestly, I wasn't much for Twain's work, myself... or Shakespeare to be brutally honest. I am unrefined in my literacy.

So am I to understand, @Wyrme, that this current release left you with some thoughts that were unescapable while awaiting slumber to fall upon thee?

Myself, I feel a bit... vexed and concerned... as, the game has been out for several days hasn't yielded ANY thoughts or feedback yet... the silence of one of our biggest releases to date is so great that one could hear a mouse fart in another room.

Granted, I understand that there are those who don't want to post spoilers for those who've yet to play it... but not even a general "That was nice" or "holy shit, dude"... ugh, the silence is deafening!!

 

[Palanto]

I can't leave a review for some reason and it was gonna be either a 4 or 5 star review.

Huh? How come? Does the forum throw an error or something? Because I read several of your reviews in other threads?

 

[ASLPro3D]

I can't leave a review for some reason and it was gonna be either a 4 or 5 star review.

Thank you for wanting to @Catwashere!! I know that in March that the site had a problem changing to the next page to the reviews that people left on other games, but don't think that it affected the posting of reviews. I just clicked on the star thingie to test and it popped up area to rate and leave a review... perhaps there was a problem with your browser?

 

[Wyrme]

True the usual suspects(I am not Keyser soze) have been uncommonly quiet this time around. Myself included. The scenes are as per usual very beautiful(even if none were of my lady ). I would say that semi-coherent statement I made was my brains synthesis of the whole.

Oh, and I was wondering how/when that reveal was going to be handled, and makes me think that maybe someone was thinking well in advance. Maybe? or just the fact that some leaks are not all bad
Damn, I wish I could be succint once in a while. Then again you guys do a lot in there, and that is hard to describe in 3 words or less without glossing over many things I would feel bad about skipping.

I have actually only read 1 of Twain's that I remember. A requirement for school, it alright but I remember getting a choice for the next couple of papers and chose Bradbury and Poe. Enjoyed them enough to start gather their works.

As much as I miss milady(I know, I know), I truly enjoyed Miss Lynara in this one.
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[El bacca Del Chew]

as, the game has been out for several days hasn't yielded ANY thoughts

As for a good book or a good wine, it deserves good conditions.
I mean i can surf the web/this forum on my smartphone in the subway/bus/train, i can read a Michael Connelly while waiting for the train or in the toilet. I can have a cheap beer watching football....
A good wine deserves a good meal, a good book deserves a nice sofa and quiet.
All that non-sense bla bla to tell that i wil play it quietly this sunday because i don't want to rush it by multitasking.
For those who don't give a shit about it, well, understandable, haha, just make a statement to @ASLPro3D that i respect your work as much as that. It needs to be apreciate.

 

[Palanto]

rofl That's what I told ASLPro3D, El bacca Del Chew Thought so that some of you just didn't have the time to play it because some really want to enjoy it and not rush through it

Oh, and I was wondering how/when that reveal was going to be handled, and makes me think that maybe someone was thinking well in advance. Maybe? or just the fact that some leaks are not all bad

First of all, thanks for trying to calm ASLPro3D down a little, he's going crazy with the lack of feedback atm
But what do you mean with "that reveal" ? Did I miss something? I mean, yeah I sadly had to skip some pages the last couple weeks but it looks like I missed something really important there

 

[Wyrme]

Nothing that would have been overly important in all likelyhood. It just some leverage(or so thought) between mother and aunt. It had just tickled my brain with possibilities.

 

[Palanto]

Ahh alright

 

[Catwashere]

Huh? How come? Does the forum throw an error or something? Because I read several of your reviews in other threads?

You must be registered to see the links

I left reviews for other games but this one and 2 others i could not i'm not sure why might be banned from leaving one.

 

[UncleVT]

You must be registered to see the links

I left reviews for other games but this one and 2 others i could not i'm not sure why might be banned from leaving one.

You can't undelete the previous one? Think is for that one you can't review now.

 

[Catwashere]

You can't undelete the previous one? Think is for that one you can't review now.

Nope i don't even see a review from me i think i may have broke the rules when i left it, i just read the rules and i wanted to fix my review.

 

[pavar]

Myself, I feel a bit... vexed and concerned... as, the game has been out for several days hasn't yielded ANY thoughts or feedback yet... the silence of one of our biggest releases to date is so great that one could hear a mouse fart in another room.

Granted, I understand that there are those who don't want to post spoilers for those who've yet to play it... but not even a general "That was nice" or "holy shit, dude"... ugh, the silence is deafening!!

We are just stockpiling energy for the 21st of May

 

[ASLPro3D]

True the usual suspects(I am not Keyser soze) have been uncommonly quiet this time around. Myself included. The scenes are as per usual very beautiful(even if none were of my lady ). I would say that semi-coherent statement I made was my brains synthesis of the whole.

Oh, and I was wondering how/when that reveal was going to be handled, and makes me think that maybe someone was thinking well in advance. Maybe? or just the fact that some leaks are not all bad
Damn, I wish I could be succint once in a while. Then again you guys do a lot in there, and that is hard to describe in 3 words or less without glossing over many things I would feel bad about skipping.

I have actually only read 1 of Twain's that I remember. A requirement for school, it alright but I remember getting a choice for the next couple of papers and chose Bradbury and Poe. Enjoyed them enough to start gather their works.

As much as I miss milady(I know, I know), I truly enjoyed Miss Lynara in this one.
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Nothing that would have been overly important in all likelyhood. It just some leverage(or so thought) between mother and aunt. It had just tickled my brain with possibilities.

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You are correct in that, someone (besides me) was planning way ahead... just how far and how much, heh, still to be revealed, but yeah, you're on the right track!

Also, like you, I was more of a Ray Bradbury, Poe (and Lovecraft) kind of guy... thee, thou's, wherefors and such ain't much my thing... now if Romeo came back as a zombie to fuck his true love before she took her life, then, maybe, I might've been inspired more.

 

[ASLPro3D]

As for a good book or a good wine, it deserves good conditions.
I mean i can surf the web/this forum on my smartphone in the subway/bus/train, i can read a Michael Connelly while waiting for the train or in the toilet. I can have a cheap beer watching football....
A good wine deserves a good meal, a good book deserves a nice sofa and quiet.
All that non-sense bla bla to tell that i wil play it quietly this sunday because i don't want to rush it by multitasking.
For those who don't give a shit about it, well, understandable, haha, just make a statement to @ASLPro3D that i respect your work as much as that. It needs to be apreciate.

I appreciate it my friend, thank you for the kind words... just got really concerned and nervous that maybe I screwed something up or people just lost interest... glad to see you are a sipping man!

 

[ASLPro3D]

You must be registered to see the links

I left reviews for other games but this one and 2 others i could not i'm not sure why might be banned from leaving one.

You can't undelete the previous one? Think is for that one you can't review now.

Hmm... if @Catwashere left one previously, I don't see it. Perhaps there was a site hiccup when it was posting...

 

[ASLPro3D]

We are just stockpiling energy for the 21st of May View attachment 98777

Holy Sweet Mother of GOD!! Yeah, need to start using the other hand for a while... it helps to have balance in your art!

 

[Catwashere]

Hmm... if @Catwashere left one previously, I don't see it. Perhaps there was a site hiccup when it was posting...

When i first gave a review i think it may have been bad/against rules of the site so a mod may have banned me from leaving one on this game.
I messaged two mods about it just hope they reply back since i wanted to give a nice review.