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Thanks so much, the page I saw wasn't like this one, must not have loaded all the way
- Dec 23, 2019
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So...the one that DIED saving the young man's life family is COMPLETELY unknown to the boy's family, they have NO FCKING idea who one another is, never mentioning it, and he is even friends with his SON, at the same SCHOOL, yet fck all gets mentioned??
The boy behaving POLAR OPPOSITE to his daughter, and treating her like fucking GOLD is somehow strange and weird...the daughter of the man that gave HIS LIFE to save that boy??
The bitch mother/ wife that's left behind, doesn't recognize the boy her husband DIED FOR??
The one who died had NO IDEA who his wife employed, never BEEN to her business, and needed the fcking DIRECTIONS to get there?
WHAT PLANET is this totally fine and understandable??
GET the fck OUT of here!
When an ORGAN DONOR has the recipient whose life is SAVED by that organ, so that person can continue living a little longer, the DONOR and recipient KNOW one another!
When my girlfriend had HER life saved as a youth from a SHARK ATTACK while surfing, she grew close with the girl who saved her life and her family, still to this DAY we get together and spend time together since they are part of her extended FAMILY!
They are literally sisters from both sides of the family now.
The boy behaving POLAR OPPOSITE to his daughter, and treating her like fucking GOLD is somehow strange and weird...the daughter of the man that gave HIS LIFE to save that boy??
The bitch mother/ wife that's left behind, doesn't recognize the boy her husband DIED FOR??
The one who died had NO IDEA who his wife employed, never BEEN to her business, and needed the fcking DIRECTIONS to get there?
WHAT PLANET is this totally fine and understandable??
GET the fck OUT of here!
When an ORGAN DONOR has the recipient whose life is SAVED by that organ, so that person can continue living a little longer, the DONOR and recipient KNOW one another!
When my girlfriend had HER life saved as a youth from a SHARK ATTACK while surfing, she grew close with the girl who saved her life and her family, still to this DAY we get together and spend time together since they are part of her extended FAMILY!
They are literally sisters from both sides of the family now.
- Nov 15, 2020
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First of all, it's a porn game and at least it's more innovative than most stories.
Secondly, the old MC buried himself so much in work that he had no idea what was going on in his family anymore. It requires some suspension of disbelief but it does happen.
- Dec 23, 2019
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That's the only part you picked up on huh, the ONLY part that is excusable OR plausible.
We see that from the first frame, Paul didn't want to have anything to do with his life at all and distanced himself from it.
We get that in the first scene, everything following is incredulous at best.
The MAIN point I had was BOTH families are so very interconnected within the narrative, BUT they have ZERO clue who the other set is, being in a relationship for several years with a girl who lived through that firsthand, it's not only improbable but IMPOSSIBLE that this could even be fictionalized, even basing the fcking blame on it being a porn game.
Life can be altered, fictionalized, warped, and changed to be a shadow of its former self, but the main premise behind them NOT knowing a damn thing about one another, especially Pauls's wife ASKING who the fck HE was...the boy her husband gave his LIFE for, the one that would have easily been the center of EVERY story involving the tragedy is just ludicrous, with ZERO excuses for creating a "story" like this at all!
Lastly do not even THINK about replying with a short answer that I can forsee you are most likely mulling over in your head, even before you sent that reply, that "If I don't like it, move ON to something else" since THAT stupid form of thinking doesn't GET the developer to improve, alter or advance THEIR way of thinking.
Apathy is FAR more destructive than constructive criticism!~
- Nov 15, 2020
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Well, I would suggest to stop with whatever you are drinking or whatever drugs you are taking and relax a little bit.
We are talking about a porn game. Porn is generally not known for it's clever or deep stories.
This one, in my opinion, has a plot which may be a bit far-fetched, or even inconsistent (as seems to be your position), but which is still more creative than 90% of the other games here. Especially if we are talking about the incest harem genre.
Most games don't really go further than "my mom is so beautiful" and "my son has such a big cock" as an excuse for them fucking.
In this game, the dead guy is this typical incest game MC, but after his death, his spirit is now replaced by an old soul with lots of experience with relationships and life in general. That makes the mom and sister falling for his "new" personality at least a bit more plausible.
Anyway, when it comes to constructive criticism, you are almost 3 years too late to this party. The problems that you point out are so deeply engrained in the story, you'll have to rewrite everything. And I hope and think that Zargon_games won't do that. This story, while theoretically it could go on for ever, is I think for at least 67% done. The dev just needs to bring everything to a good conclusion.
All in all, I would, indeed, suggest what you already wrote: "If I don't like it, move ON to something else"
- Dec 23, 2019
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LMFAO!
Yet again you miss the majority of the premise behind what had me so passionate that I had to type it out here.
I REALLY am not surprised that there wasn't more you could cherry-pick from what I said to spin on a positive scale, since there wasn't much fuel for that fire was there.
