Honestly, I feel quite identified with this MC, in terms of the way they act and how to respond, although that caused a game over,
(personally I would have done it differently, something like, you invite them and they reject it as it is, So the MC makes an effort and instead of insisting on the bitches who don't play, he activates all his charm and beauty to recruit other girls, trains them and makes a decent team and then the bitches who rejected him realize what they are doing. They lost and they want to join the team, but the MC refuses and now they are the ones who have to work hard to be accepted and because they should want to join the team, apart from envy and seeing what they would have done, it could be one. because she is in debt and she flirted and got involved with who she shouldn't have on one of many nights out (Lexi) and they made it a condition that she has to pay one way or another and to see that she attends the University that is making a name for herself in volleyball and she used to play it, they demand that she participate if they reach the top, they promise to cancel her debt, the other has two options: the team or jail (Saki), another is that last year's event the coach sues her and she has irrefutable evidence to destroy her life and with the reputation that she (Fiona) has, no one wants to help her except the Dean, who knows her volleyball skills and proposes that it is volleyball or jail just like Saki, hence the Dean himself. , he forces his daughter to join the team, because he considers it a disgrace that his University is in full swing and his daughter, who is his offspring and bears his last name, is not on the team, because I had a fight with the MC and the MC doesn't want her to be there, the spoiled girl doesn't deserve it, but the Dean demands that she do everything possible to correct that mistake and convince the MC to let her be on the team, because the Dean admires the MC, who always She will put him ahead even of her daughter, this in terms of Volleyball, for Eve I remember the ghosts of her past because she couldn't be on the high school team and now I can do it, but I consider that the MC is an idiot and she she screwed up and now she's doing everything possible to get on the team, as for Desiree, I love her, the MC should accept without any complaints)
well, leaving that aside, the characters look very good in terms of appearance, the personality gives a lot to be desired and more the friends presented so far, but since we will see how this evolves, in the end it is only the first chapter, hence what is unforgiving is that there are 5 or possibly more red-haired girls and none of them are a LI (love interest) none , where the values were lost, look at them they are perfect,
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well not so much the last one, she could get lost in a forest and it wouldn't matter. Without further luck and greetings
LopaPhi
