Just played the game.
I like the art, especially Milena. She's a cutie! And it's nice to see her warming up to the MC.
I was counting the % update to not end before you get to have vag sex with her!
The intimate scenes are really well-drawn, as well as the cityscape and the interior of the shop.
I'm interested in getting the MC to learn spells and use them! This could make the game more than just a hunt for lewd scenes.
However, the game has some hiccups.
First one: I was stuck at the 'Buy a gift for Milena' quest. If it says 'buy', I'll try to, well, buy. I tried buying clothes, but they didn't solve my situation. Only going back and clicking on 'Talk' that it was solved. Please, make it more clear.
Second one: the 'no incest' option left something to be desired. Milena calls you 'mate'...? 'Housemate' would make more sense, signaling they're sharing the house. However, they have the same father. It would be better if MC was just his stepbro? Or a friend looking for a place to stay in the bigger city?
That would help a lot with Gven as well, since it seems that she is supposed to be his mother in the incest version. Well, in the non-incest version, it makes no sense to have her being called 'Housewife' instead of 'Mother' by Milena and 'Stepmother' or just 'Gven' by MC. Also, it all kinda breaks apart when Blaise meets Gven - after all, if his father and Blaise were courting Gven, it's obvious he's her kid.. I'd say some kind of rewriting is necessary to make the non-incest story more feasible; just exchanging some words won't make it so.
Third one: Gven only appears every other morning. That only makes the game slower, as I only had her quests to do and having to advance a day just to talk to her was boring.
Fourth one: I felt the pace with the nun to be too fast. And it feels she and the priest have no connection to the rest of the story whatsoever. Are they going to be more relevant to the overall story in the future?
Fifth one: for some reason, the ice cream scene makes the game almost crash. Dunno why. Perhaps it tries to access more memory/CPU than necessary? The other scenes are all fine.
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All in all, I can see this same having potential. Hope it'll get it's fair share of attention!