VN Ren'Py Abandoned Wings of Silicon [Ch. 12] [SinAppeal]

[Wildquill]

Just some Scene Previews of Carmine's first scene for anyone who wants a taste. Chapter 10 is coming along and Sin's working on improving the animation for future scenes as well.

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Check out the imgur for vids. The gif is fine, but not great. Sorry for the border. Somehow I wasn't running the game in full screen. Derp.

 

[FAP369ZONE]

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Just some Scene Previews of Carmine's first scene for anyone who wants a taste. Chapter 10 is coming along and Sin's working on improving the animation for future scenes as well.

You must be registered to see the links

Check out the imgur for vids. The gif is fine, but not great. Sorry for the border. Somehow I wasn't running the game in full screen. Derp.

Oh i'm sorry i just realized you are on dev team for WoS, i'll edit my post hehehe
You should edit your post below as well so there is no evidence hehehe

Anyway, when are we gonna get MOAR Tiara I'm starting to like her more than Mia tbh and damn it my main save path is a mess

Ninja edit done

 

[Wildquill]

You are drunk dude, go home That is not Tiara!!!

This is Tiara

Haha. I wish I was drunk. Definitely tired. But you are 100% correct. Good picture of our unlucky retail gal . She looks good in black and gold.

 

[sunqian3000]

good game

 

[xXwankerXx]

Interesting at first but the game makes me lose interest more and more in each update.

I agree. Having an awkward, ridiculously shy, low self-esteem virgin nerd as a MC isn't helping either. Rachel, Mia and the other women will definitely wanna marry him after they hear what he does for a living, especially Rachel, who's rich AF. Imagine her explaining to her friends and business partners why her BF/future husband develops porn games instead of working a 'normal' job.

Now way I would want to bring in competition.

Given how 'confident' he is, Ethan wouldn't even have to put 1% effort to fuck both Mia and Rachel. Glad the dev said there wil be no NTR and Ethan isn't the stereotypical backstabbing asshole coz this MC belongs in a cuck simulator game.

 

[NekoGirlHentaiGamer18]

~> Hmm, the title is good just hoping girls bo*bs are not silicon materials anyway gonna try the game.

 

[Wildquill]

~> Hmm, the title is good just hoping girls bo*bs are not silicon materials anyway gonna try the game.

We're making steady progress on Chapter 10. We've got a volleyball game and all the ladies getting dressed up for a night out.

 

[LemmeFapNow]

NEED A HERO!!!

 

[SamualHand]

NEED A HERO!!!

Why do you need it hero? He is not getting hard anymore? Maybe Viagra can be your hero?

 

[LemmeFapNow]

Why do you need it hero? He is not getting hard anymore? Maybe Viagra can be your hero?

BADUM TSSSSSSSSSSS atttempt of being funny

 

[DeliteDouche]

I think this would be one of the times where I wished the Dev delayed an update instead of releasing what was ready.
The volleyball game was fine the first time around but you have to play it again since there are two main routes. I know that SinAppeal worked hard on it, but you gotta add a skip option with you winning or losing choices for players who have zero interest in mini games.

The way the chapter ended, the player gets blue balled ALTHOUGH it is totally possible I made some wrong choices. I’ll probably Unren it tonight to see if I missed anything.

Edit: There wasn’t any updates to the rewards and scene replays. Kinsey’s scene still wasn’t included in the gallery.


I know there was some setbacks and I’ll check out Chapter 11 once it is out but Chapter 10 definitely missed its mark.

 

[Deleted member 3208170]

I think this would be one of the times where I wished the Dev delayed an update instead of releasing what was ready.
The volleyball game was fine the first time around but you have to play it again since there are two main routes. I know the SinAppeal worked hard on it, but you gotta add a skip option with you winning or losing choices for players who have zero interest in mini games.

The way the chapter ended, the player gets blue balled ALTHOUGH it is totally possible I made some wrong choices. I’ll probably Unren it tonight to see if I missed anything.

Edit: There wasn’t any updates to the rewards and scene replays. Kinsey’s scene still wasn’t included in the gallery.


I know there was some setbacks and I’ll check out Chapter 11 once it is out but Chapter 10 definitely missed its mark.

Chapter 9 too. Doesn't it. And I cant remember 8.
If you don't like Carminey you don't want her to see Vacuum cleaning for 5 minutes.
You have a Main Story which doesn't move forward. 2 Side Story which I consider now loose ends.
Side Stories which hooked interest. Carmine is a bad mother and the Ash thing. The incident at the Shop was sep 21 (Evil Milfs and poor Tiara.) . That's one year now and nothing happened.

Why on earth did the MC take a Photo from Carmine. My MC has no interest points in her. This all doesn't make sense to me anymore.

This starting to lose gravitas because nothing happens storywise. And it could contain three fun and engaging stories. But we're trembling on the same spot for a year.

 

[DeliteDouche]

Spoilers in case new players happen to see :

I was ok with Carmine’s scene. Never mind to me it’s a little weird for her to be named Carmine (apparently it’s neutral according to Google). Although I would choose Tiara over Carmine. There are (very) brief scenes with Tiara and Carmine in chapter 10 in case you haven’t played it.

