HTML Abandoned Young Marcus - Expanded [v0.10] [Randiel]

[faerakhasa]

I fully understand if it would be too complex to code, but if we are giving suggestions I would love to have a setting at the start to remove your mother. I don't mind that there is bisexual content with mum and dad, to each their kinks, but since I don't use that option I actually feel a bit uncomfortable with the hot incest content. Marcus, dude, why are you having a loud threesome with your dad and bro in your room while your mum is reading a book in the living room? Self restraint, Marcus. Go have an orgy at the gym or something.

You could change the opinion requirements to go outside at night to dad only to make coding easier, and have an option to start with your parents divorced (and that's why you are moving to a new house, for instance). As a plus, you could go visit mum after school and you have the possibility to add new hot Stepfather and Stepbrother (stepbrothers? twin stepbrothers?) content eventually.

It would also be nice to have more people corrupting poor innocent start game Marcus. In the game it seems is is Marcus the one doing all the corruption, either of himself or others. Even the friend at school from the base game waits until you initiate the more naught scenes yourself (once you are more corrupted). The only one who did something like it was Jack and you removed it in his rework. Teachers, the coach, older classmates, maybe your stepfamily? People who lead Marcus down the path, basically.

 

[SissyLin]

Thank you a lot for this bug fix!!! I can finally play all the ways and reach all endings! It's one of the best games i ever play in a long time/ I hope you have more ideas to write something special for us, little perverts))

 

[randiel]

I fully understand if it would be too complex to code, but if we are giving suggestions I would love to have a setting at the start to remove your mother. I don't mind that there is bisexual content with mum and dad, to each their kinks, but since I don't use that option I actually feel a bit uncomfortable with the hot incest content. Marcus, dude, why are you having a loud threesome with your dad and bro in your room while your mum is reading a book in the living room? Self restraint, Marcus. Go have an orgy at the gym or something.

You could change the opinion requirements to go outside at night to dad only to make coding easier, and have an option to start with your parents divorced (and that's why you are moving to a new house, for instance). As a plus, you could go visit mum after school and you have the possibility to add new hot Stepfather and Stepbrother (stepbrothers? twin stepbrothers?) content eventually.

It would also be nice to have more people corrupting poor innocent start game Marcus. In the game it seems is is Marcus the one doing all the corruption, either of himself or others. Even the friend at school from the base game waits until you initiate the more naught scenes yourself (once you are more corrupted). The only one who did something like it was Jack and you removed it in his rework. Teachers, the coach, older classmates, maybe your stepfamily? People who lead Marcus down the path, basically.

For mom part: removing parts of this game is... problematic. There are so many dependencies that may brake a lot of scenes that I don't want to go that way. Overall I like the idea (especially a way for "help me step-bro, I'm stuck in washing machine" )
For corruption part: yes, I made Marcus a bit more sluttier (is that even a proper word?....checking...oh, it is) as it make all the scenes so much easier to code. In the end (well technically a begining of the game) I want to add a justification why he is like this now but that will come only when I add uncle part. I don't want to say more for now

Thank you a lot for this bug fix!!! I can finally play all the ways and reach all endings! It's one of the best games i ever play in a long time/ I hope you have more ideas to write something special for us, little perverts))

Thanks SissyLin
You can check Future Plan in first post to see the "To Do" list so you will know what to expect. Plus some surprises along the way, depending on what my wild imagination will think of
You can also add some of your own ideas. I won't promise to include them but I'll definetly think about it

 

[Craig707]

Thank you so much for what you've done with this game, Randiel. It was always good, but you've taken it to another level. I can't believe how much content you've put in there.
In playing through the latest version, I've been coming across bugs - pictures not appearing, the odd error in the code - as well as the odd typo, and I've been correcting them as I go along (I find it enhances my gameplay - sorry). Would you like a copy of my updated file with the bug/error fixes that I've done? Unfortunately, I didn't list what I have corrected but it's mostly things like changing .gif to .webp, and adjusting the odd error where I've come across it (Greg >> Tony). I haven't done the school path yet - I had the protagonist at 20 years old to see if you'd done anything with his hot boss, but I see that's not been touched yet.

Thanks again for what you're doing here. It's great to see a game that represents a MM reality a bit more.

