VN Ren'Py WVM [S2 Ch.1 Ep.13 F] [Braindrop]

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It's hard to estimate the amount of new content from the changelog since I last played 0.7.6 in 2020. (I prefer the old update style of "day ___".) You guys aren't exaggerating when you say that only 2 days or so have passed in-game since then?
 
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I think the biggest plague on the story besides the character bloat is that not only has it been schizophrenically set up as an incest story, and since gone on to retcon that idea and insist vehemently that you gave the MC not one, but two hot moms and a college aged sister because you think incest is icky - but that it is also a world which is fundamentally spineless, and a "hugbox" in more than just a literal sense.

We want to suspend disbelief in stories in order to enhance it, and our own experience of it. When you make a world where everybody in it never says no, has no real morals or convictions, or even opinions of any substance, then nothing taking place in that world actually has any tension, conflict, meaning etc.

We are forced to suspend our disbelief that there's not a single adult in the story (besides Millie, and only for like one in game day) who offers up any opposition to the MC essentially running what looks from the outside like some sex cult; living on a private compound funded by his cradle robbing baby mama who also moonlights as the MCs pimp, sugar momma and shadowy businesswoman.

This suspension of disbelief actively ruins all of the taboo elements of the story. It can't really be taboo or salacious if nobody gives a fuck and treats it like its normal.

Harper going from "don't hurt my daughter or I'll chop your balls off" to dribbling the mc's balls behind her daughter's back should be incredibly salacious, but it just isn't because nobody in the world has any real moral convictions and ultimately nobody in the story is going to give a flying fuck. Nat will forgive the MC quickly if she cares at all, Willabelle will let it slide because she's also going to fucking the MC. At a certain point it all just becomes masturbatory, and I'm not talking about the readers at home.

The MC's relationship with Rachael is also absolutely wild. She supposedly had the hots for him while he was underage, and waited around till the day that he was legal when she immediately starts fucking him and literally pimping him out to other women. It's an absolutely insane story that falls flat because in BDs world its not seen as incredibly taboo and downright predatory, its just wholesome business as usual. Not the MCs Moms, Sister, or loving girlfriends seem to call any of this into question. Racheal is a total scumbag and freak but you with how insane the story's world is, you might not even really realize it unless you step back and think about it. They don't even have to hide any of this from anyone, because nobody cares. Not the university, not your family, not that fella in the alley.

There are many more examples of how compelling this story is or could be when you put it in any real context. I don't even think the story is as bad as most people say, it's the world and the characters' vapidness that ruins it.
 
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cl0ckw3rk said:
It's hard to estimate the amount of new content from the changelog since I last played 0.7.6 in 2020. (I prefer the old update style of "day ___".) You guys aren't exaggerating when you say that only 2 days or so have passed in-game since then?
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It's a little weird, you would of been in season 1, which was ~9 days. He apparently has a rework coming, which changes a bunch and stretches it out to 32ish days. Now in S2 we are around day 36 I think? It's kind of a mess to be honest.
 
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hic86 said:
It's a little weird, you would of been in season 1, which was ~9 days. He apparently has a rework coming, which changes a bunch and stretches it out to 32ish days. Now in S2 we are around day 36 I think? It's kind of a mess to be honest.
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Thanks for putting numbers to it. I read a few pages of the thread and decided to wait on playing the game again.
 
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trex999999 said:
I think the biggest plague on the story besides the character bloat is that not only has it been schizophrenically set up as an incest story, and since gone on to retcon that idea and insist vehemently that you gave the MC not one, but two hot moms and a college aged sister because you think incest is icky - but that it is also a world which is fundamentally spineless, and a "hugbox" in more than just a literal sense.

We want to suspend disbelief in stories in order to enhance it, and our own experience of it. When you make a world where everybody in it never says no, has no real morals or convictions, or even opinions of any substance, then nothing taking place in that world actually has any tension, conflict, meaning etc.

We are forced to suspend our disbelief that there's not a single adult in the story (besides Millie, and only for like one in game day) who offers up any opposition to the MC essentially running what looks from the outside like some sex cult; living on a private compound funded by his cradle robbing baby mama who also moonlights as the MCs pimp, sugar momma and shadowy businesswoman.

This suspension of disbelief actively ruins all of the taboo elements of the story. It can't really be taboo or salacious if nobody gives a fuck and treats it like its normal.

Harper going from "don't hurt my daughter or I'll chop your balls off" to dribbling the mc's balls behind her daughter's back should be incredibly salacious, but it just isn't because nobody in the world has any real moral convictions and ultimately nobody in the story is going to give a flying fuck. Nat will forgive the MC quickly if she cares at all, Willabelle will let it slide because she's also going to fucking the MC. At a certain point it all just becomes masturbatory, and I'm not talking about the readers at home.