Was Chapter 8 the scenes with Rachel’s footjob and going down on Mia/fingering?

The scenes in the shop are almost a year old??? Holy shit

I agree I am more interested in the side stories than Mia and Rachel. Can’t forget the mom you saved from the speeding car.

Overall, I am still curious where all of this is going, for now

 

[Deleted member 3208170]

Spoilers in case new players happen to see :

I was ok with Carmine’s scene. Never mind to me it’s a little weird for her to be named Carmine (apparently it’s neutral according to Google). Although I would choose Tiara over Carmine. There are (very) brief scenes with Tiara and Carmine in chapter 10 in case you haven’t played it.

Was Chapter 8 the scenes with Rachel’s footjob and going down on Mia/fingering?

The scenes in the shop is almost a year old??? Holy shit

I agree I am more interested in the side stories than Mia and Rachel. Can’t forget the mom you saved from the speeding car.

Overall, I am still curious where all of this is going, for now

No, I haven't played it. I used to be a Patreon for a short time. But not anymore.
But you can spoil me, in the Tiara and her Mother scene. Is the shop incident a thing?

 

[DeliteDouche]

No, I haven't played it. I used to be a Patreon for a short time. But not anymore.
But you can spoil me, in the Tiara and her Mother scene. Is the shop incident a thing?

Sorry, there might’ve been a misunderstanding, I was asking if the scenes in Carmine’s shop are almost a year old?
In chapter 10, Tiara has a bath scene and is thinking about forgiving MC since he apparently snitched on her to Carmine ‍♂(I don’t remember my choices) Later Carmine puts her foot between MC’s legs while at dinner. Nothing crazy in both scenes

 

[Deleted member 3208170]

Sorry, there might’ve been a misunderstanding, I was asking if the scenes in Carmine’s shop are almost a year old?
In chapter 10, Tiara has a bath scene and is thinking about forgiving MC since he apparently snitched on her to Carmine ‍♂(I don’t remember my choices) Later Carmine puts her foot between MC’s legs while at dinner. Nothing crazy in both scenes

Yes, the scene is a year old.
And that's what I meant, everybody was hooked. Everybody wants to know what's going on. But we got this.
This incident is forgotten. It could be interesting, but we get a Volleyball game.

And you can see that in this thread. Most people lost their interest. Which is a pity. But I have said it several times. Bring on the story or stories.

 

[DeliteDouche]

Yes, the scene is a year old.
And that's what I meant, everybody was hooked. Everybody wants to know what's going on. But we got this.
This incident is forgotten. It could be interesting, but we get a Volleyball game.

And you can see that in this thread. Most people lost their interest. Which is a pity. But I have said it several times. Bring on the story or stories.

Agreed, I think people the game started to lose some steam once he did the NFTs. I don’t blame them for trying to get some extra capital, but it just seems like they (the developers)got sidetracked

 

[Wildquill]

I think this would be one of the times where I wished the Dev delayed an update instead of releasing what was ready.
The volleyball game was fine the first time around but you have to play it again since there are two main routes. I know the SinAppeal worked hard on it, but you gotta add a skip option with you winning or losing choices for players who have zero interest in mini games.

The way the chapter ended, the player gets blue balled ALTHOUGH it is totally possible I made some wrong choices. I’ll probably Unren it tonight to see if I missed anything.

Edit: There wasn’t any updates to the rewards and scene replays. Kinsey’s scene still wasn’t included in the gallery.


I know there was some setbacks and I’ll check out Chapter 11 once it is out but Chapter 10 definitely missed its mark.

Thank you for your feedback. I think overall the volleyball scene isn't too long. Maybe we can add a special render for if you win or lose.

And the scene is still going forward, whether Rachel or Mia comes in. It will play out differently. I'm glad you enjoyed the Carmine scene. That was fun to write. Tiara's stuff was short and sweet, but she is kind of a slow-burn. If you're a fan of her, stick with it.

I hope we'll be able to get you more into Rachel or Mia down the line. And that mom from the accident scene should be returning.

Yes, the scene is a year old.
And that's what I meant, everybody was hooked. Everybody wants to know what's going on. But we got this.
This incident is forgotten. It could be interesting, but we get a Volleyball game.

And you can see that in this thread. Most people lost their interest. Which is a pity. But I have said it several times. Bring on the story or stories.

The stuff at the shop has not been forgotten, and it has played into how Tiara and PC interact. There is something hovering above their heads. Tiara nearly talks about it during the walk after the volleyball game.

Agreed, I think people the game started to lose some steam once he did the NFTs. I don’t blame them for trying to get some extra capital, but it just seems like they (the developers)got sidetracked

Sure things slowed down a little, but we're still working every month on renders and the story.

 

[willhitman47]

I know this is not the place but its goes. This game should be sandbox with better story.

 

[Wildquill]

I know this is not the place but its goes. This game should be sandbox with better story.

Thanks for the feedback. Sandbox add a great deal of work to any game. I'm doing it a bit myself on Sunwave Hotel and many times I wish I just did a visual novel because I would probably be done with it by now. WoS is in a good state, and we're following the guiding stones of many solid games like DIK and WVM.

Sin and I also just went through plans for the new update, and I think Mia fans will enjoy it a lot.