 

[randiel]

Thank you so much for what you've done with this game, Randiel. It was always good, but you've taken it to another level. I can't believe how much content you've put in there.
In playing through the latest version, I've been coming across bugs - pictures not appearing, the odd error in the code - as well as the odd typo, and I've been correcting them as I go along (I find it enhances my gameplay - sorry). Would you like a copy of my updated file with the bug/error fixes that I've done? Unfortunately, I didn't list what I have corrected but it's mostly things like changing .gif to .webp, and adjusting the odd error where I've come across it (Greg >> Tony). I haven't done the school path yet - I had the protagonist at 20 years old to see if you'd done anything with his hot boss, but I see that's not been touched yet.

Thanks again for what you're doing here. It's great to see a game that represents a MM reality a bit more.

Certainly, send it to me please. FYI, you can also submit any error/typo/issue you encounter directly in the game via "Submit a ticket"

It later lands in my excel and it is much easier to manage what was fixed and what still waits for the fix.
There is nothing yet done with work I plan to correct it in next update.

 

[Craig707]

Certainly, send it to me please. FYI, you can also submit any error/typo/issue you encounter directly in the game via "Submit a ticket"
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It later lands in my excel and it is much easier to manage what was fixed and what still waits for the fix.
There is nothing yet done with work I plan to correct it in next update.

I'll happily send it on. Shall I just attach it to a message here in the thread or do you want me to send it by a different path?

And thank you again for what you've created/modified so far.

 

[randiel]

I'll happily send it on. Shall I just attach it to a message here in the thread or do you want me to send it by a different path?

And thank you again for what you've created/modified so far.

Up to you. You can send it via direct message, there is option to send attachments there.

 

[Craig707]

I can't find a direct message option anywhere. I'm not sure if it's because I've been a lurker rather than active particpant on here, and direct messaging is a perk of being active. Here it is; hope it helps.

 

[randiel]

I can't find a direct message option anywhere. I'm not sure if it's because I've been a lurker rather than active particpant on here, and direct messaging is a perk of being active. Here it is; hope it helps.

Thanks, will take a look

Direct message is in top right corner. I had problems finding it first as well

 

[Deleted member 2666402]

Thanks, will take a look

Direct message is in top right corner. I had problems finding it first as well
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And now you are F95 support!?!? What don't you do?

Unruly

 

[randiel]

I'm talented in many ways plus I really like helping people. I wanted to become a teacher when I was young but looking at how kids these days treat them I'm glad I didn't.

 

[FartingRainbows]

Secretary Job > You don't need Russian lessons if you have google translator
Russian Text = "Мы вам макет отправили еще три недели назад, редиски. Как вы умудрились его снова потерять? Я заебался уже, серьезно. Ищите сами.

С наилучшими пожеланиями, раб Божий
Артём."
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Google Translation = "We sent you a model three weeks ago, radishes. How did you manage to lose it again? I'm fucked up already, seriously. Look for yourself.

Best wishes, servant of God
Artyom. "
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Yes, I cheated ..hehe

 

[FartingRainbows]

I normally don't like Text Based games (if they can be called a 'game' - to me they're just a choose-your-adventure-story (book). TB games are my number 1 least favorite... but... the Tags, screenshots, and description got my attention, thus I downloaded it and played it for HOURS. I (think) I got 2 endings - 1 is definitely an ending: the "Army Wife" one because it clearly said "ending"....., the other I'm pretty sure is either a bug or there just hadn't been any content added to move forward yet - it's where you play in 'The Castle'.. after getting sexual tortured in a (raunchy) BDSM way, Jeff says goodbye, you leave, but cannot leave the Castle = there's no "Go Home" button...., so basically, once you play the Castle, you're forced to 'back, back, back, back,, all the way thru to where you're in the city; thus losing all contributions of being in the Castle.
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Thank you for the cheats button... not only did it save my bacon numerous times, but it also let me fool around in game and in certain areas a lot longer to let me get the feel of the whole game to let me know what I'm in for when I do try to do future plays without cheating whatsoever.
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Keep up the good work, I have this game bookmarked (but not on notifications) for future updates. I feel you've done a better job than 95% of TB games that have come before it. Although I did get stuck after the 1st hour; it kept me going around in circles, thus is why I had to resort to the cheats button to see where I was going wrong - now I know, I should be able to play without cheats = I know where to go now for enhancements and fun
What I also love more about this than 95% b4 it is the amount of pictures (gifs) there are in one page .. most TB's have just one and most times just a still shot.
I got the fright of my life when the 1st 3min video played (not expecting there to be any, and not seen videos in a TB before) because up until that point, the game is dead silent, then all of a sudden two guys are moaning in orgasm at volume 30 - I had to VERY QUICKLY turn sound down - although my mum knows I'm gay, I still, in my 40's, get embarrassed when watching porn in her presence (which is only naturally)
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It's late at night for me, thus I cannot think clearly enough to write a very good opinion about this 'game'? and other things... so for anyone reading this that wants to know if this game is worth downloading / playing!? .. I say "YES!", especially from me that is a person that thinks 95% of Text Based games are just shit!!!... they're too samey with no original idea(s). This game has a strong kinky raunchy story and the pictures to go with them. It's a TB game that it's the pictures / gifs / videos that dictates to story rather than the other-way-round ... There!, I said it: Pictures dictate the story, not the story dictates the pictures. Okay, I'm happy with that, so I'll end it there. Happy playing you future potential unsuspecting players

