I really, really don't understand some of the negativity about this VN. On the contrary, I believe that this is one of those rare creations where you actually get what is promised. So what's with all the complaining.
You don't like the game because there are too many LI - so what, it is a harem game.
You don't like the game because there is too many text - so what, it is a porn game, and there is a lot of action.
You don't like the game because the dialog doesn't compare to Umberto Eco - so what, go read a book.
You don't like the game because you feel the characters lack depth - so what, it is a porn game.
You don't like the game because the MC is like Jesus - so what, is is a harem game.
You see, just like all the negative guys, i feel the need to have to repeat myself. Yet, the solution is so simple. You don't like it, you don't play it. But stop pushing your opinion on others.
I see a developer that really makes an effort here, to offer variety, to offer quantity, to offer quality... Personally I adore Shauna and Jaimie, I love Bayley and Natalie. I think Veronica, Keyana and Harper are real characters with real issues, without having to put a downer on the whole story. So please, stop whining and go with the flow. Is this the best game out there? No, it isn't. But in my humble opinion, as for a harem game, YES it is !
I have read in another thread somewhere that people were jealous of the funds the developer was making and therefor posted negative things. I start to believe that the same logic applies here.
One last piece of advice to everyone... Not every VN in here will be liked by everyone, because we all have different likes and expectations. So go with it, test the games that seem intriguing to you, play them and delete them if you didn't like them. And let the people that enjoy them, have their fun.