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Did you miss this is a lesbian VN??
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Nope. AWAM have "lesbian" tag too But there beautiful boys have too.
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After reading the description I was hoping that we would finally get a decent lesbian game, especially with wincest. This genre has been "cursed" for a long time, every other title in genere had pluses and cons where the cons were definitely more. And I don't think it will change but I'd like to be wrong.
We have a very early stage, many things can be improved. First of all, I think it is now possible to combine the prologue with the rest of the actual game.
Language and diologues definitely need polishing. Quite a few of them sound very artificial. The behavior of the characters is often strange - "Are your breasts natural?", "Are you my daughter-in-law?".
We already have sketched "enemies" throughout the story
So far, I'm not buying it. I'm tired of this artificial, unrealistic pseudo-mafia/white collar crimes being placed in games.
On the technical side. Wide frames, centrally placed characters, sometimes flat lighting. In some scenes it is clear that young characters were scaled "by hand".
The lack of any sound is a bit sad.
So far there is a kinetic novel. The only choice is about scene variation. Will it be a kinetic novel or a game after all? Because I absolutely cannot imagine any sexual activity with Leah.
About fetishes. What can we expect? The main problem with all lesbian games is the lack of variation in scenes. Oral sex in a frame with a changed angle stops amusing after 5 times. Ok, we have foot fetish. Could you briefly map out what more to expect? Anal, fisting, insertions, pissing, bdsm-dom etc.? Or more vanila side?
I know the whole message doesn't sound very positive but my goal is not to demotivate Dev(s). On the contrary, I hope that in some time it will be a very good game.
We have a very early stage, many things can be improved. First of all, I think it is now possible to combine the prologue with the rest of the actual game.
Language and diologues definitely need polishing. Quite a few of them sound very artificial. The behavior of the characters is often strange - "Are your breasts natural?", "Are you my daughter-in-law?".
We already have sketched "enemies" throughout the story
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On the technical side. Wide frames, centrally placed characters, sometimes flat lighting. In some scenes it is clear that young characters were scaled "by hand".
The lack of any sound is a bit sad.
So far there is a kinetic novel. The only choice is about scene variation. Will it be a kinetic novel or a game after all? Because I absolutely cannot imagine any sexual activity with Leah.
About fetishes. What can we expect? The main problem with all lesbian games is the lack of variation in scenes. Oral sex in a frame with a changed angle stops amusing after 5 times. Ok, we have foot fetish. Could you briefly map out what more to expect? Anal, fisting, insertions, pissing, bdsm-dom etc.? Or more vanila side?
I know the whole message doesn't sound very positive but my goal is not to demotivate Dev(s). On the contrary, I hope that in some time it will be a very good game.
There are many valid points in your post.
About the Prologue, since my SubscribeStar is on the way, I had to manage on other platforms like Itchio and the Prologue served me well as a Demo, since most of my shame renders are there, for now, I will leave it separate from the main game, and if one day I manage to buy an Nvidia x090, I will work on these renders again, before it I will make Leah and Jenn, aka the second niece, scenes on the Prologue.
About choices, I've reduced my potential several times, female protag instead of a male, lesbian only instead of having old guys and shotas too, being a Visual about older women with younger women, instead of lesbian romance VN.
I'm only working on a specific niche, there's no point in having a bunch of choices here.
As for the dialogues, this is something I have to improve, there's no other way around it, but my updates will be much slower.
Fetishes; Vanilla with some foot stuff.
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About frames and lesbian scenes, I will follow what we have in porn movies as I did in Leah's scene she grinds Charlotte's tongue.
Wide frames; I'm sure are scenes where the character is barefoot
.As for the other points, it was the best I could do at the moment, although it's not an excuse that I can't improve.
Thanks for the criticism, it's what I need right now.
For wincest side; Nieces, Sister, half-sisters, step-mom.
Non @i, 2 employers, 3 adult women. But this novel doesn't have routes.
I see the loli tag, but nothing looks particularly loli in the preview images...
For me is the cute Redhead in the office, I did a good job on her, but will be the second niece too.
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Big difference between lesbian tag where it's present in some parts of the game and a lesbian VN where it is the main part of the game.
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i be blunt and say it: this sucks
KNs are boring, imo.
Holy Moly that is the kind of game I need. The pure potential of Mother/Daughter, Sister/sister, Aunt/Niece and maybe even Mother/Daughter/Sister incest is incredible. I am curious to see where you will go with the game but alone the fact that it is a pure lesbian game and like I said the raw potential for all the lesbiancest content it could include it could be great. I hope you can bring out the full potential of what could be hinted by the chars and some dialoges even though it is short for now.
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Anyway, my SubscribeStar week post.
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Yeah I think she's looking older than the usual loli characters, but I get your point.
Looking forward to meeting the second niece too!
Since I can't send a PM to you, if you want to see the early concept for the second niece, send me a PM.
My thought as well. Well, I'll keep an eye on this, see how it looks in a few releases.
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No. It can be but it's not inherent or necessary.
Is it also boring when everyone is naturally heterosexual? Does that also need tension to be interesting?
Maybe it does to you, I don't know. But a lesbian themed story is absolutely not required to have its characters sexual preference be a source of tension.
If I were to make stupid assumptions I'd think you just don't like that this story isn't giving you exactly what you prefer and coming up with weak excuses as to why it needs to. But I can't read your mind.