Hmm....this could have been interesting. The end of the prologue is confusing as hell...Have Ms Campbell talking while seeing a bunch of other characters.
Honestly, this could be great...but it's far too overly convulated in trying to make a complicated plot. Missing father, unknown sisters (who have to keep quiet)...crime...shady business...backstabbing...
I'm not usually one for telling devs what they should do, it's their story, tell it how they want, howver in this case, it would have been much better without all the complications and shady bosses etc. Just a simple plain old every day small business owner and her life looking after her niece and the people she meets. That's a great story (given the genre) on it's own, it doesn't need anything else.
The rest is manufactured drama and as others have said...it's tiring, even more so when not done properly. That is an aside from all the other issues it is that have already been commented on. Might come back to this at a later stage perhaps and see how it's come along.
Good luck dev.