It's not even a case of who I want to see most I just want the relationships to make sense.I'd like to see the dev run a poll on their patreon about which girl people most want to see more content for. I think they are under the misguided assumption that most people give a shit about the side girls...... I'd imagine that most of the players are interested in Desire and maybe Megan (although since we found out she was adopted that stopped being a special situation as well).
I had a bad habit of laying down too many tracks and overcomplicating my projects when I started writing and recording music. It's easy to lose sight on what makes the idea work and get lost in the rabbit hole. "No excuse" can be your opinion, but I don't fault the dev for being overly ambitious, of which he/she will learn from to eventually make better products...as long as they don't get too discouraged by comments like yours.All this "it's their first game" is absolutely no excuse for how messy it gets. If anything, being their first game should have been a reasson to keep it simple and not throw in relationships out of nowhere.
If they can't take criticism they shouldn't be putting their work out for public consumption.as long as they don't get too discouraged by comments like yours.
It should have been very simple, MC with Liv (Daughter A), maybe add Libbie as a foil for Liv and the therapist for MC, boom, classic romance Square.It's not even a case of who I want to see most I just want the relationships to make sense.
It starts off as a mother/daughter romance and ends up as a massive clusterfuck of nonsense.
All this "it's their first game" is absolutely no excuse for how messy it gets. If anything, being their first game should have been a reasson to keep it simple and not throw in relationships out of nowhere.
I don't think it's garbage. I enjoy most of it even when it gets messy I still enjoy the sex scenes.Maybe saying it's "garbage" isn't the best - nor the fairest - way to describe it.
I can agree with that, there's a lot of wasted potential, individually the characters and relationships probably would work, but throwing them all together is very confusing & connecting (or rather combining) them makes them feel meaningless.I don't think it's garbage. I enjoy most of it even when it gets messy I still enjoy the sex scenes.
It IS messy though.
Starts off great. Starts to get a bit sloppy in the middle when the second daughter and her friend turn up, it starts introducing more characters but doesn't explain where or why.
By the end the relationship most of us started playing this for is all but gone and everyone is with someone else just because.
I think that is a really good idea, and, despite my rude words, I want to say you have most of the pieces at hand already, just try to boil the characters and the content down to the essence of what this VN started as. The first release you did was, arguably, the best iteration of the game. Expand on interpersonal, believable interactions (you can do that by basically using what you dub the best parts of the Desire/Liv relationship & interactions you already wrote, while cutting out the stuff that's just there to have all the relationships & characters in 1 story somehow)I did a mock-up of the redo for this game.
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So I decided to make this a sandbox game after all - since the regular VN is too fast with Liv's actions. Plus, it will use the same engine as my other game, so it won't be too hard to complete the 1st chapter.
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Change the Font Size Scale in the mods quickmenu. Swipe up to get to the save screen.The ui is tiny that I cant click it. And sometimes disappears entirely and can't save or load that if I close the app I have to restart