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TsubameYui

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Loving the concept and characters. Congrats on a successful prologue! If you'd like, I'd be happy to proofread the game for you. The dialogue is pretty good for an ESL speaker. Wouldn't take much for me to clean up the spelling, grammar, and give it a more native/natural feel. Feel free to message me if you're interested!

Thanks for your hard work, and best of luck going forward!
 

VenomSuperSayan

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May 7, 2020
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Loving the concept and characters. Congrats on a successful prologue! If you'd like, I'd be happy to proofread the game for you. The dialogue is pretty good for an ESL speaker. Wouldn't take much for me to clean up the spelling, grammar, and give it a more native/natural feel. Feel free to message me if you're interested!

Thanks for your hard work, and best of luck going forward!
Thanks for your kind words, your interest in my work, and your will to fix some grammar mistakes. About writing stuff, I think I was better after feedback from a beloved user, "Less is more".
 

Lupin the 3rd

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Looks Good. But honestly, I would prefer if there would be no Male action in it at all nor MFF Threesomes for this Game. So you could stick the Money you make for this Project on more Lesbian Scenes.

Also make Hollys Husband a Cheater during their second Honeymoon. Holly needs to catch him and then divorce him so she can turn to her sister and daughter completely.


Avaron1974 this could be for you I think.
 

grahegri

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VenomSuperSayan

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Regarding the update, I've practically made renders of half of the first day of the first season. Now I have to take a break to create a location that will be important and some of the "action" will take place here. I chose this store asset for a certain reason, unfortunately, it's incomplete in this regard and I have to do some things myself.
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Anyway, the link to Discord was added in the OP, I probably have to develop a fanbase to get approved on SubscribeStar faster.
 

VenomSuperSayan

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The new location is done, maybe I need some adjustments here and there, but not bad for something I did myself.

About the update; the number of renders done so far is good, but if I need to release a proper initial version, I'll have to do more.

Two new locations are needed, one that will be important in future updates and another that will be a one-time thing.
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Also, Itch.io link was added in the OP.
 
4.40 star(s) 5 Votes