 

[randiel]

I normally don't like Text Based games (if they can be called a 'game' - to me they're just a choose-your-adventure-story (book). TB games are my number 1 least favorite... but... the Tags, screenshots, and description got my attention, thus I downloaded it and played it for HOURS. I (think) I got 2 endings - 1 is definitely an ending: the "Army Wife" one because it clearly said "ending"....., the other I'm pretty sure is either a bug or there just hadn't been any content added to move forward yet - it's where you play in 'The Castle'.. after getting sexual tortured in a (raunchy) BDSM way, Jeff says goodbye, you leave, but cannot leave the Castle = there's no "Go Home" button...., so basically, once you play the Castle, you're forced to 'back, back, back, back,, all the way thru to where you're in the city; thus losing all contributions of being in the Castle.
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Thank you for the cheats button... not only did it save my bacon numerous times, but it also let me fool around in game and in certain areas a lot longer to let me get the feel of the whole game to let me know what I'm in for when I do try to do future plays without cheating whatsoever.
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Keep up the good work, I have this game bookmarked (but not on notifications) for future updates. I feel you've done a better job than 95% of TB games that have come before it. Although I did get stuck after the 1st hour; it kept me going around in circles, thus is why I had to resort to the cheats button to see where I was going wrong - now I know, I should be able to play without cheats = I know where to go now for enhancements and fun
What I also love more about this than 95% b4 it is the amount of pictures (gifs) there are in one page .. most TB's have just one and most times just a still shot.
I got the fright of my life when the 1st 3min video played (not expecting there to be any, and not seen videos in a TB before) because up until that point, the game is dead silent, then all of a sudden two guys are moaning in orgasm at volume 30 - I had to VERY QUICKLY turn sound down - although my mum knows I'm gay, I still, in my 40's, get embarrassed when watching porn in her presence (which is only naturally)
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It's late at night for me, thus I cannot think clearly enough to write a very good opinion about this 'game'? and other things... so for anyone reading this that wants to know if this game is worth downloading / playing!? .. I say "YES!", especially from me that is a person that thinks 95% of Text Based games are just shit!!!... they're too samey with no original idea(s). This game has a strong kinky raunchy story and the pictures to go with them. It's a TB game that it's the pictures / gifs / videos that dictates to story rather than the other-way-round ... There!, I said it: Pictures dictate the story, not the story dictates the pictures. Okay, I'm happy with that, so I'll end it there. Happy playing you future potential unsuspecting players

Thank you so much for this Posts like that is what keeps me going.
Game is still in development so sadly there will be bugs here and there. You can also always use "Escape hatch" to teleport home if you are stuck in a loop. Other cheats helps with testing and lets be honest, this is a porn game, so cheats are for people not interested in grinding relations with other characters and just want to jump to a fuck scene.
And a good point about videos, I may need to add a warning somewhere for that Game is mostly silent (as it was in the original) so I wanted to spice things a little here and there with some sound effect. It is elaborate way of saying "I just wanted to share my favorite porn clips". I would like to add more of these but movies are much heavier than gifs (or webp animation) so sadly there are not a lot of them.

