* Engrish
* Probably could have started this game on the train without the opening.
* Completely telegraphed the luggage theft.
* Oh,and how can she fit through the door to the cafe and her suitcase can[t? Just turn it sideways. That makes no sense.
* Bored
Okay, short and just not that interesting. The English needs work, There's little sexual content (Iwould have loved to see the scen in the train coninue for a bit longer), and really, it just didn't engage me. Perhaps some would like this, bu t I think there are much, much better offerings out there.