VN Ren'Py WVM [S2 Ch. 1 Ep. 13 B5] [Braindrop]

[lemonfreak]

Rachael says she been with her for 20 years

Yes, I know that and that's why she doesn't connect properly. I was saying that IF she'd been with Rachel for 6-7 years and was aged 20-21 her characterisation would work better for me.

EDIT - I just spotted the typo, I meant to say she'd, not she's. Completly changed the meaning of the sentence, lol. Changed now.

 

[ImperialD]

i understood you , i was trying to get people to understand that the ages does work out ...
i personally have met women that was 35 - 40 years old that looked 25

 

[ImperialD]

whats really fucked up is i have also met girls that where 19 - 25 that looked 40 also

 

[KinkierThanThou]

say what you want i've seen 40 year old women look 25

Like in many VNs where the supposed "mom" looks about 3 years older than the oldest child.

I'm okay accepting Tali as the age given (I believe 34 is canon? Correct me if I'm mistaken) even if she acts more like a naive 20-year old most of the time. After all, porn games run on a more than is healthy amount of "suspension of disbelief" much like the Fast and the Furious franchise.

 

[ImperialD]

i think tali is hot .. jmo

 

[lemonfreak]

i understood you , i was trying to get people to understand that the ages does work out ...
i personally have met women that was 35 - 40 years old that looked 25

We're on the same page as I agree that the ages work out but they're wrong imo. Rachel's fine as she is but I think Princess needs to be younger

 

[ImperialD]

Like in many VNs where the supposed "mom" looks about 3 years older than the oldest child.

I'm okay accepting Tali as the age given (I believe 34 is canon? Correct me if I'm mistaken) even if she acts more like a naive 20-year old most of the time. After all, porn games run on a more than is healthy amount of "suspension of disbelief" much like the Fast and the Furious franchise.

i get what your saying but she been alone with Rachael for 20 years sheltered .... so her acting yonger would in my opinion is understandable

 

[sgnafuz]

Relax mate. It was really late when I posted that. I was half asleep. I'll add them in now then



Never knew anyone cared enough about my opinion xD

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I haven't played in a while due to my main computer breaking down, so now I don't remember all of the girls (there are so many, but never too many). I make myself a point to review them all thoroughly as soon as I have restored it.

 

[qwsl]

Are there any people here who can create a patch that corrects this discrepancy in the plot? I’m sure the author does not admit that at that moment he was not in the best shape and this fragment is the most illogical in the whole novel, and naturally, he won’t change anything (especially by filibuster's request) Or Unren + notepad++ can fix it?
i mean, -10 years for how long they know each other, so Tali about 25 not 35

alcoholism, drug addiction and depraved lifestyle changes appearance - I know a girl who is 15 years younger than me, she looks older than THAT nurse from WVM

 

[ImperialD]

Are there any people here who can create a patch that corrects this discrepancy in the plot? I’m sure the author does not admit that at that moment he was not in the best shape and this fragment is the most illogical in the whole novel, and naturally, he won’t change anything (especially by filibuster's request)

wtf r u talking about ?

 

[KinkierThanThou]

i get what your saying but she been alone with Rachael for 20 years sheltered .... so her acting yonger would in my opinion is understandable

Partially true? I mean she had access to a TV and videogames so I would have expected her to be a bit more exposed to how people normally behave in social situations. Don't get me wrong, I sort of like her child-like wonder. I just find it not very attractive in a potential LI.

 

[ImperialD]

i'm feel just the opposite i like her that way

 

[lemonfreak]

wtf r u talking about ?

I assume he means BD isn't someone who makes wholesale changes by popular demand as he has a lot of his story planned out. That being said, he is open to making changes if the arguement is persuasive.

 

[Hordragg]

wtf r u talking about ?

I'm guessing they are looking for a way to alter Rachael's dialogue so Talismah's age is more in line with their perception of her age. But like I said, I'm just guessing here.

 

[KinkierThanThou]

i'm feel just the opposite i like her that way

To each their own and I'm not judging, but as I've said a few pages back if I had known her backstory I probably wouldn't have swiped right on her profile.

 

[sgnafuz]

Are there any people here who can create a patch that corrects this discrepancy in the plot? I’m sure the author does not admit that at that moment he was not in the best shape and this fragment is the most illogical in the whole novel, and naturally, he won’t change anything (especially by filibuster's request) Or Unren + notepad++ can fix it?

alcoholism, drug addiction and depraved lifestyle changes appearance - I know a girl who is 15 years younger than me, she looks older than THAT nurse from WVM

Really man, what discrepancy are you referring to?

 

[ImperialD]

just a serious question here ...

am i the only guy here that has ever met a girl in her say mid 20's that acted childish ?
i can't be the only one !!

 

[qwsl]

it's not about childish personality, it's about unnatural for middle eastern middle aged woman look like teenager

 

[ImperialD]

who said she was middle eastern ?

 

[KinkierThanThou]

just a serious question here ...

am i the only guy here that has ever met a girl in her say mid 20's that acted childish ?
i can't be the only one !!

I've met girls like that in real life and didn't find it all that attractive then either.

On the other hand, in a lot of VNs the youngest girl/sister/daughter/LI is canonically 18 due to age of consent laws/Patreon rules and yet they act like naive 14 year olds yet we (as the MC) still gladly fuck 'em silly.