 

[FartingRainbows]

Thank you so much for this Posts like that is what keeps me going.
Game is still in development so sadly there will be bugs here and there. You can also always use "Escape hatch" to teleport home if you are stuck in a loop. Other cheats helps with testing and lets be honest, this is a porn game, so cheats are for people not interested in grinding relations with other characters and just want to jump to a fuck scene.
And a good point about videos, I may need to add a warning somewhere for that Game is mostly silent (as it was in the original) so I wanted to spice things a little here and there with some sound effect. It is elaborate way of saying "I just wanted to share my favorite porn clips". I would like to add more of these but movies are much heavier than gifs (or webp animation) so sadly there are not a lot of them.

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= You're most welcome - Constructive criticism goes a long way. And notice I only mentioned the positives?, simply because I'm sure you're fully aware of the negatives, thus no need for me to mention unless it truly is a real bug / issue / drama.
= Not once did I click the "Escape hatch" button because I thought it's the "Quit Game" button ..lol.. Now I know. Cool. Bonus. Thank you
= "not interested in grinding relations with other characters" - I'm an only child, but often fantasize about having a brother I could've experimented with = Bromance In fact, that's the only reason why I download game ' "OOH!!, I get to do things with my brother!? KINKY galore !!!!!!"
= Your favorites are my favorites too I often save a lot of gifs to my hard drive for replay value that I can use later for my lonely nights - I started doing that years ago when the internet would cost me $100 for 10GB, thus I'd often go days or weeks with no internet (when the 10Gigs would run out before next payday), thus the porn pics & gifs & mp4's in my hard drive kept me sane in the meantime ..lol.
= Please keep going with the Sound FX = more the merrier .
= (on the internet) 99% of porn videos I don't like, and the ones I do, I seem to get sick of them pretty quick.. so yes, I love still shots where I can use my imagination to make my own stor(ies) around it, and often multiple stories for different scenarios - I love gifs because it plays a very kinky scene in a loop.. I often think "I wish we could do that in real-life without exhausting ourselves. - and I love mp4's because often it'd be the best 10 seconds of an entire video = the start or the middle or the end is the best part of the 10 minute video it was taken from.
= I noticed in the game you used some gifs that I have almost the same of.., either a worse version -or- another scene from same video.. so perhaps I could message you some gifs from my HD collection? I haven't tried to see if you can be messaged, yet.
= What I also love about this game is, there isn't six ton of words to wade through, you kept it short and simple = "Less is more". Also, the pictures take up more space on the page than writing - I HATE when it's the other way round = those are the TB games I try desperately to stay away from. But there was one I did like but for the life of me I cannot remember the name of.. it has like 5 different layout versions, turns you male to female thru sissification, and roaming around in a 3 floored dungeon.
= *Spoiler* - If people want to jump straight to pics and gifs etc, I recommend them going thru the game files and look at each individual image file.., at least then they can save those images to their HD for a later fap use "I'll just save this one for later!" = Metal Gear Solid reference
= I'll end this reply on a funny. .... You know those times when you want to go to a picture theatre to watch a movie, thus you read the plot about those movies but didn't see the genre of it until you rock up!? And at that point you think to yourself, "Fuck it!.. I came all this way and I'm not going home now, so I'll just give this movie a try.. I know I'll most likely hate it.. but, hey, at least I spent a night out not complaining about being stuck at home bored shitless - you watch the movie to the end, and then in total surprise you're left feeling you want MORE !!!!, hoping the Creator does a sequel (or in your case, adds more of the same contents with a few more kinks, fetishes, and raunchy places) = Well, that's me, that's how I feel after playing your TB game.
= I'll finish this reply with a gif that best describes my feelings and I felt at the end (though, after doing multiple endings) about this game story with very kinky imagery content.

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[randiel]

= I noticed in the game you used some gifs that I have almost the same of.., either a worse version -or- another scene from same video.. so perhaps I could message you some gifs from my HD collection? I haven't tried to see if you can be messaged, yet.

