VN Ren'Py Reload My Empty Heart [v0.2] [InjectLifeOnline]

[MrBenny]

Hmm...femdom, and lesbian content.

Well, I didn't see Gina's muff dive scene as femdom, it was more like a selfish lover moment (she was polite to MC through out their conversations, she just didn't reciprocate after MC made her cum hard). So...I have a few questions, how much of the story will femdom / lesbian type content be (1% to 20+%?)?

Though, it's great to see there was a choice to make femdom avoidable with Gina (But is she a femdom only Li, or if picking no to FD...will she be a normal Li later in the story?), as I'm truly not a fan of playing a pussy MC, or taking part in any kinks that treat MC like shit (cucking as well). And if a player chooses to eat Gina's pussy, does that enable all femdom content with her and all other femdom content with others (or it was just for that scene and character)?

Your project seems great so far, minus a few grammar issues I've noticed. Thanks in advance for sharing your project with the community, and answering questions.

 

[MrBenny]

Tim Hortons is the last bastion of just regular coffee.

A fellow Canadian? And or, is Tim's now in the US, if your not Canadian?

Stupid facts... A medium double double contains 14 grams of sugar (3.5 teaspoons) in addition to 4 grams of sugar from their high fat cream. And a large sized double double contains 24 grams of sugar (six teaspoons...SIX?) in addition to more sugar derived from their branded milk or cream used with their coffees.

After knowing this, I don't say double double anymore. And I rarely drink coffee now , and I will only get the milk and sugar on the side.

 

[Jimayo]

A fellow Canadian? And or, is Tim's now in the US, if your not Canadian?

Canadian. Though about 10-15 years ago I looked at a north american tim hortons map and they had some in and around new york. Dunno if they still exist.

 

[goulet1995]

A fellow Canadian? And or, is Tim's now in the US, if your not Canadian?

Stupid facts... A medium double double contains 14 grams of sugar (3.5 teaspoons) in addition to 4 grams of sugar from their high fat cream. And a large sized double double contains 24 grams of sugar (six teaspoons) in addition to more sugar derived from their milk or cream used with their coffees.

After knowing this, I don't say double double anymore. I get it on the side.

never been to one but i think there is some near me in Massachusetts my area is pretty dominated by dunkins though

nevermind just looked it up its over 150 miles away dont know why i hear adds on a local radio station seems like a a waste

 

[Hellspawn_Al Simmons]

What kind of pathetic excuse for an MC is this? Why is this retard forgiving and befriending the same people that wanted to torture and/or kill him? It makes no sense for someone seeking revenge to act like this.

 

[drifter139]

I have 2 problems with this game. 1st problem is it's difficult to understand what is being said most of the time. not sure if English is your first language or not. maybe look into getting someone to proofread before releasing updates. 2nd is the fact we can see MC has a clear athletic build but despite that, is shown to easily be brought down by people half his size and weight. maybe find a way to retcon that into them being more experienced in terms of fighting because MC getting beat up by a girl he clearly towers over is annoying

 

[MD27]

It was fun to read even with some inconsistencies and all the treachery and bitches like Kelly ( I'm only referring to her trusting her clearly soab of a dad over the guy that just saved her life and seemed to have a soft spot for if even for a sec, the whole attitude/personality is a whole other thing and fairly understandable given context), but at least MCs behavior now seems to be one of an young adult compared to how ridiculous was at the start, even with lots of cuestionable life choices, God... hope the way he's written keeps improving, or not maybe that's his thing, a lot of dumb MCs games out there.
Can't wait for him to have his revenge and start exposing the secrets. Good luck

 

[MisterNephilim]

I'm feeling very frustrated because I can see the potential, but every character acts like they belong on the lower half of the IQ curve, with the MC smack at the 0,1% bottom.

Edit: Also, Nadia best girl

 

[fishbrain]

Canadian. Though about 10-15 years ago I looked at a north american tim hortons map and they had some in and around new york. Dunno if they still exist.

They do, we have one in my small town in midwestern Ohio.

 

[Inject Life Online]

there are some inconsistencies

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Again. Thank you for you comment and for helping me out with my project! I'm pretty sure my story has some leeks because of the different and many paths who can choose. Though some of your suggestions maybe are false.

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Thank you for playing my game. And I'm sorry if you are disappointed about the mistakes.
Feel free to come back anytime.

 

[Boehser Onkel]

Again. Thank you for you comment and for helping me out with my project! I'm pretty sure my story has some leeks because of the different and many paths who can choose. Though some of your suggestions maybe are false.

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Thank you for playing my game. And I'm sorry if you are disappointed about the mistakes.
Feel free to come back anytime.

my bad about 5th - i forgot to change the var back here after testing

and yes i will play again later
dont see my comments as offence or w/e
i speak bluntly and open - i dont like sugarcoating
as i said -gl with you project

 

[Inject Life Online]

worst agent ever

he got twice a gun at the kidnapping
and atleast at the second one he should escape
and what does he do? give the gun back ...
and talking about trust to one of his kidnappers....

a bit later

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idk if its your first game , or the first time writing , but really - the story itself has so many flaws
so many things makes no sense , or are out of place
like this
j "But not any time soon, it will take some time; I am not sure how long, but let's say longer than a month."
how does the aunt know how long it takes the mc to have free time to visit her?

........... i may take another look if this got a rework/overhaul - at this state i dont want to bother my brain with it

Inject Life Online

gl with your project

Well my English is not so good. And looks like proofreader doesn't understand that as well. Actually she was talking about when

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[Avaron1974]

One thing I don't get is he wants to train to be a secret agent yet he still acts like a 14 year old virgin with brain damage.

 

[Canto Forte]

This game, as with others, is written with strong asshole female characters,
no actual reason or other for MC to be their rag doll, yet the game makes MC as such.

This is to counter the agency of players: MC cannot initiate a relationship,
he has to get scraps and be used by girls to even get on their radar.

This is one ongoing dilemma for many games: how to make MC not come on to a girl,
even tho players want to actually have options for interactions and MC clearly,
with the plot and the story and the intrigue pointing right into that direction,
where MC would interact with a girl and get something out of it, ask her and expect
some kind of favorable reaction from that girl.

Sometimes the banter is so cringe and cutthroat, only someone effectively looking to
hook up, get their rocks off or simply play out their sex addiction would engage and not run
off to never come back to the convo.

 

[Inject Life Online]

is the harem going to be forced or can we pick which LIs we wanna be with, also will lesbianism be forced or a choice

Thank you for your comment. I can't render every scene with every character in this game. This will take forever. But Before an erotic scene, you will be asked if you want to follow this path or not.

 

[Hercule_Poirot]

So..."Gino" Valentine has a penis? (At some point while grabbing her ass, he seems to have misgendered her)

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

A fellow Canadian? And or, is Tim's now in the US, if your not Canadian?

Stupid facts... A medium double double contains 14 grams of sugar (3.5 teaspoons) in addition to 4 grams of sugar from their high fat cream. And a large sized double double contains 24 grams of sugar (six teaspoons...SIX?) in addition to more sugar derived from their branded milk or cream used with their coffees.

After knowing this, I don't say double double anymore. And I rarely drink coffee now , and I will only get the milk and sugar on the side.

Sugar is good for you tho. Everyone loves Sugar.

 

[baklol]

well got mexico filter in int

 

[Hitotih]

Am I the only one who can't download torrent files anymore?

 

[bobdickgus]

Sugar is good for you tho. Everyone loves Sugar.

People love alcohol, nicotine, meth and cocaine! are they good for you?

Still better than being a dumbass or into femdom I suppose.