It's not hard at ALL to be creative enough to have a basic understanding of what would happen in the beginning scenario, hell they wouldn't even have to research much about it, since COMMON SENSE should have easily kicked in.
You talk like this story was groundbreaking, how it was so much better than anything published on here.
I have played hundreds of games right from this site and watched them not only progress but learn from their and OTHERS' previous mistakes, then use that knowledge to not ONLY make the rest of the game/ novels better but drastically improve future projects they work on!
Works of art like Timestamps, Being A DIK, City Of Broken Dreamers, or the best reference I can THINK of is Genesis Order!
Look at the TWO previous installments of THAT game, "Lust Epidemic" and "Treasure of Nadia", the two that define G.O. and how much better it is compared to the two LINKED games in the series of stand-alone projects (you do not need to play the earlier ones but the references in each are obvious and apparent), then observe how it started rough and choppy in their first game, improved 1000% in their second, following up to their current project Genesis Order.
See what I did there "Genius" (psst that wasnt actually calling you a genius, it was sarcasm...so don't bother thanking me for the insult..or what you might perceive as a compliment) this was a comparison for learning what parts failed, then working on them to improve and make OTHER projects better, and the ones I listed got SO much better, since they LISTENED to public feedback, used THOSE facts, then either implemented them OR restarted the projects fresh as a result...like intelligent creators often do.
Stop drinking or taking whatever drugs you perceive I am doing to what..think clearly lol?
I don't do drugs, nor drink, nice projecting you have going on there.
3 years too late to this party am I?
You seem to be oblivious that if my comments and issues were read, THIS developer as well as others might just pick up on the problems and either alter them or not have them at all...or use more of that miracle drug named "Common Sence"
Don't bother responding to this, I have already left it in the rearview, especially when you have fanfare to support your ridiculous responses, where you don't even come up with creative solutions on your own, you just cherry-pick ONE idea and try to shoot it down lol.
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How exactly is the husband supposed to know who worked for his wife? He neither worked with wife nor did even like her.
Why would an employee need to know of her employer's family? And how is the boy's mother supposed to be relevant enough for the husband to have any need to know her in the first place? It's not a family business or some home front bakery.
How, or rather why is it supposed for the husband to know his neighbor? This is neither on a countryside nor is it some small town where everyone is supposed to know each other, it's not even an apartment complex, and who needs to know some people living some blocks away either?!
How is organ donation or shark attack equivalent to a case of mortality? and why would an uptight father supposedly be relevant to some spoiled teenager who's friends with his son whom he failed, also if the girl who saved your girlfriend from the shark attack have lost her life in the process, you wouldn't have heard of her much, no relationship would have been developed for you to hear about.
Though I'm with you on not knowing where his wife worked and this, in particular, doesn't make sense, but you need to chill out any way.
Seriously, my parents might be able to name 2 or 3 of my friends each, and I doubt they'd even get the same 3. Dude has some really unreasonable expectations for communication within a household that's been well established to be broken af.
Oh, SHE recognizes him, mostly as the bad influence to her son. Which shows how disconnected the father was from his family since he DIDN'T. If he had known who the kid was, he'd have let him die.
- Nov 15, 2020
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Good for you, but your passionate concern for a game which you clearly think is mediocre at best is somewhat worrying.
Games are made for enjoyment. I can enjoy what is here. In fact, I think it's great. Which doesn't mean that it's free of problems, some of which you pointed out, but there are others. For me the good points of this game are far outshadowing the bad points.
But if you can't enjoy it, it's simply best to move on.
The game was started, including all the elements you have issue with, in 2020.
Now the game is at season 2, chapter 3.
Personally I think there will not be a season 3, meaning that in a couple of chapters this will be wrapped up and marked "completed".
And how big do you think the chance is that a potential dev reads your post, in this thread?
If you really want to influence a project, then do so at the very beginning. Or open a thread in the General Forum.
But this is futile. Like Don Quichote fighting the windmills. He was also very passionate but in the end he accomplished nothing.
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Season 1 is a separate download (also found in the first post), the Season 2 Chapter 3 download contains all chapters of season 2.
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Passionate, yes, but why, why did Don Quixote attack windmills? If you know the answer, then you also should know that there is nothing you can do about it; no matter what, he is gonna' attack damn windmills.
Its amazing to see a post about Don Quixote though, hilarious. 8D
- Jan 4, 2019
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Way to go above and beyond to help a fellow fan of 3D VNs out. Thank you so much for doing this!
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Just search, compressed or compressed win, et...there are not that many and it leads you to here.
https://f95zone.to/threads/young-again-season-2-ch-3-zargon_games.56677/post-8768083
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Anyone has info about next update? It's been 2 months without update . I don't have patreon but someone maybe have and provide something
You can find the latest news on Patreon, Subscribestar or also on Discord if you aren't a subscriber, I'm always active there.
I continue to log in to this forum from time to time, but due to some things that have happened, I've decided not to participate in this thread anymore.