Yes please, I sometimes struggle to find the best gif as for some kinks they are really hard to come by (for example cops). You can send them via message (see few posts above). I'm not sure if there is a size limit there (i'm guessing there is), then if you want you can upload it somewhere and send me the link

= What I also love about this game is, there isn't six ton of words to wade through, you kept it short and simple = "Less is more". Also, the pictures take up more space on the page than writing - I HATE when it's the other way round = those are the TB games I try desperately to stay away from. But there was one I did like but for the life of me I cannot remember the name of.. it has like 5 different layout versions, turns you male to female thru sissification, and roaming around in a 3 floored dungeon.

I never liked writting a lot, I was always straight to the point kind a guy. Never had it in me to create elaborate descriptions or painting the picture with words. You need to have a gift for that like Unruly.
Personally I also prefer to have more visials in the game but sometimes a cool erotic story will make you harder than any porn movie.

 

[jinfulun]

Can't wait to see what will you do next!

 

[Deleted member 2666402]

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= You're most welcome - Constructive criticism goes a long way. And notice I only mentioned the positives?, simply because I'm sure you're fully aware of the negatives, thus no need for me to mention unless it truly is a real bug / issue / drama.
= Not once did I click the "Escape hatch" button because I thought it's the "Quit Game" button ..lol.. Now I know. Cool. Bonus. Thank you
= "not interested in grinding relations with other characters" - I'm an only child, but often fantasize about having a brother I could've experimented with = Bromance In fact, that's the only reason why I download game ' "OOH!!, I get to do things with my brother!? KINKY galore !!!!!!"
= Your favorites are my favorites too I often save a lot of gifs to my hard drive for replay value that I can use later for my lonely nights - I started doing that years ago when the internet would cost me $100 for 10GB, thus I'd often go days or weeks with no internet (when the 10Gigs would run out before next payday), thus the porn pics & gifs & mp4's in my hard drive kept me sane in the meantime ..lol.
= Please keep going with the Sound FX = more the merrier .
= (on the internet) 99% of porn videos I don't like, and the ones I do, I seem to get sick of them pretty quick.. so yes, I love still shots where I can use my imagination to make my own stor(ies) around it, and often multiple stories for different scenarios - I love gifs because it plays a very kinky scene in a loop.. I often think "I wish we could do that in real-life without exhausting ourselves. - and I love mp4's because often it'd be the best 10 seconds of an entire video = the start or the middle or the end is the best part of the 10 minute video it was taken from.
= I noticed in the game you used some gifs that I have almost the same of.., either a worse version -or- another scene from same video.. so perhaps I could message you some gifs from my HD collection? I haven't tried to see if you can be messaged, yet.
= What I also love about this game is, there isn't six ton of words to wade through, you kept it short and simple = "Less is more". Also, the pictures take up more space on the page than writing - I HATE when it's the other way round = those are the TB games I try desperately to stay away from. But there was one I did like but for the life of me I cannot remember the name of.. it has like 5 different layout versions, turns you male to female thru sissification, and roaming around in a 3 floored dungeon.
= *Spoiler* - If people want to jump straight to pics and gifs etc, I recommend them going thru the game files and look at each individual image file.., at least then they can save those images to their HD for a later fap use "I'll just save this one for later!" = Metal Gear Solid reference
= I'll end this reply on a funny. .... You know those times when you want to go to a picture theatre to watch a movie, thus you read the plot about those movies but didn't see the genre of it until you rock up!? And at that point you think to yourself, "Fuck it!.. I came all this way and I'm not going home now, so I'll just give this movie a try.. I know I'll most likely hate it.. but, hey, at least I spent a night out not complaining about being stuck at home bored shitless - you watch the movie to the end, and then in total surprise you're left feeling you want MORE !!!!, hoping the Creator does a sequel (or in your case, adds more of the same contents with a few more kinks, fetishes, and raunchy places) = Well, that's me, that's how I feel after playing your TB game.
= I'll finish this reply with a gif that best describes my feelings and I felt at the end (though, after doing multiple endings) about this game story with very kinky imagery content.

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“Six ton of words”
I love the post...but it hurts. Hurt me again, please.

 

[FartingRainbows]

“Six ton of words”
I love the post...but it hurts. Hurt me again, please.

"Hurt me again, please."
How rough would you like that.?
Sorry, I've not played your game(s) yet.

 

[lovedragon·long]

很高兴这个游戏还在更新，希望有一天谷歌翻译（任何翻译软件都可以）可以彻底打破语言不通导致的隔阂。