The MC's relationship with Rachael is also absolutely wild. She supposedly had the hots for him while he was underage, and waited around till the day that he was legal when she immediately starts fucking him and literally pimping him out to other women. It's an absolutely insane story that falls flat because in BDs world its not seen as incredibly taboo and downright predatory, its just wholesome business as usual. Not the MCs Moms, Sister, or loving girlfriends seem to call any of this into question. Racheal is a total scumbag and freak but you with how insane the story's world is, you might not even really realize it unless you step back and think about it. They don't even have to hide any of this from anyone, because nobody cares. Not the university, not your family, not that fella in the alley.

There are many more examples of how compelling this story is or could be when you put it in any real context. I don't even think the story is as bad as most people say, it's the world and the characters' vapidness that ruins it.
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you understand this is just a game, not a documentary, right? this story is not real
 
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you understand this is just a game, not a documentary, right? this story is not real
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Nice job stating the obvious, captain. Next you're going to tell us the sky is blue too! :p Seriously though I think the bloke who wrote all that made something compelling to read instead of the same old shitpost about BD's usual antics or lack thereof. I like reading people's opinions on how messy the story can be when you take a step back and mull it over for a bit.

Cheers for the gif, gave me a good laugh.
 
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The obvious thing would be to hire a programmer and make the basketball scenes into NBA Jam, Where MC and picked Team mate are in big head mode, heating up, getting on fire and smash slam dunking.

The other chance would be to actually use an asian model for Emiko...

MC starts a home business of facial creams that are good for the skin?

I do honestly hope there is some team rivalries and banter in person/social media, since MC joined a failed team, the other teams probably don't think MC could carry the rest to victory and of course be made fun of, or no one goes to the away games since they expect it to be a stomping. Shit like that.
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Is There a Form to relationship with wendy, azel and sister?
 
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trex999999 said:
I think the biggest plague on the story besides the character bloat is that not only has it been schizophrenically set up as an incest story, and since gone on to retcon that idea and insist vehemently that you gave the MC not one, but two hot moms and a college aged sister because you think incest is icky - but that it is also a world which is fundamentally spineless, and a "hugbox" in more than just a literal sense.

We want to suspend disbelief in stories in order to enhance it, and our own experience of it. When you make a world where everybody in it never says no, has no real morals or convictions, or even opinions of any substance, then nothing taking place in that world actually has any tension, conflict, meaning etc.

We are forced to suspend our disbelief that there's not a single adult in the story (besides Millie, and only for like one in game day) who offers up any opposition to the MC essentially running what looks from the outside like some sex cult; living on a private compound funded by his cradle robbing baby mama who also moonlights as the MCs pimp, sugar momma and shadowy businesswoman.

This suspension of disbelief actively ruins all of the taboo elements of the story. It can't really be taboo or salacious if nobody gives a fuck and treats it like its normal.

Harper going from "don't hurt my daughter or I'll chop your balls off" to dribbling the mc's balls behind her daughter's back should be incredibly salacious, but it just isn't because nobody in the world has any real moral convictions and ultimately nobody in the story is going to give a flying fuck. Nat will forgive the MC quickly if she cares at all, Willabelle will let it slide because she's also going to fucking the MC. At a certain point it all just becomes masturbatory, and I'm not talking about the readers at home.

The MC's relationship with Rachael is also absolutely wild. She supposedly had the hots for him while he was underage, and waited around till the day that he was legal when she immediately starts fucking him and literally pimping him out to other women. It's an absolutely insane story that falls flat because in BDs world its not seen as incredibly taboo and downright predatory, its just wholesome business as usual. Not the MCs Moms, Sister, or loving girlfriends seem to call any of this into question. Racheal is a total scumbag and freak but you with how insane the story's world is, you might not even really realize it unless you step back and think about it. They don't even have to hide any of this from anyone, because nobody cares. Not the university, not your family, not that fella in the alley.

There are many more examples of how compelling this story is or could be when you put it in any real context. I don't even think the story is as bad as most people say, it's the world and the characters' vapidness that ruins it.
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Well the whole Rachel 1st meet is so weird to my eyes in the way that some avn have with the whole succubus plot take over the apearence of someone the MC knows and trys to seduce him... At least that is what i thought the first 2 times I played the game , especially the way she looked the MC when he asked him if he wants to have sex etc...Then about what you said for Harper sure it's weird how she got from "If you hurt my daughter i will cut your balls of " to bending over and let him fuck her brains out ...But the whole game has it's flaws ... For example there is no way any real school championship could take place with only 5 players per team at least not where I am from ... and from all the college shows I have seen and some of the games I played any serious team has at least 1 physiotherapist for the players ...But yes my general opinion is that there is 0 story that is about basketball at least...If that game continues it will probably become one big sex orgy...
 
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